Confession Under the Tree

After watching most of it, I feel pretty good. I have some small suggestions. At first, I thought it was a first-person novel, but then it changed to something under a tree. As a reader, it felt a bit strange visually. Also, in some sentence descriptions, the author omits the subject. I think that appropriately omitting the subject can make the image in the reader's mind coherent. Omitting too much can easily confuse the viewer as to who said this action or this sentence. You can also correct the typos at the beginning, mainly at the beginning, otherwise you will start to skip the scene soon after you bring it in.

Each subplot is well written, but overall it's not clear what story you want to tell.

I have found her and I gave her one of her favorite flowers. Maybe this is the last time we meet.