Become a God Starting from Your Natural Power

What can I say? You don't have to write if you don't want to. Your writing skills are good, but your character is hard to describe, so I won't pursue it anymore.

The more I read the next few, the more inexplicable they become. The plot is far-fetched. Updates are slow to begin with. If I don't get into new plots or feel better, I feel like I'm at a loss for spending money to read your book. You're just going to show me this...? ? ?

Tsk, I really can't stand pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger now. A good person shouldn't have to act like a pig.

I just read a few chapters, and the day before the cheating, I had to join the force, but the test showed that my qualifications were not very good, and then I cheated when I came back and tried to smooth things over. Interesting? ? ?

I voted for the monthly vote. This is the first time I voted for the monthly vote

The bloodline talent Chifeng Spear is okay 😰

This book is obviously a slow-burning one. The author's world view is very big, and the plot becomes more exciting as it unfolds. These so-called poisonous points are actually the author's high-dimensional laughter points that distinguish him from other authors. I read the latest from chapter 1 in one night, 🐮Wow🐮Wow

Very well written, highly recommended.

I can't hold on for ten chapters anymore. Without a family background, it's still food. With the family background, the awesome dad is like a poisonous weed. The author, go back and read it yourself to see if it's poisonous or not.

The part about his father is really stupid. There is no meal at the beginning, and the protagonist is forced to work to support the family. It would be better if his father has no ability, but he is so bad at it if he has ability. He is really a piece of trash, and he is said to be stable. There is a message in the book that is right. His father is not stable, but illegal. He left the three siblings in such a dangerous slum area for a month as soon as they left home. How dare you? You also said that you would let the nearby gangsters take care of you. I laughed. His father threatened the gangsters with force? , Someone backhandedly sold your information to the Xu Shi family and threatened you to be their dog, otherwise they would kill the three siblings. Should you take it seriously? , Give benefits to the gangsters, the gangsters themselves are greedy for too much, guess what they will do next, has his father grown up in vain for so many years? Wouldn't those who are involved in the world try to figure out other people's thoughts with the utmost malice? A normal start would be to open a small martial arts studio or a small business such as escorting darts. His father should be able to highlight his strength appropriately and be connected with the surrounding big and small forces, so that the three siblings would not be rich and wealthy, but they would also have enough food and clothing. This start would not be so poisonous, and his father's background and strength could be gradually revealed. The word "steady" is now written as pretending to be a pig but really a pig.

People are covering the sky. They just got off the dragon coffin. They don't have many acquaintances, so they don't hide. Please give me a collection recommendation + investment. When you return to the earth, you will be rewarded with the divine source and the emperor's scripture 😁

When I read Chapter 9, I felt very uncomfortable. The protagonist's father has no skills. He keeps pretending all day long. His son is about to die and his daughter is about to be played with. He doesn't say a word. When the protagonist becomes famous, he starts pretending again. His family is so awesome. It's so disgusting.

I have entered the exclusive free-limited area of ​​Poujie, congratulations, haha😄

Write some personal feelings After reading more than 200 chapters, I flicked through a few and ended here. The plot is still attractive at the beginning, but the progress before chapter 100 is too slow, and many chapters are boring to read, just explaining what the protagonist did, and there is no nutrition. I thought the writing was quite good after I returned to the Xu family. I stayed up late and read dozens of chapters, but the battle scenes were not well portrayed. The most uncomfortable thing about this book was actually the extremely single description of the fights. From bone training to master fighting, the writing was almost exactly the same, and there were always words like "Is this your limit? It's not enough." This is almost the end of the story. It's okay to finish it in two days. If you are interested, you can take a look. I probably won't follow it anymore. See you in the next one.

The old lady's foot-binding cloth is too long and smelly to write about, so just don't write about it. No one will read it anyway 😅

I was attracted by the introduction, but stopped at chapter 20. The creativity is good and attractive, but the plot logic is confusing and the strength of the strength is not clear. 1. The protagonist has Xiang Yu's gift of "Overlord" natural power, but he is timid in doing things. He even thinks of things like "Bing Xin Jue" to suppress the domineering in his heart and pursue calmness. Isn't this the opposite? Cultivating top talents will achieve twice the result with half the effort. 2. At the beginning, the protagonist's father explained that he was an ordinary person. The money he gave him every month was not enough to survive, and he still needed the protagonist (child) to move bricks. He only had two steamed buns and a few copper coins a day. Later, he turned into a hidden master and a son of the clan. He still needed the protagonist to make money to support the family and could not eat any meat. 3. Born in a slum, three brothers and sisters, have three rooms and one living room, and have oil to fry bread every day. 4. My biological sister talks like a "god sister" and is always coquettish and coquettish, which makes me sick to death. 5. A so-called neighbor guy "buys and sells by force" brings a 4-year-old butcher to the protagonist's sister to force her to marry her. The protagonist's parents won't let go of a single ploy, and they still say that they need to be patient. Later, the protagonist's father also said that he is also a top-notch master in the local area. Isn't this funny? In the end, the protagonist assassinated her in the middle of the night.

Don't just know that the wind is beautiful in the forest, there is also a saying that the tree has big roots and deep roots

After reading Chapter 42, the protagonist's talent is more like inheriting Liu Bang than Xiang Yu. There is a plausible mythical version of a person who is born with divine power, has a character that bullies the weak and fears the strong, and has no pride. When you encounter someone with no background, you just fight him, and then you say that the side effects of talent can't be restrained. But when you encounter a strong person with background, you can't restrain him? Can we communicate well now, right?

What the hell is this written as a splicing monster?

The Martial Arts Celestial Eye has become an inferior thing in your writing. Why do you still write about Wang Teng, the Northern Emperor? Take advantage of his traffic? He knew that his martial arts vision would jump out of the ground with just this power in an unpopular world. He asked the author, can you write novels? There are so many golden fingers but you are still such a loser. What, are you playing with poop?

Please take it off the shelves as soon as possible. With the character of the author, it is no longer interesting to read. I admit that the work has some interesting points, but with your character, it is not worth reading. It has ruined the reputation of Qidian. It is recommended to take it off the shelves directly. @Editors all.

It is a pity. You can see that in this book. The author definitely wrote it carefully. A book on the title of God can earn tens of millions. But it was so useless. A good book. Every word has its purpose. Or enrich the character image. Or to advance the plot. Or lay the groundwork. But the author used a lot of virtuoso writing in this book. A lot of meaningless literary writing. It will look very messy. The scariest thing is that these writing styles are not for the sake of word count. It's the author's self-impression. In the web article. In a word, the sky is misty and cloudy, like the Milky Way flowing across the nine heavens. This description is absolutely inferior. I ate three steamed buns today. Only when you are full can you have the strength to beat the two dogs. This description makes it more attractive

I've read a few chapters and it's a poisonous weed. I don't recommend it to everyone. I'll send you some screenshots to see

He can really talk nonsense about any b-thing. After reading a few novels, he felt that he was a fool. Now the First Emperor is starting to get angry. It's really fucking disgusting.

The second talent was a big disappointment. I was originally an old cow who couldn't get out of the car for a long time, but he still entered randomly. It was a good Chinese style with some Japanese ingredients, and it was very responsive.

After reading Chapter 85, let me talk about a few poisonous points that I personally think. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) Poison point 1: In the ancient setting, the author describes the protagonist's poor life, but he actually earns two steamed buns by working part-time and takes them home to fry? ! ! The ancient setting, although it has a bit of a supernatural feel, but you use fried steamed buns to represent that the protagonist is so poor that he can't even open the pot. Isn't it too obvious that he should not eat minced meat? Poison point 2: The protagonist feels that this place is dangerous. The author also repeatedly mentioned that the protagonist feels that there is danger and wants to run back to his hometown, but you still haven't run after dozens of chapters! If you don't run away, don't mention it so many times that you feel in danger! There are also some lame reasons why the protagonist doesn't run. I won't complain about them. I'll skip and read them first, and then share them if they are more toxic...

What are you writing now? You always use concave shapes to say that all living beings are suffering and talk about ants. The more you write, the more childish you are. Are you just pretending to be cool?

The power of the dragon and tiger, the authority of the emperor. The second work of Pigeon Grass (Gu) unexpectedly shocked the audience and moved people's hearts! Pigeon Grass's "Giving Natural Power at the Start" opens up a completely different world of martial arts, the underworld and the extreme, which are exactly what I like. I believe all the book friends here feel the same way! In Lin Mo, I saw the brilliance of many princes in history and the giants in the original work, and I saw a poor, struggling flower grower who created the miracle of laborers in his hard work (fog). All in all, the characters written by the author deeply touched me and gave me a complex sense of immersion. The passionate battles written by the author made me blast the emperor's engine! I can't repay you, so I will reward you with a small amount of silver, hoping that this will encourage the author and "Star Power" to go further and further. I hope to open up the readership soon, and would like to communicate with the author. Thank you.

The author's book is obviously quite popular, but it's a pity that the author, who graduated from university, is too ambitious and looks down on his income of a few thousand, so he chooses to stop working and work as a social worker or something like that? In the end, everyone was almost gone. If I had persevered, I would have handled the details better in the next book. Those who had the chance to shine in the light of a great god would be like Feng Qiyue, who is currently writing💩. Who could compete with him on the martial arts channel back then? I am writing now💩

To be honest, he wrote it in the style of "go away." When I first read it, I saw the shadow of "go away." I have to say that the imitation is very charming. Of course, the ending is just like "go away."