Brother Deyun

The writing was good at the beginning, and I had the desire to continue reading. But after the emotional scenes were added, it was so awkward that I couldn't stand it anymore. I was so nervous that I couldn't stand it. Come on, author.

Man, to be honest, what I wrote is really good. Keep writing, don't be impatient, more and more people will definitely read it.

Can I say something? What kind of stuff are you writing about?

You deserve to die if you fall to death while playing such extreme sports.

Updates cannot be interrupted, and writing must be done well and don't be unreliable. Slow work produces fine work. Come on😊

For urban entertainment, don't write about martial arts or anything like that. It's embarrassing.

I think it's generally good, but later I wrote that he was so awesome that he became a capital tycoon, and that being in the entertainment industry was only delaying the development of the country, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

A good modern urban novel, let you write the swords and swords in the rivers and lakes

The beginning is too serious. The subsequent paragraphs are not funny at all. The sense of immersion is too low. The protagonist is too calm at the beginning.

The writing is too poor and the thinking is immature. After years of hard work, I can only make it to Chapter 5.

The writing was fine at first, but then it started to get weird. No matter what, it feels so boring.

Why do I feel like this was written by a gunman hired by Deyun Society?

Alas, Deyun's guise

This segment is so tiring to watch, it really tests my patience...

Is this thing called a novel? ? ? ? ? ?

After reading five chapters, I didn't even figure out who the protagonist was.

There are too many private lives, and it's too embarrassing to have emotional scenes unfold regardless of the occasion, ugh. .

I cried during this section! 😭

When I saw that Yu'er, I didn't need to read anymore. The previous one was pretty good, but now it's broken. It's only about a dozen pictures. What do you think?

Man, come on, your updates are too slow.

There are too many emotional scenes, so I guess it won't be a story with multiple female protagonists.

To be honest, it becomes more and more difficult to understand later on.

Is this an abandoned trap

Come on, save more and look at it later

To be honest, it was amazing at first. Why do I feel like I can't stand it these days?