Martial Arts Begins with a Skill Panel

A gang just recruits little brats as apprentices, and they do it just like the civil service examination, and they also practice machine arts and secret medicine. It's not funny. How can a 10-year-old kid have so many abilities? Luo Liba's conversation with a 10-year-old kid is just a 10-year-old kid. How come there are so many red tape nonsense? A little deacon orders his subordinates to do things and the subordinates just answer yes. There are also all kinds of instructions from Deacon Jin Zun. Luo Liba is embarrassed to watch. He writes a comment and will be removed from the shelves. If you don't mind the verbosity, you can watch it

The plot is too long. You write a single chapter for one case and one case. Isn't this just a combination of words?

For a good setting, it is best to have a positive outlook on life. The protagonist should not have his brain filled with water. The most important thing is not to pretend to be more than a slap in the face. The supporting character should have a normal mind and not always think about the third way.

It seems that the eyes of the general public are sharp, there are a lot of comments, and there is a family who is not polite in their conversation. It is a bit embarrassing for people in the countryside to say it, and it does not suit the background.

The plot is too slow, detailed and detailed, and very tiring to watch. Moreover, what we want to see is you practicing martial arts, not doing some exoskeleton armor or the like. You have obviously joined a gang, but you are not practicing martial arts, so why are you doing scientific research? Martial arts is the foundation, everything else serves this purpose, don't put the cart before the horse.

It's too long-winded and has too many meaningless conversations~

It seems that I still have a good eye. After reading four chapters, when I saw that the antidote was called the secret antidote, I wondered if this book was too watery (generally, people who like to use secrets are the kind of people who like water, or like to exaggerate), but when I looked in the comment area, I saw that there was something really watery 🤭. Slipping away. . .

The dialogue in this book has a strong sense of dissonance. How confident the author is now, when he has experience in the future, he will feel how ridiculous this book is.

The author chose the subject matter well, wrote very seriously, and worked hard to cater to the market and readers, but the dialogue between the characters was too old-fashioned and even stereotyped. Obviously he is a gangster, but his tone of voice is like that of a wealthy official in the capital. I don't know whether it is because of his writing skills or because of deliberate writing. If it is deliberate, it is not necessary. Since it caters to the market and readers, it should be catered to the market and readers thoroughly!

It's a pretty world of warriors. What's the use of being awesome in foreign affairs if you don't strengthen yourself?