I Am Studying in the World of Immortality

Overall it's pretty good, but before a fight, don't just blindly attack. Many times you have to show up, push through, and then attack from the front when you can obviously attack by surprise.

Read the introduction to this book. Pig Knuckle is the kind of person who practices a lot of exercises. Author Jun: There are too many pig's feet exercises, which is not good

Awesome

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Others can't see the protagonist's cultivation level because you haven't written it yet.

It looks pretty good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Keep it up! Keep updating steadily! Come on! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

Come on, come on, come on, check in

Yes, you should try to keep paying attention

There are so many words, why not put them on the shelves?

Why not call it white and white... Or white and big... White plus black?

The logic is a little poor, the dialogue is a little inconsistent, the routines are old, the protagonist is blindly highlighted, the supporting characters are poorly created, and the pace is too fast. Other writers wish they could write ten chapters in one sentence, but this book wishes it could take ten years to write one chapter. In addition, the highlight is that the protagonist of this book is a real man, which is rare in the current trend of x-competent monk protagonists 🪖