My Girlfriend Who Is a Top Student Is Too Doting on Me, Right?

The writing style really needs to be improved, it is very similar to one of Baicai's earlier works. I can't write a complete paragraph, it's all sentence by sentence. Moreover, the descriptions of various images, dialogues, and emotions are too immature.        ""，， There is also a tendency to use some literary and artistic expressions, such as "eyes full of stars." This type of expression should be used with caution. Direct and repeated use of such expressions really does not reflect the beauty. In this regard, you can refer to authors whose words like kiss🐷 are full of pictures. The same is true for literature and art, and the difference in expression and wording really affects the perception. The author can read this book. The problem expressed in the sentence is exactly the same as yours. You can refer to how this author improved in the future. His last book made great progress I hope the author can write better and better.

I don't know if the author can read it, but I still want to talk about my feelings. I have read countless novels since I was a child. Every time I read a good novel, I feel very sad, a kind of lovelorn discomfort. It's like wherever the author writes, I can only talk about love. The completed novels that I have read well before are basically published, and it is rare to see the words written by the author to the readers or about the work. Seeing the author saying goodbye to his work really broke my guard, and I really couldn't control the tears I wanted to cry. The story is very good and brought me into my school days unconsciously.

How can I put it, maybe I am too old for this book. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 109. It gave me the feeling of a primary school student and a junior high school student falling in love. The main male protagonist seems to be reborn after graduating from college. I really didn't see it at all, but it was enough to pass the time. Come on, author, I hope the writing will get better and better.

Love it

It's pretty good. Except for a little stomachache in some episodes, there's nothing bad about it 🤭🤭

The early and middle stages are as sweet as the greenness of adolescence. It feels like a pity not to be able to master them in the later stages. The character design is not stable enough and sometimes the play feels fragmented. Half of the entry limit is waived, and you can make a full reservation.

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The look is too similar

I have been tainted and unworthy of reading such a pure love book. As a pure love warrior, I have been harmed by some Liu Bei books for too long. 😭 My thoughts are distorted when I see some plots. Some perverts like to attract you with a pure heroine at the beginning, and then be tainted by some yellow hair. , Hiding the male protagonist while talking to Huang Mao>_<, The character in this book does not give me a sense of security, it is too similar. Those books planted evil seeds in my pure heart. Now, except for the heroine who is very powerful and invincible, I dare not read it. I feel insecure.

"Ding Lingling——" "The exam is over, please stop writing immediately, otherwise it will be treated as a disciplinary violation." A cold female voice without any emotion came from the loudspeaker in front of the classroom. Li Ziyang put down his pen and took another look at the draft paper that was already being checked for the third time. After confirming that it was correct, he breathed a sigh of relief and handed the answer sheet to the students who came to collect the papers from behind. "The primary school number is on you, please move quickly and don't cheat!" The female teacher in charge of the exam in front of the podium stretched and casually instructed. She also looked relaxed - even though it wasn't the college entrance examination, sitting in the examination room for two hours was really not something people would do. Li Ziyang looked past the noisy crowd and looked out the window. The afterglow of the setting sun dyes the sunset red, and the clouds are extremely magnificent under the glow of the rays. The layers are like soft silk, stretching for thousands of miles. Suddenly, a pair of big, watery eyes appeared in front of Li Ziyang. "What are you looking at, so fascinated?" It's Xia Mingqiao. Her long hair was tied into a high ponytail and hung down behind her head. A few black hairs on his forehead were soaked with sweat and stuck to his face randomly. Although she was wearing an old-fashioned school uniform, her youthful aura could not be concealed at all. Especially—— She is too close to Li Ziyang! So close that Li Ziyang could hear her breathing clearly, and he could even feel her slightly moist breath on his face, crisp and itchy, with a hint of a girl's unique body fragrance. Looking at the beautiful face so close at hand, even with Li Ziyang's concentration, he couldn't help but feel his heart beat faster. "Hey, it's broad daylight, what are you two doing here!" The two of them were startled, like children who were caught doing something wrong, and hurriedly separated, with the blush on their faces still not dissipating, trying their best to avoid each other's eyes. "Yin Jian, Yin Jian, why are you so mean?" Li Ziyang breathed a sigh of relief when he found out that he was a best friend. I couldn't help but feel a burst of gratitude in my heart, which relieved the embarrassment just now. Xia Mingqiao also reacted, and continued the topic just now, "So, what are you looking at again?" "Here, sunset." Li Ziyang pointed to the beautiful sky outside the window. The two of them looked out in the direction pointed by Li Ziyang, as if they had been kissed by a dementor, immersed in the wonderful beauty woven by nature - such beauty is undoubtedly fatal to high school dogs who are overwhelmed by heavy studies. "You are the bride in the sunset, and the afterglow of the setting sun is the gorgeous wedding dress prepared by God for you. I believe that the most magnificent sunset is not as good as your chance." Xia Mingqiao heard the words, the blush that had just faded quietly climbed up her cheeks again, and she felt flustered like a deer. "Hey, hey, I said you two are enough. Have you ever considered how I feel as a single man?" Yin Jian muttered dissatisfied. "As is known to all, single dogs have no rights." Li Ziyang replied lightly. Yin Jian was confused and looked at Xia Mingqiao with "?" In his eyes, "What did he say?" Xia Mingqiao looked at him, smiled, and translated: "As we all know, singles have no human rights." "You two bitch couple, I really thank you!" Xia Mingqiao looked at him with a smile, and Li Ziyang was silent. Yin Jian was quickly defeated and waved his hand angrily, "Okay, okay, I lost. Let's get down to business, where is your math paper, Ziyang? I have a pair of answers." Yin Jian took the paper and Xia Mingqiao He also came over, but only glanced at it and said gloatingly: "Hey, Li University Master had a bad start. He got off to a good start and got the first question wrong." "Huh? It can't be possible. I also chose A. Ah." Yin Jian asked doubtfully, "Isn't it just a fractional inequality? How can it be wrong to move terms and differentiate products, solve quadratic equations, and then find the intersection?" The equal sign." "I'll go, no, did I get it wrong in the first question? Bai Huahua, ah, mellow, ah, no, such an important five points just flew away?" Yin Jian said to himself, trying to arouse the sympathy of others (well, it was me). Li Ziyang on the side said: "Ming Qiao, you are wrong about this question. As the denominator, "Haha, I'm on the first floor. You think you're looking down on me on the second floor, but you didn't expect that the first and third floors are connected, and I'm higher than you. Let me tell you, I am the reincarnation of God, Wenquxing descended to earth, and the lover of the goddess of luck in her previous life. I can't learn this kind of thing wrong, ah, bah, I can't, forget it, that's all..." Li Ziyang looked at the rapidly changing expression on Xia Mingqiao's face and smiled lightly. "It's okay, just five points, what are you afraid of?" "But, I can't grasp such a simple five points, and I can't get the first place." Xia Mingqiao said with a hint of frustration in his tone. "In my heart, you have never been number one." Li Ziyang said. What does he mean! Xia Mingqiao felt angry and almost wanted to explode, but then she remembered her family motto - be elegant and calm in everything. Well, be elegant. She forcibly suppressed the anger in her heart, but she heard Li Ziyang add: "You are the only one for me. My heart is small, and I can only pretend to be you." The mathematics teacher Wen Qi, who was walking towards the classroom, stumbled under his feet, scaring him to take a sip of water in a hurry. Hey, that's weird. It's obviously warm water, but why does it smell like lemon when I drink it?

The heroine

Everyone who has experienced youth probably has a first love hidden deep in youth. Who wouldn't want to catch Xia Mingqiao at that time like Li Ziyang after his rebirth. However, we are more like Xia Mingqiao and Li Ziyang in that time and space without rebirth, one cannot love and miss time. A girl who didn't even know that there was a girl who liked him in his youth died completely. Tragedies are always reluctant to go into details, it is too tragic. When I bring up the old things again, I realize that Xia Mingqiao and Li Ziyang in the original time and space were a tragedy after all. I wish I could go back in time and see you in my youth, as bright as a flower, pure and beautiful, everything is as before, everything is as it was when I first saw you. I like you just because I like you. The mountains and seas are difficult to level, and life is not over again. The past is a regret. From now on, there is a vast sea of ​​people, and there is no hope in the world. It's over, the story is over, as beautiful as Xia Mingqiao, as beautiful as Li Ziyang. Beautiful things are like changing from school uniforms to wedding dresses, beautiful things are like being in love with each other. The ravine is difficult to level, it is damaged like me, and it is impossible to love. Fortunately, the author did not say that everything was a dream in the end, and that would be the end of it. In the fairy tale, the regret is made up for. Chairman Xia, classmate Li Ziyang, that's great.

It's a bit similar

It's really good-looking. The female protagonist is generous and beautiful, and the male protagonist is also a very good person. The two-way love between two excellent people is what makes people feel the sweetness of beautiful love. There are quite a lot of rebirth campus love stories nowadays, most of them are about men pursuing women. Although there are also delicate and smooth writings, they always follow the trend and are a bit boring to read. In this article, although the reason for the heroine's love at first sight seems to be a cliché hero saving a beauty, for strangers, this is the most thrilling moment, so it is understandable. In the author's description, we can also see the heroine's mental journey, from falling in love at first sight in junior high school to getting along in high school and discovering more shining points of the male protagonist, and the relationship between the two begins to gradually heat up. This is the most comfortable point. Girls start from the "double standard" of love for boys, and boys are not stupid, so they "care" for girls. Therefore, this article is still worth reading! Finally, there are too few updates! ! !

To be honest, I would like to give you an opinion. In high school, writing about student unions and eldest ladies is quite discouraging for people to quit, because they don't have a sense of agency, and they will be disgusted! It's enough to say that her family is rich. She even has a housekeeper. It's really unnecessary. She has a strong style of a domineering middle school president from ancient times, which makes people easy to act!

Li Ziyang

The author must have never been in love. Only those who have never been in love can imagine the love I imagined.

I feel that many urban novels nowadays have a family background where the male protagonist is superior to the female protagonist, especially some star novels and scholarly novels. Let's discuss it.

Is the protagonist really a reborn person? Why is he shocked even when he holds his hand? In reality, there are not many young couples who rent apartments in junior high schools?

The writing is not good, some sentences are awkwardly written, and the heroine's face always turns red. Isn't it wrong to write it this way, but can't it be changed into another form? Don't you know how to use metaphors and personification? The dialogue between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. The main plot is okay, but the author added some cliché plots into it to save children and kittens under the umbrella? Maybe a novice would think it's okay, but after reading so many dog ​​food articles, I feel like I'm really not good at writing. It is recommended to refer to the book Hua Jie and the Kissing Pig.

Boys should read less books like this, as they are more likely to daydream.

This book is quite tasteless. To be honest, it would be a pity to discard it if it is tasteless. The image design of the male and female protagonists is really a bit too crotch-heavy.

The more magical and unrealistic urban novels are, the less I can stand them... Indifferent men become more affectionate towards women... I just don't like the protagonist's character...

The protagonist seems too immature and does not look like a reborn person

Having said all that, maybe some people will like this kind of male protagonist? But if you look at it from the woman's perspective, any normal person would think it's not worth it, right? Is this kind of person really worth liking? Is it worth paying blindly?

The male protagonist is so miserable, there is no male protagonist in the character list

I don't recommend watching it because I haven't experienced anything like this.

It's too bland. I see that it's just daily sugaring and daily sugaring in a continuous cycle. When I first started reading daily articles, I liked it very much. Now that I read more, I feel like I don't want to read anymore. I always feel that something is missing, that there is less conflict? It's the kind of feeling that keeps readers hooked and keeps me reading. In fact, after seeing more than 120 chapters, I can basically predict what will be said next. Oh, by the way, I know something is missing at this point, the villain is missing! It means that the hero and heroine like each other, and both parents agree, that's it, and then there is no villain yet, and then it keeps sprinkling sugar. Even though it is about 100 chapters, there is always a feeling that I have seen the end!

What can I say, I really supported it this month. I've given you a total of fifteen monthly passes~😁It's not too much to add too much😁

This novel has been fully ordered, but I haven't finished it yet. The subsequent plot seemed a bit awkward to me. Generally speaking, the writing style of this book is not up to par in many areas. The plot is somewhat abrupt in some places, and I also felt that the transitions in the plot were not smooth enough. Overall, it's a relaxing and sweet novel. But there are always some words in the description of emotions that are very dramatic, and the good atmosphere created comes out directly. The relationship between the two is not as gradual as I imagined. Although I have been pursuing the feeling of success from the beginning of the novel, but after I really caught up, the subsequent relationship was not as good as before. The first time I saw the male and female protagonists, it was difficult for me to have a sense of involvement, or to have any opinions. I watched it indifferently. Maybe there are indeed many situations in reality that are similar to those in the book, but this is a light novel, a sweet novel, and it only contains enough sugar to make it more attractive to read. I think it would be better not to rush to write for the first time than to write so hastily. Also, the routines are repetitive. How many times has the male protagonist given roses appeared? . . . The male protagonist celebrates his birthday, but the female protagonist remembers it, and then the male protagonist is moved to the point of destruction, and the female protagonist is irresponsible after flirting, etc. In fact, there is a good solution in the book itself for not being responsible for flirting. The divorce of the heroine's parents has brought a certain psychological shadow to the heroine, so it is acceptable but does not want to be forced. The hero chooses not to force the heroine. Does this situation look better? It was the first time that the heroine went out. Although there was a chapter in the previous chapter where it was said that the heroine's mother approved it, it was only a few chapters short of the previous chapter where she was irresponsible after the flirtation. . . . And there isn't much of a reason. And I was really embarrassed to death watching the conversation. The male protagonist later directly asked if he could have sex with me? Can it really be so embarrassing? Overall, it's okay, but I still have a hundred chapters left to read. I just want to sleep after reading it. The final evaluation is that the early stage is pretty good, but the mid-term is a little dull. I didn't watch it later.