
Battle Against the Sky: Xiao Hui's Side Story
斗破苍穹之萧辉外传
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 172k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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90Chapters
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Please update!
The writing is very good, I just need to update it quickly. Don't go into Dongchang. Asking for the essence🥺
You can have a little fun, there are not enough cannon fodder in the back, you can be ordinary, don't be mediocre
Han Lao Mo is ordinary but his heart is extraordinary. Author, please do not confuse the concepts of ordinary and mediocre.
Compared to those who are always cheating and always invincible, this book is definitely a breath of fresh air. Nowadays, the streets are full of cheating books, and it's time for this down-to-earth flow of mortals to reach a climax. Come on, Saonian, I'm optimistic about you.
Author, if you really write according to the introduction and don't add author buffs to the protagonist, then your protagonist won't even be a fighting spirit when Xiao Yan becomes the Dou Emperor. I suggest you open a small game and let the protagonist develop. Otherwise, you can't write a protagonist like you at all. If you write the protagonist a little more powerful, it will violate your introduction.
When will you give the protagonist a trick? After all, the three-year contract is almost over and you are still a fighter.
Brother, practice swordsmanship with this sword. I support you and I reward you. After I get my investment back, I will reward a helmsman.
It feels really good. It's the first time I've seen this style, but in the end I still gave the protagonist some trouble. There are only one and a half months until the three-year appointment. The protagonist is a talented fighter, which is a bit too slow.
There is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, and the plot coherence is also good Write on, hurry up and sign the contract 😰 Don't rush the emotional line, start it now, take your time This is a breath of fresh air in fan fiction
Alas, there is still one month left, and Xiao Yan has a three-year appointment; the protagonist here is a talented fighter, which is not interesting.
At least there is a beast fire😫😫😫😫😫
Author's words
Thank you for your support of this book. In response to the questions you are concerned about, I will give a unified reply here. First of all, the protagonist's training speed and cheating are the issues that everyone is most concerned about. Hanging, there must be some, but not now. In fact, in the previous chapters, the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing, but I don't know if everyone has noticed it? Secondly, regarding the question of whether the protagonist should follow Xiao Yan or not. In this book, Xiao Hui and Xiao Yan, as cousins, have their own story lines. There will be intersections between the two, but most of them are independent of each other. This is also the author's original intention of writing the book. Finally, regarding the signing issue. This book was written by the author in his spare time, so there will be no contract. If you like it, just vote for recommendation. In addition, this book will have a complete story, so don't worry!
Author, do you want Xiao Yan to fight against the emperor when the protagonist has just fought against the spirit?
The protagonist is too mediocre, Xiao Yan is fighting the emperor, I think you are still fighting the spirit. It can only be said that we can only keep it until the end and watch the ending. We don't want to watch it at all in the middle. So speechless.
It's well written, keep up the good work, but the pace feels a bit slow.
Too mediocre. Writing like this, I just want to keep watching the ending. It's enough to have a casual understanding of the plot development. Because the content is boring
I have regained the feeling of watching Battle Through the Sky
Are you there? I feel like I'm at a loss when writing articles? Why are there so many trolls? Is what I wrote really bad? I don't even know if I'm right or wrong
Are you there, brother, I want to ask you something, excuse me, why do I get free income from my novel without signing a contract? What's going on
Brother, can we meet? In Douqi Continent, the character I write is called Ling Bai. Can we meet? In our plot, I think it is quite interesting.
Jiangsu University Wow, wow, awesome. When will it be updated?
It hasn't been updated for a day, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.
The protagonist is mediocre to the extreme, and feels more worthy than the supporting characters in Douqi Continent...
Um, have you finished the book?
Character profile of this book (1): Protagonist Name: Xiao Hui Gender: Male Fighting Attribute: Fire and Wood Dual Attributes Cultivation: Two-star Douwang (before bloodline promotion); Nine-star Douzun (after bloodline promotion) Family: Tang Qi (wife), Xiao Qi (daughter), Xiao Mei (sister)... Title: Third elder of the Xiao family, senior Panmen, leader of Xiaomen, leader of Yanmen Old, Marquis of Gama, fifth-grade alchemist (after Xiao Yan became the emperor) Overview: The low-profile and simplified version of Xiao Yan; he is smooth and cautious in character; compared to other strong men in Dou Qi Continent, Xiao Hui is not particularly good at fighting, but he is good at management and operation, and is eager to find a path that suits him in his own way. For this reason, he is very attached to Xiao Yu and Yafei.
Character files in this book (2): People of the Xiao clan Name: Xiao Mei Gender: Female Fighting Attribute: Wind Attribute Cultivation: Eight Star Dou Ling (before the bloodline is improved), Eight Star Dou Zun (after the bloodline is improved) Name: Xiao Yu Gender: Female Fighting Attribute: Wind Attribute Cultivation: Seven-Star Dou Ling (before bloodline promotion), Half Saint (after bloodline promotion) Name: Xiao Ning Gender: Male Fighting Qi Attribute: Thunder attribute Cultivation: Nine-star Dou Ling (before the bloodline is improved), Nine-star Dou Zun (after the bloodline is improved) Name: Xiao Ding Gender: Male Fighting attribute: Wood attribute Cultivation: One-star Douwang ( Before the bloodline is improved), Half Saint (after the bloodline is improved) Name: Xiao Li Gender: Male Fighting Attribute: Thunder attribute Cultivation: Five Star Fighting Emperor (before the bloodline is improved), Half Saint (after the bloodline is improved)
I plan to update twice a day and save one. What do you think?
When a person's spirit is highly concentrated, his body and spirit will feel tired. When a person's body works hard for a day, his spirit and body will also feel tired. To sum up, the human spirit and body affect each other. The two souls are one, your cultivation speed and your body will become stronger, and the soul is the same, but you have not changed. It is unreasonable. Even if the inflammation is eliminated, because the soul is unified, the cultivation talent will become stronger 😅 You are really embarrassed.
Good guy, mortal struggle has become a side story. I said before that I would be cheating later, but now I have stopped participating. You are really good at it.
After reading the introduction, I wasn't even interested. If you write according to the introduction, either the author will slap himself in the face, or it will be a running account. To be honest, ordinary people in Dou Qi Continent can't write it at all. If there are no plug-ins, it's better to put it down. Xiao Ning's talent is not bad in the Xiao family. He calls Xiao Yan's cousin. Xiao Yan has been useless as a 12-fighter for three years. At the beginning of the plot, Xiao Ning only has seven levels of fighting spirit. Even if he is 16 years old, his strength cannot be seen. But this is the normal situation in Dou Qi Continent, and Xiao Ning is doing okay. The protagonist, an ordinary person from the Xiao family, is very interesting. Isn't he a fighter at the age of 18 or 19? Also Yao Lao also said that Xiao Yan's talent is good in the Jiajie Empire, which already illustrates the problem. A 12-year-old fighter like Xiao Yan is only good in a small place, but it is nothing in the Dou Qi Continent. So don't just look at his strength in the original work and think how talented he is, how many tricks he opened in the original work, if he didn't lose those three years without Yao Lao, if the Soul Clan doesn't cause trouble, he will probably be a Dou Zong until his death. Even if Dou Qi Continent doesn't talk about the ancient races with the Dou Emperor bloodline, the real geniuses are still like Cao Ying, that woman from the Dan family, and the geniuses from all the major forces in Zhongzhou. Seriously speaking, Xiao Yan's talent is not as good as Han Feng's. In the original work, his talent was basically wasted because he and Old Man Mu Gu practiced alchemy that exceeded his ability in advance and was overthrown. An ordinary person in the Dou Qi Continent cannot write without success. In the later stage, when Xiao Yan is about to become the Dou Emperor, you will only support him to death. In this way, you still take advantage of Xiao Yan and gain a lot of benefits.