Rebirth: Starting a Business with His Father

The book is good ~ looking forward to the appearance of the heroine

The author's storyline is okay. But I need to practice my writing a little bit. And if you want your grades to go up, you'd better review the manuscript again. Correct the typos. The details still need to be described. It's a bit like a running account now. The most important thing is to have a smooth tone. This will ensure that your grades will improve. Otherwise, if you don't get any grades when you write, you will also be uninterested in writing. It is recommended to spend two or three days reviewing the manuscript.

The article looks pretty good, keep writing, I've invested in it

I was originally planning to invest, but I found out that it was in the first person, and I lost interest immediately. If you want to get good grades, it is best to change it to the third person as soon as possible.

The beginning is full of hatred and bitterness, which is actually quite boring. The industry is showing off and the Internet company is showing off. Isn't it all about the protagonist's career? Who cares how your protagonist is reborn?

The writing is okay, please keep updating 🪖

Please update😭

The author's homework completion in the past two days has not been satisfactory, please work harder 🪖

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Today is good, third update, come on, don't be a eunuch 🤭

Thanks to the suggestions from readers, the first person has been changed to the third person 😁

The beginning is a little bit poisonous, which makes people a little bit intolerable!

Changed the third person, this book is really good

It's boring to update it once a day, so you should update it slowly. Save it for now and read it later. You might forget it.

There must be major changes ahead. Don't just change me to Liu Sicheng. You look so awkward now. People who are so awkward have been poisoned by you.

Keep updating, and at the same time revise the previous deficiencies and pronouns. Please watch the process and look for more deficiencies.