Supreme Peak

This book is my first time writing. Because the plot is too old-fashioned, I couldn't sign a contract, so I plan to start a new book. Unfortunately, the book's grand world view and plot ended before they were developed. Thank you to my friends who read my book.

The description of the battle scenes is good. I have saved it and hope to visit again.

Just reading your comments, I don't find it attractive.

It is best for the protagonist to appear early. The description of the scene and background in the first two hundred words is a bit too much. The first generation of the protagonist is not strong enough. Unless you are a master, do not use the description of a teenager to write about the first appearance of the protagonist.