Having Multiple Identities in the Film and Television World

One thing to say is that regarding magic and secrets, in Uncle Jiu's era, one could not learn anything fundamental either as a close relative or after a long period of testing, let alone a foreigner. Any foreigner who stood on Chinese soil in that era was a sinner, and even if they were tortured, they would not learn anything. I didn't read it, and the introduction persuaded me to quit.

I feel that it is very inappropriate to forcibly arrange the plot of Uncle Nine. At that time, the Chinese sects even kept their disciples, let alone foreigners, and the protagonist's real name and experience were known to so many people. How could it be avoided by Hydra?

The movie "Legend of Gods and Ghosts" is not bad, but I don't like your setting very much. Because the so-called positive characters in it are all people in other countries who destroy other people's tombs and steal other people's property to bring back to their own country and call it archeology and protection.

😥Uncle Jiu is really the most powerful village head of the novice village in the world, and his apprentices are no longer concerned about their nationality and skin color. It's a pity that none of these white-eyed wolf's apprentices have become immortals and ancestors themselves, and none of them has come back to take Uncle Nine with them.

Is the role of the protagonist just to involve film and television characters? Then the things in the lottery are not very useful, and I am not very capable, but I have to participate in everything. The most unbearable thing is that the first chapter is not finished, and the second chapter cannot follow the first chapter.

The protagonist has only one identity, foreigner, ghost guy

Crazy? In that era did you want to learn magic? You are crazy. You can only buy it with money, because there will always be some scum who will sell it

I don't know what happened later, but at least the plot in the first few dozen chapters was too confusing.

... Westerners, in the eyes of many ancient people, are barbarians, not to mention cultivators. Maoshan cultivation requires the ancestor to receive talismans. There are places with gods, and there is God in the West. It should be impossible to accept foreign disciples.

It's so messy, and the author's mistakes always disrupt the reading experience, and I'm so confused!

The plot setting is not bad, but the plot description is really messy. The protagonist's behavior has no main goal. The plot just starts when he meets a woman and he loses his wits. It might as well be written as a stand-alone mode.

There are too many mixed plots, causing the timeline to distort. The point is that each plot is not written in detail, and the protagonist seems to be rushing through the scene. If there were so many extraordinary worlds. Then history cannot be copied. Not to mention that Maoshan Taoist priests or magicians can use the battlefield to create a few big terrors and destroy the opponent's army. Ordinary people have no resistance to extraordinary power. To put it bluntly, the most basic dangers cannot be avoided due to different cognitive styles.

The protagonist's aura depends entirely on the protagonist's aura. . . Author, are you calling others to scold you?

You have to decide whether to write about a Western system or an Eastern system from the beginning. Don't mix it up, it's too confusing.

It will be over within a few chapters if there is no one behind the protagonist.

I always feel that the author is a foreigner.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel like I don't understand it.

I'm not very good at writing myself, but I'm pretty big-hearted and want to write about everything. I just write whatever comes to mind, and I don't know if there is an outline. Do you know your timeline clearly? Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not, logical or not, it is consistent as long as the author wants it.

I read some chapters, but the more I read, the more confused and confused I became, and the more I read, the more bloated my head became.

Too much adulteration, too messy. Authors should carefully review their film and television works. A hodgepodge is fun, but there have to be trade-offs. How is it possible that you want everything? Just like the establishment of a strength system, it is not just a matter of plugging them together. Harper's magic, mummy magic, Jiu Shu's Taoist magic, Marvel magic are so messed up!

I have an idea, but I just can't control it~

After watching so many Zhutian film and television works, I still feel dizzy and confused when watching this for the first time. Some time ago, I saw that the astronomy in the style of the Eighteen Chronicles can make people want to read more. At least it is smooth and not confusing.

I don't know if I didn't pay attention or what, but the timeline seems a bit confusing.

You can write this book however you want, but you must not write it in China. As a foreigner, China at that time was very xenophobic. I don't understand what you think. It's enough to write about foreign countries, and you also have to add a Chinese hero to the whole thing. To be honest, it feels like I am just making up the plot, here and there.

I have some ideas, but my writing is really bad. I really can't stand it. I'll write another one to two million words and practice my writing to improve it.

I just feel like your book is too confusing, and I'm confused when I read it.

There are ideas, but the author can't control them, resulting in nondescript ones.