Is It Wrong to Seek My Future Wife at School?

Could it be that his daughter is his wife😰😰😰

How can I put it, the content is actually good, but it's normal that no one has read it. This book is good, but it has no highlights. I only paid attention to your other works because of the voice actor book. Let me briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages of your current work. The advantage is that you are really good at writing daily plots. At least your writing is not bad compared to many new authors, and at least it is better than what qd recommends every day. Some of the novels given to me are quite good compared to some of them. The shortcomings are that the daily plot is good. However, after reading your two novels, I found that they are just daily life from beginning to end, and there is no specific main line. If daily novels want to attract readers without a highlight plot, they can only rely on character design. But your character design is actually not that eye-catching. The character of the male protagonist is almost the same in the two books. I guess the author Your character is also a bit of a salty person, which is actually not a problem, but the overall plot of your novel is a bit of a salty one. Normally, there will be some progress even if there is no plot. Your novel feels like you are going in circles all the time. The one with the voice actor has a sentiment bonus and many people go there just for the character, so there is no problem, but this one is original, and the original novel has no sentiment bonus, so there is no problem. Due to the accumulation of word-of-mouth, coupled with the fact that the overall plot and characters are too salty, it is normal that no one will read it. In fact, this book is not necessary to be so miserable. If this was written by an old author with a little readership, the results may not be so miserable, but you are a newcomer with no reputation and no readership. In addition, QD is really not very friendly to this kind of subject matter. It is strange to be popular. . . Basically, novels with this theme in QD only need to be written to hundreds of thousands of words before they can barely get a small wave of recommendations and attract a small wave of people to watch Having said so much, let's just talk about the conclusion. I think this novel is okay, but the plot progress is really touching. If I weren't used to your writing style, I wouldn't have the patience to read it. Go ahead, I started reading chapter by chapter from a dozen chapters onwards. When you accumulate those chapters, it feels painful. Works with this theme must either be fan fiction or have some plot, otherwise it is best not to touch it until you have accumulated a certain popularity. I am looking forward to your next work (although I don't watch Douluo...)

Daughter's abortion? This kind of article is not easy to write. I hope the author can work harder.

When will rewards be started? I hope the author won't do it for love The voice actor development system is well written

If you don't understand, just ask, why is the protagonist called a scumbag?

I came here from the last book, write it well