The Black Technology of Returning from the Fairyland

It's creative, but the updates every day are too few and not enough!

The opening three cards are too much nonsense! I dozed off watching it.

This Zhao Yu and Zhao Yuxi are not very likable. The only thing I like is this artificial intelligence

There's so much nonsense that I can't understand

Obviously off topic, what we want to see is not what you did in the fairy world, but what you did in modern times using the knowledge of the fairy world.

Looking at the title of the book, we know what you want to write. Looking at the content, we don't know what you want to write.

I found this book to be about a dark country. As soon as the protagonist has a technology, he writes that the country will use him for free. The protagonist's butt is really crooked. Let's see which of the big guys above would do this. It would make sense if a big company wanted to acquire a full share of the company or engage in a business war. Unfortunately, it would only be unscrupulous. To be honest, as long as the protagonist's technology can explain the technical principles and confirm that the patent is in hand, the country will only invest in you and treat you as an important person, but the protagonist cannot explain these technologies. You can only hack the government. If you want to cultivate immortality, you can cultivate immortality, but you stick to science and technology articles. In this era of overall patriotism, it is like 500,000 people walking around. We read science and technology articles to see how much contribution we have made to society and scientific and technological progress. Even if we invent major technologies, we must communicate well with the country. After all, it involves overall strategy and corporate reform and upgrading. We cannot kill everyone with one shot. Otherwise, what will happen if so many people across the country are suddenly unemployed? I originally thought this book would be an exciting and uplifting story about technological transformation and overtaking on a curve, but I didn't expect that it was written about someone who wants to make money domestically and hacks the government. It deserves the poor performance of this book.

This subject is good. But the writing is useless for the author. It's super long-winded and unclear in logic, which makes me dizzy. The protagonist's character is submissive and his IQ is not up to par. After all, he is also an old monster who has been practicing for more than a hundred years. Could you please give me more strength?

Children, your composition should be handed over to the teacher. Don't post it online to waste uncles' time.

This is the boss who returned from the fairy world. He was bullied and still so submissive and still obeyed the fucking rules (rules that they can break and trample on at will). I'm really crazy.

The writing is too depressing. I don't dare to use this method or that method. I always hide. Although a lot of it is reality, this is a novel. Isn't it a little bit more satisfying? Who sees it? As long as you open a company and make money, capital will still come to you. Without translation software, games will not come to you? There is also Taimo. You are actually afraid of this and that. Then don't do so many things. If you do a lot of things within a month or two, if you don't investigate, who will you investigate? It's extremely contradictory. The protagonist is just like a melon and can be manipulated by others! Weak and incompetent

There are more than 10 chapters, and the protagonist is the only one narrating. You are writing a narrative, right?

Immortal cultivators will be exposed to radiation when they reach the elixir formation stage, and mortals' souls will be weakened after exposure and will not survive for long. What kind of bullshit setting is this, bah?

Is it okay to develop slowly? No one wants to rob you? What are you doing all these things for? Don't you dare to work in a black country? It's not black, but you write that the country is messing with you? What do you mean? How about you commit suicide? I haven't figured it out, and I can't figure it out

After reading more than 20 chapters, the first thing I felt about this book was that it was confusing. The first few chapters are about time travel and memories, about taking over and returning. Not only the plot is messy, but the writing is also messy. I wrote several chapters about the world settings that could be covered in 500 words or interspersed later. I can only say that the opening was a lightning strike. If you want to read this book, you must read it carefully at the beginning, otherwise you will be confused. Excluding the beginning, the first is the entry point of the plot. The first black technology, apart from the little love that comes with it, is translation software. Translation software can be said to be a technology that most scientific and technological articles have written about, and many have written about it and boasted about it. This brings about a problem. Others have written a lot. First of all, there is no new idea. Secondly, is this translation really good? If you are careful, you will find that many scientific translation software rarely occupy too many chapters or more important chapters, because it is not a particularly novel thing in itself, has low appeal and is not so dark. If you put it as the first black technology to make money, it is really dissuading. Making money through this is an insult to your IQ, and it is still charged on a monthly basis. Those who need translation every month must not be too bad in foreign languages or have specialized translators. Excluding those who only need translation for a short period of time, the first thing is traveling, not to mention traveling with a tour group, and regardless of whether the foreign language ability of the individual traveling with the tour group is different. Would you really buy a one-month right to use a software that obviously has the same function and is free for traveling? Isn't this an insult to one's intelligence? In other words, if you are on a business trip, people who are on a business trip will have dedicated reception and translation services. Regardless of their own abilities, they are not too bad. Even if the software is very practical and someone uses it, is it polite to put your phone in front of other people's faces to talk to them? Or say something and then put the phone to someone's ear? Is this polite? All in all, the novel's theme and opening setting are pretty good. It's just the first piece of black technology that grossed me out. To be honest, there are too many translations written, and none of them are good. Writing this in a book that has no fan base is really discouraging. I also read a lot of scientific and technical articles, and I often see translation software, but honestly I can't even write it well.

When I saw that the super compression technology was being sold, I couldn't stand it and felt panic

After reading Chapter 18, I still don't know what the author wants to express... I gave up.

It's obviously mainly modern, but the first 4 chapters? Chapter 5 is still about recalling the early days of prehistoric times, and it's all about long paragraphs of setting text. Who's going to read it? Author, have you noticed that deleting the first 4 chapters of your book does not affect the rest at all? It's like saying that the Golden Three Chapters were written as nonsense by you. Discourage 90% of readers. I know you want to write in detail and well-founded. This is a good idea, but you have to prioritize. Come on

The title of the book is pretty good. I went in and looked at the first dozen or so pictures. It was so wordy that I didn't know what to write. I couldn't read it at all.

I can't understand it, even if I jump to read it, I won't say whether it's poisonous or not, because I don't understand it and I'm confused.

Good topics are written to waste. There are so many nonsense translation software written about. The audience of this software is too small, and it is destined not to be big. Moreover, as for the black technology that was promised, I also want to see a car that can take off.

I hate stallions and unfocused people the most in my life.