Fantasy Prototype Artist of Shape Moon

After reading Chapter 40, I couldn't bear it anymore. I couldn't bear the author's self-righteous moaning. But the protagonist is the Riddler throughout, all the so-called foreshadowing, and the so-called behavior really make me want to vomit.

The author added too many personal items when describing it. The fighting was neither passionate nor dangerous. It felt very complicated and too jumpy. One sentence moved from the main plot to the personal items, and the next sentence pulled back again. It felt like there was no emotional continuity and it failed to make people more interested. The writing is quite detailed, but I guess it's more intended to attract senior fans, and ordinary people won't be able to enjoy it.

Big brothers, although Rin and Sakura are sisters, they are not twins. They are about a year apart.

Looking at the introduction, the main character is the Moonlight Butterfly who can do everything right, right?

The author who ate Xiang, fed the protagonist. . . .

After reading ten chapters, I feel confused. The author's note-taking skills are too weak... The sluggish writing style cannot be saved

The Riddler makes me irritated when I watch it. I hate the Riddler the most when playing games.

The people in the Clock Tower don't know the inside story of the Holy Grail War at all. Not to mention that they can open the way to the source, they don't even know about the third method.

Wow! Real! After reading Chapter 40, I don't want to read anymore! He suddenly went out of his way to kill Henry for no reason. I originally thought I could knock him down easily, but in the end I only had the power of one blow. Is this a joke? ! Even writing this out of self-reliance is too much.

No passion at all, as light as water

Let's talk about how the protagonist wears Xingyue

Can anyone who has ordered the book tell me which chapter the "fantasy archetype" in this title is reflected in? After reading the free chapters, I felt that they were not related to the theme.

It's too messy. Even if it's messy, I still have to be the Riddler. Fighting is also inexplicable to force the plot. Saving the beauty is inexplicable. Fighting the monster is also inexplicable. Sorry, I can't handle it in chapter 40. It feels like a light change of the protagonist of Long Aotian in the animation.

The author is very careful, but the narrative device of disaster and the unintelligible wording basically ruin the story.

There are too many supporting roles, and it feels a bit slow.

The author can later equip the protagonist with a beam rifle, beam pistol, beam saber, and beam sniper rifle. The entire humanoid Gundam is powered by a magic power hybrid system.

To be honest, I can't understand it. The most annoying thing is the protagonist, the Riddler, and his self-righteousness.

There is no logic at all in the writing, and the character is casual, but he is not looking for death. The protagonist is not a person who wants to die. He is a prophet. I first thought about the time traveler. Does he have invincible power to do these things?

This novel is just the author's own pleasure

Where is the main line of the story Oops, a story without a main line I don't know why, but I feel so angry when I look at it Isn't the main goal of enrolling in school? Trouble continues

There are so many troubles It keeps making people jump to watch Although it's not finished, it's well written, but it's a pity that the plot is so poorly designed