I Became Emperor in the Middle Tang

The most interesting things about the two generations of Shunzong and Xianzong are the two kings Sima and Yuanhe Zhongxing. I hope to see a battle of wits and courage among all parties

Author, your writing is too shabby... This writing style looks weird, like reading a history book, and then inserting what the protagonist did. I feel that the protagonist is too separated from the book, and I feel that the protagonist's thoughts, psychological activities, and political thinking are not reflected at all. The whole story is just a running account of the activities of historical figures, and the activities of the protagonist are added. A running account, such as what so-and-so did, what the protagonist did, and the whole story is not very interesting to read. I suggest the author look at how other historical articles are written, and the protagonist writes too slowly. The title of your book is "Being an Emperor," so your focus should be on the protagonist becoming an emperor and showing off his talents in the emperor's position, rather than writing a lot of space about the protagonist. When there is no status now, this kind of transition will be enough. Otherwise, you have written a hundred chapters and the protagonist's great-grandfather is still an emperor. There is also his grandfather and father in the front. According to the progress of your writing, it will take the turn of the protagonist. I don't know how long it will take. It is estimated that few people can insist on reading to the end. Moreover, the title of your book is "Being an Emperor", which has already screened the readers. Others If you are not interested, you probably won't click in. You have written a lot about the main character when he was a child and before he became an emperor. Readers who come here may also think that your article and title are wrong, and it is not what they like to read. You... I recommend the author to read "The Resurrection of the Tang Dynasty" to see his writing techniques and style. Of course, ignore some plots and harems in this book! Some suggestions for the author

It feels like I'm reading a narrative, the main character is so unclear. Just like writing a composition, there is no center.

The whole story is full of useless plots. It starts by saying that the protagonist should not be too prominent in public, and immediately starts slapping the five- or six-year-old kid in the face for playing with inventions and inventions. Then, before it attracts much attention, he goes to Jiangnan when he is less than ten years old and begins to play romance dramas with beautiful women.

The court and the feudal towns in the Mid-Tang Dynasty can only maintain a balance. It is very difficult for the protagonist to pacify the feudal towns. It is impossible to reduce the feudal lords by relying solely on martial arts. The court's finances must be improved, and eunuchs and traitorous officials must be eliminated. The imperial army was the source of the imperial court's intimidation to the feudal towns. After the Anshi Rebellion, the vassal town continued to expand its army, but the imperial imperial army never increased, making it impossible for the imperial court to quell the rebels, and the emperor went south to seek refuge several times. The Shence Army must be under control, and appropriate points should be used to strengthen the strength of the Shence Army. There were not as many ambitious vassal towns in the Mid-Tang Dynasty as there were in the Late Tang Dynasty. There were only a few major ones. Some vassal towns were pacified with thunderous means to frighten other vassal towns, and then the excessive rights of the vassal towns were slowly taken back. After all, there were still many vassal towns in the Mid-Tang Dynasty that listened to the court. These are just my personal suggestions. After all, I have read so many poems and songs. The vulgar military leaders in the feudal towns will only pick up a big sword and ask for money and officials from the court.

Moreover, in the face of the warlord separatism that emerged in the middle and late Tang Dynasty, and eunuchs killing their lords, shouldn't they focus on military power? Even though Liu Zongyuan and Han Yu were momentary heroes, could they solve the fundamental problem? The Chairman said it well, political power comes from the barrel of a gun, and life and death are decided by human hands. Can they save you and change? The most important thing is to strengthen the weak branches and strengthen the centralization of monarchy.

It's so watery that I can't even see it! I wish I could finish copying the History of Tang Dynasty

The author can read a novel called Shunzong of the Tang Dynasty, or Officials of the Tang Dynasty, which are both novels of this period and are more historically accurate.

I feel that the progress is still too slow. The protagonist now has no political capital and can only be a spectator. He is completely unable to participate in that gorgeous era. I suggest that we can fast forward and describe that era from the perspective of the protagonist. Some things that have nothing to do with the development of the protagonist can be passed through in a few strokes. 🤓

After reading two chapters, the author's writing style is playful and smiling, which is not the type I can accept.