Draw the Qingdi Fruit Tree at the Beginning

It's a pity that such a good idea has to be done in a funny way

I am expressing my opinion, not looking for thorns. The author's book title was good in the early stage, but it may not be able to attract readers in the later stage.

The content is good, but the introduction persuades me to give up, and the title seems to come from the period when there were a lot of mindless and cool articles.

The reflex arc is too long to keep up with the author's ideas. It's so messy.

It feels so confusing. After reading Chapter 25, I didn't understand what the novel was about. What is the progress bar for drawing the Green Emperor Fruit Tree? It became even more confusing after entering the academy. What happens next? I'm a little confused. Have you seen the rest? Let me know.

Sixth

What's going on? I suppressed it in the early stage, but started to attack Zaun in the later stage? Are you a gangster by nature?

New skin——Huaqianyuexia

The first chapter was quite satisfying, but within an hour I didn't want to read it.

My head hurts when I read it. It's such a mess in the virtual world. The first part is pretty good, but the second part didn't make sense to me.

Drunk for you. Source - Three Kingdoms Kill

A punctuation mark breaks the line and leaves a blank line. Doesn't it look awkward to you guys who are following me? There's not much content, there's no plot advancement, and it seems to be very fast-paced.

Your career is too high. You and your readers no longer have a foundation of trust. Why not change your vest?

Forgive me for not understanding, it's really confusing

In the first few chapters, I thought it was just food and grass, and I jumped into the investment window as soon as it opened. But what the hell is behind?

Come on, author, I think highly of you, keep writing, I like it very much

I think the author's writing is very good, and it's one of the few novels I'm willing to pay to read.

It looked good before I went to the academy, but when I went to the academy I felt that the writing was very messy.

What a mess! Can you write well?

It's not good, it doesn't look smooth,

Is this cut? Is this another one of my own?

Can I ask if the words are spaced like this to deceive the number of chapters?

Exactly the same