The Swordsman Who Signed in from Nalan Yanran's Boudoir

There is no clear main mission, no clear plot development, everything is random, and that's it. Your wording is still wrong. This is because you never read comments and don't care about typos at all.

Your book is really ugly. I haven't read many chapters. The writing is eloquent. I skipped through the whole process. When I saw Furukawa and Nalan Yanran, they were poisoned to death. I was so drunk Furuhe has a dog-licking character from the beginning to the end. He didn't say anything even when Yun Yun broke off the engagement. It can be seen that his character is very restrained and he will not make any compromises for anything When Furukawa went to Medusa to ask for the Green Lotus Earth Fire, he always had a tough attitude. What's more, for a person like you who is not as good as him, he didn't even bother to use tactics. He directly called him a fighting emperor, showed his cultivation, and then induced him with benefits. It was clear and direct. This is the way Furukawa's character behaves You don't consider anything when writing novels, just rely on YY.

This book is actually okay if you read it as a comic book, but there are two poisonous points that you should dissuade from. The first is the plot of meeting Nalan Yanran, and the second is the plot of meeting Xiao Yan. Especially the plot of meeting Xiao Yan, I suggest the author change it. Just meeting Xiao Yan and having the intention to kill is in danger of being wiped out by the will of the world. This is too much. Although the author later realized this and deliberately adjusted Xiao Yan's halo, the difference between the halo and the halo is actually a poisonous point.

This magical modification is also a bit disgusting. It originally felt the same as the Sharingan. When you change it like this, will one suddenly appear on your head, or a pair? It feels scary(ŐдŐ๑)

The author made a typo at the beginning, but the rest is okay. There are no big poison points, but the little poison points must be kept. However, there are good things in the front. When I get to the three options, I can't help but want to scold the author. I'm really speechless.

What's going on with fantasy now? . Smoky

Author, you are also an old author, why do you have to flatter yourself? Disgusted readers. I hate reading those monks who abuse their masters the most.

What the hell did the author write about, and what kind of image does a swordsman look like? We need to be taught?

I don't want to say anything, I just hope that the logical relationship is clearer. I feel that the writing is a bit messy, the lines are unclear, the protagonist is too talkative, and does not have a clear goal. He is always coming and going, making it a bit confusing 🙂

This book won't be popular just by looking at the introduction, and it's hard to finish it.

Is it okay to read it? I don't dare to read it once I read the comments for fear of being poisoned.

From the beginning to now, I have persisted in reading it and found that he is quite good in terms of daily life and combat rhythm. What can we say about the plot of this interaction between him and the heroine? The writing is very good. It feels very immersive and not abrupt at all

The writing is good, daily writing, just don't take the funny plot too seriously How can I put it, I give you a recommendation vote

I would say that if a grown man is slapped in the mouth by a strange woman, it is definitely not right to fight back, but it is okay to retaliate. Also, the protagonist in the author's novel is too licking, and will lick everyone!

Change the channel, Stop Zombies, Journey to the West, Douluo Dalu, etc. It's really a bit different.

Xiangxiang, the writing is very good, please accept it quickly, Queen.

Chapter 135, this chapter is full of Qiong Yao style, poisonous writing, really poisonous, too poisonous.

It's a pity, I thought it was another excellent fan fiction. Alas╯╰

It's a bad article, but I still keep it on the top of my bookshelf.

Which world does the author's protagonist go to?

I hope that the world behind Dou Po, the author's protagonist, is a more advanced world than Dou Po. It doesn't make sense to go to a martial arts world. It's better to go to a world with high strength to improve your strength than to go to a useless world.

Where are people? Pigeon again?

Why do you feel like there are fewer people watching?

It would be great if some great author wrote a book about the death of time-travelers - look at how these time-travelers commit suicide

The latest one has been banned, I've only seen half of it. Damn it.

Authors, don't forget that if you don't update for seven days, readers' investment will fail. Don't not update.

I'm really looking forward to Ma Liu's update.

Just this, let me wait for a week, the teacher collected the phone