Martial Arts Starts from the Skill Panel

For a good setting, it is best to have a positive outlook on life. The protagonist should not have his brain filled with water. The most important thing is not to pretend to be more than a slap in the face. The supporting character should have a normal mind and not always think about the third way.

I have watched most of it, and the plot in the early stage is relatively weak. The actions of the characters are too detailed, the communication between the characters is too detailed, and the fighting actions of the characters are too detailed. Presumably the author wanted to write a traditional martial arts world, a world where you can show off your skills and have a universal moral outlook. However, the too long-winded plot will not only seriously drag down the readers. To be honest, when you use details to describe irrelevant content, your later plot will not only be reduced, but also difficult to write. I hope the author can re-read his early manuscripts and optimize his content. How to use limited numbers to cleverly combine plot lines and plot twists and turns is the real beginning of an excellent novel.

A gang just recruits little brats as apprentices, and they do it just like the civil service examination, and they also practice machine arts and secret medicine. It's not funny. How can a 10-year-old kid have so many abilities? Luo Liba's conversation with a 10-year-old kid is just a 10-year-old kid. How come there are so many red tape nonsense? A little deacon orders his subordinates to do things and the subordinates just answer yes. There are also all kinds of instructions from Deacon Jin Zun. Luo Liba is embarrassed to watch. He writes a comment and will be removed from the shelves. If you don't mind the verbosity, you can watch it

The plot is too long. You write a single chapter for one case and one case. Isn't this just a combination of words?

It seems that the eyes of the general public are sharp, there are a lot of comments, and there is a family who is not polite in their conversation. It is a bit embarrassing for people in the countryside to say it, and it does not suit the background.

It seems that I still have a good eye. After reading four chapters, when I saw that the antidote was called the secret antidote, I wondered if this book was too watery (generally, people who like to use secrets are the kind of people who like water, or like to exaggerate), but when I looked in the comment area, I saw that there was something really watery 🤭. Slipping away. . .

It's too long-winded and has too many meaningless conversations~

The plot is too slow, detailed and detailed, and very tiring to watch. Moreover, what we want to see is you practicing martial arts, not doing some exoskeleton armor or the like. You have obviously joined a gang, but you are not practicing martial arts, so why are you doing scientific research? Martial arts is the foundation, everything else serves this purpose, don't put the cart before the horse.

The dialogue in this book has a strong sense of dissonance. How confident the author is now, when he has experience in the future, he will feel how ridiculous this book is.

Author, in fact, sleeping is also a skill. Deep sleep helps the body recover and harmonize. Why is there no such thing on your dashboard? I've obviously been sleeping for more than ten years.

It's a pretty world of warriors. What's the use of being awesome in foreign affairs if you don't strengthen yourself?

This book becomes useless as I read it. Is it really martial arts to keep doing mechas? Shouldn't great power be attributed to oneself? What about the martial arts you promised?

The author chose the subject matter well, wrote very seriously, and worked hard to cater to the market and readers, but the dialogue between the characters was too old-fashioned and even stereotyped. Obviously he is a gangster, but his tone of voice is like that of a wealthy official in the capital. I don't know whether it is because of his writing skills or because of deliberate writing. If it is deliberate, it is not necessary. Since it caters to the market and readers, it should be catered to the market and readers thoroughly!

The pace of this book is too slow. I looked at the table of contents and saw that it was always about mechas. Brother, you must have chosen the wrong section. You are a martial artist and you often write about mechas. There was even a golden mecha user later. I suggest you select the science fiction section. Those who write about martial arts do not practice martial arts and often write about various mechas. What do you mean?

Too much delay was the biggest failure of this book, so I gave up. If the author had the courage to make a major change, he would be popular, but at this pace... Emm

There can be at least 2000 chapters without entering the palace. Bring cooling oil or other relief items before reading. This book will be of great help to sleep.

He spoke with dignity, and his family members were extremely polite, like nobles in the royal palace.

I suspect that the author switched jobs from a female channel🙂🙂🙂

The plot is draggy, but otherwise there's nothing wrong with it.

There is indeed a little delay in the early stage, but the setting is okay and the plot is not bad. Based on my many years of experience, it is considered a good idea, but why are there so many negative reviews? I don't understand. If it was really bad, there shouldn't be a few reviews. Are you being led away?

I read two chapters and found that there was a problem with the writing, so I wanted to read the comments. How is the plot? If the plot is good, I can still puzzle it out by myself even if the words are confusing. But after reading the comments, hahaha, I still don't bother myself. Hahaha

Missed a good start, no priority is given later, supporting characters are too heavy on the subject

Hey, I found that in today's novels, one needs to memorize a lot of martial arts levels. I'm so tired. Why don't you just change your name? Is this a feature?

After reading this novel, I came to the following argument: There are no bad people in the other world, they are all good people! The identification is completed! !

I'll finish the book as I continue to support it 😰

The plot of this article is really slow to move forward, and the talking, which is about the world of warriors, is all written in a literate manner, which seems very inconsistent and awkward~

There are too many characters and emotions, and it's too tedious to write over and over again.

How do you get everything to have an instruction manual? Is this for game adaptation? It's so painful to watch

It's a bit awkward to engage in mechas in the world of martial arts

There has been no update for four days. You don't know how to gg anymore 😅😅