My Game Character Is the Boss

The writing problem is too big, and if it is not solved, it will probably not become popular The main ones are: First, the sentences are not smooth, and the related words are used incorrectly in many places. Secondly, some pronouns are not used well, for example, 'this' should be used but 'qi' is used. Third, it is too concise, many words should not be omitted, and it will not make sense if omitted, such as 'has' and so on. Fourth, the game's writing style is somewhat biased toward ancient times. Although the background of the game is a combination of Chinese and Western fantasy, there is no need to force it if the author's writing style is not good. In summary, the novel is very uncomfortable to read due to various reasons. It is recommended to read it after writing it and then revise it.

With more than 100,000 words, there is not a single post discussing the plot, praising or criticizing... This book is cool enough.

I'm so humble. I'm asking for votes online. If you get 100 votes, I'll add another chapter. The upper limit is 6 chapters. I can't afford more, 😂😂.

The internal investment has passed. Readers are welcome to invest, watch and collect. The contract will be sent on the 15th and will be sent on the 6th.

It's a studio book, so it doesn't matter if it's good or bad

In fact, it was okay before. The problem is that the exposure is not enough.

It's amazing that a maid can look down on her master.