He Comes from Ryugyong

Well, how should I put it? To be honest, I was a little confused. Can't you introduce the background of the protagonist, or why he lurks in the Li family? At the end of each chapter, there is a short paragraph describing the inner activities of the protagonist, talking about Li Mingzhe and his father, and then I also had it, what the hell is this? Who is the protagonist? What's his name? Can you make it clear?

The best heroines are Kim Ji Soo and Bae Joo Hyun. Come on, author. Thank you very much

🙂 The identity of the male protagonist is set to torture and torture. North and South Korea are inherently sensitive. The competition between the United States and China. How will the identity be discovered in the future? Is it possible to survive? 😜I don't understand why the writing is so complicated and clumsy.

Some things have already been said in separate chapters about the work, so I won't say more. Mainly, I want to thank you for your attention. I also read the comments carefully, think about them carefully, and make corrections. This is my first time writing a novel, and my level is really average. My writing style is poor and my writing has some problems. The requirement for myself is to at least explain the story clearly, and there is no big problem with the logic. I basically followed the outline. I decided on multiple female protagonists from the beginning, but I wanted each female protagonist to have a vivid and vivid image, rather than a stereotyped character repeated over and over again. Although it may not be possible to shape it well, but try your best, the writing power is really limited. The heroine who has been decided will definitely be accepted, but it just needs some plot foreshadowing, and there won't be any plot to give away or miss the girl. I decided to write about one million words for this book, but in a flash I have written more than 100,000 words. What has a beginning will have an end, and I will definitely finish it, which can be regarded as a promise. The author is still in graduate school, has a lot of classes, and a lot of arrangements from tutors, so I may not have enough time when I get to school. But I feel that updating once a day is no problem. My book has not been interrupted since it was steadily updated, and I hope it can be maintained. Finally, I would like to thank the readers for their love. I will try my best to write more and make better appointments. I also wish everyone a happy life in reality.

Kim Ji Soo

Lee Zhien

One of the problems with Korean entertainment is that the main character develops very well in the United States, and then gives up such a big market and goes to South Korea to develop. Fortunately, the main character of this book at least has a background and support in South Korea. In some books, the main character does not know anyone in South Korea. It is really embarrassing to give up the US market and go to South Korea.

Kim Ji Soo

The heroines are: Ji-eun, Yoona, Sika?

After reading five or six chapters, I feel so uncomfortable. Can I write normally?

Xu Xian

The protagonist setting is very interesting, the plot is not too bad, and the description of the heroine is good (IU fans are very happy to see so many IU scenes). I just hope that the harem scene is not too big. According to the current progress, in addition to the character cards, it is estimated that Bae Suzy and Park Jiyeon will have roles. (Although I think 93line's one-spoon stew is very interesting), and I don't know how many there will be in the future (I didn't expect Yoo In Na to be included in the character card. I originally thought it would be a friendship at most). The most ugly thing about Bulldozer is the facial makeup of the female protagonist.

Lin Xiaolu

IU

Raise up. Don't abuse me later, I suggest you accept them all, Korean entertainment, if you don't accept a few, it really doesn't make sense 😅

It was really uncomfortable to watch at the beginning. There are so many criticisms

After reading Chapter 12, I read a little bit and put it down every time, and every time I read a little bit and put it down again, I felt a little tired. There is a bit too much inner drama. And the identity of the protagonist has not been introduced completely. It will be introduced a little bit at a time, a little bit at a time.

Where is my little lover😍

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