Kyushu Taoist Master

Thanks for the invitation. I'm on Mars, just off the rocket. After reading a few chapters, I evaluated this book based on the principle of serious nonsense. The writing style of this article is quite satisfactory, but the content is a bit old-fashioned. It starts with a family feud, but the character description is not very good. Goldfinger is old-fashioned and has no bright spots. The rhythm is well controlled. I hope the author will put more effort into his writing style and new routines.

The protagonist must be in trouble. He is not his son in the first place.

Yang Shan is the eldest, Yang Ze is the second, and Yang Shan was born after Yang Yuanzhen continued his relationship. Can Yang Yuanzhen still have children after his big LP died? What logic, I don't understand

Such a good book must be rewarded

Family infighting is the lowest starting point. I don't know why most authors like to write about infighting, but a family that fights among itself will definitely die and cannot prosper. History has proven it many times, and infighting is a darker side than unity. Competition is okay, but this kind of life-and-death infighting is unreasonable.

This plot is true, but not interesting. It is exactly the same as the routines of those fantasy novels He has a weird life experience, his parents are not around, either he will be hunted down, or he will not be able to come back. A genius was born but suddenly became a loser. He was often beaten and scolded and disliked by his elders. If you have sex since childhood, the woman will cheat. Be humiliated in front of her and vow to collect the debt. Either fall off the cliff. Or wear it with jade, beads or furnace tripod, and the remaining soul lives in the sea of ​​consciousness. It's a big difference from now on, the upgrade is very fast, it soars into the sky, and all the enemies are trampled. If the hero wants to save the beauty, he must offend the second generation of rich people. Kill many people and draw out the old monster. Not strong enough, he was forced to jump into the sea. As he was about to die, the ruins of the cave opened. Either drinking dragon blood or eating natural materials, reborn and transformed, and his skills will progress rapidly. Check for leaks when shopping. Pets are mythical animals. If you have too much money to spend, auction them off if nothing happens. My peers are two levels below me. If you don't like it, just come. You can't finish your own business, and you will love all the beauties. If you are looking for death along the way, there is always life. The protagonist is cheating, and everyone will be a loser. One realm is not enough, go to the Immortal Platform, break the nine heavens, live forever and never be defeated!,

In a small family, the eldest brother is talented, the second child is not talented, and there is a common brother. As long as the elder's brain is normal, he will definitely win over the younger brother and suppress the common brother together. What kind of fool would target a brother from the same mother, who is less talented and has no chance of inheriting the position of head of the family. Are you sure you're not a fool?

In fact, I have read a lot of novels about martial arts, mental skills, internal skills, and so many layers. Once you have practiced the previous ones, you will not be able to continue practicing without the mental skills or internal skills behind them. I find it strange. Aren't the previous internal skills or mental methods the result of the exploration and summarization of predecessors, and the continuous improvement and inheritance from generation to generation? Let's just say, for example, many martial artists in their decades could not use their brains when they were young because they did not have follow-up advanced internal skills or their mental skills were stuck at a certain level. They have been immersed in it for decades, constantly exploring, introducing new ones, and forming a method that suits them? Rather than being trapped in the current shackles of internal strength and being unable to break through until death? We are not saying that everyone is a genius and can summarize and innovate, but as a professional martial artist, after practicing the same technique for decades, he can't come up with anything new? Can't think of some content that suits you? Even if you encounter various possibilities in the process that your cultivation may go astray or go astray, there will always be something gained, right? You won't stand still, right? Otherwise, how could those inherited internal skills form a complete system? Isn't it the result of the continuous attempts of our ancestors and the accumulated exploration and modification of generations of people? !

Don't you think it's weird why the protagonists are both brothers and they all look like enemies, and the villain and the brotherly harmony and the protagonist's fight are all at the same time, but they all die?

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I can't stand it anymore. If it was okay ten years ago, it's just average now.

I think this book is good. The main character is able to draw energy from the first level to compete with the fourth level first-level warriors who have surpassed the second level acquired and the third level innate. From this point of view, he is the best fighting warrior in ancient and modern times. When placed in a cultivation text, it is like fighting against an old monster of Nascent Soul during the Qi training period. This shows that the author's writing skills are superb and the plot is sophisticated.

I read the first chapter but didn't finish it. There is no need to read on. The protagonist's family must be fighting openly and secretly to the death. Even if the villain's family is a pig, they will rush forward when something goes wrong, beating the slaves and masters to support them, and giving the young and old the same fate. The protagonist's family, on the other hand, gets into trouble in various ways when something happens to the people in the protagonist's family. The author who writes in this way basically has nothing of his own, so he copies and changes everything.

Traveler, there are cheats, and the family doesn't want to see you. Why are you so stubborn and so stubborn? Fortune and wealth are determined by life and death. If you go out and have a try, don't you have some backbone?

Is the protagonist a time traveler or an indigenous person? Why is it like a dog? ? ? The aboriginal father doesn't want to see him, and the aboriginal elder brother doesn't want to see him. The protagonist still wants to compete with the eldest brother for family status and resources. I would like to ask the protagonist how he can be so arrogant even though he has a golden finger in his account. Moreover, he calls his father more happily than anyone else. Are you really too comfortable being a native? If you are a modern person, no matter what, you still have a little arrogance, right? The writing is neither fish nor fowl, the family is rubbish, the family is infighting, the beginning is useless, the useless character had a big brother ten years ago

I looked at the number of words, the total number of monthly votes, and the number of comments, (￣￣)

In the high martial arts world with a large environment, brothers are killing each other for a small family business and a spot in the martial arts gym. I was also drunk, so I directly persuaded them to quit.

Brothers are like this, how can it make sense? And since the birth mother is dead, shouldn't they be together? The logic makes no sense at all. How many generations can the family manage this way? It would be fine if you were from a big clan, but from a small clan, how could it be that brothers grew up hating each other?

As modern people, all time-travelers have no ambitions, all just want immortality, and all of them fight alone. None of the current novels are readable

Congratulations on the new book Gou Yan being released.

At the beginning, I was immediately persuaded to quit, and I couldn't read it in a way that was written more than ten years ago. It was just a waste of money. The family fights to the death. As a big family, there will definitely be fights, but you should also fight in a healthy way. Otherwise, you will be finished early. Do you think it is raising gu?

It can only be said to be tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

Anyone who has read it please tell me! ! !

It's still the second layer after three months... What's your point?

Unifying Xiangyun Street, the author is afraid that Dali Xiangyun's mixed society changed his career to write novels😰

As plain as water, the same old routine, boring

Why was the book about traveling to the end of Qin not finished 😭

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

Author, that bad guy in Zhou Dynasty, you send me event notices every day. I didn't add that book. Can you please stop sending it in the future?

"An old man who traveled back in time picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Nod to see directly] A director graduate from his previous life, accidentally traveled back in time and became an old man who picked up rags. He worked hard in variety shows, worked professionally, begged live, made horror videos to scare people, ate takeaways from Overlord's meals, and made bad movies to earn disgust points to continue his life. Kill decisively in order to survive Later, he traveled through infinite planes and experienced adventures, collected them into movie materials, and returned to reality on the big screen. The audience was scared crazy.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 78. The battle strength collapsed so early. In other books, the battle strength collapsed in the later stages. You haven't even reached a hundred chapters yet. After reading these dozens of chapters, the protagonist only knows how to act recklessly and does not talk about it. I read it all as a pleasant article, and I will not mention the occasional wrong sentences and typos. But you are an entrance examiner who has straddled three realms. You clearly wrote before that you can hit four lower-level peaks in one move at one level higher. Afterwards, you are three realms higher, and you have to fight back and forth? Can the protagonist still pose a threat to people who are three levels higher? Your combat power is completely ruined. Besides, the examiner is a disciple of the martial arts academy, so he should be stronger than the martial arts warriors. You don't have to mention that you are inexperienced in fighting. You will be reckless with your martial arts and internal strength. Those who can enter the martial arts academy must be the best among people. But if the dragon or phoenix enters the martial arts academy, is it not as good as the martial arts? Then who is wrong enough to squeeze their heads into a garbage place that turns geniuses into trash? A dignified martial arts disciple is not as good as that "cutting with a sword in the wind"? The logic is illogical and the combat power is broken.