Draw the King's Treasure at the Beginning of Tomb Robbery

A thinking system... Bad review

The writing style is okay, not too poisonous, but the setting is quite bad! There is also the long list behind the main character panel, which makes EF+ uncomfortable to watch. There is also the King's Treasure, which is awesome for ordering food! ! Shouldn't the new Wang Cai be empty? In addition, the author would like to remind you that if you have anything to say, you can say it in this chapter. Do not add parentheses after a large paragraph, and then be forced to do so. The interruption will make you want to curse! !

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

This book title. . . I haven't watched it yet, but I have a question, after having the King's Treasure, do you still rob tombs? If you steal yourself, it will be over 😰

Brother Nian, besides tomb robbing, can you write some other elements?

I suggest the author change the title and introduction of the book. Tomb robbing is tomb robbing. Don't robbing tombs for a while and Hongmeng for a while. The span is too big and my mind can't wrap my head around it.

Am I the only one who thinks the six-winged centipede is suitable as a mount? Wouldn't it be beautiful if you stepped on a centipede and floated in the sky?

I feel like the plot went over too fast

I think there can be a supplementary building or something 🤭

Is this what the King's Treasure looks like? , You think I haven't seen fate

You talked about tomb robbing on the train, and you were quite bold. Secondly: Hu Bayi didn't go there just for fighting. Hu Bayi answered whatever you asked. Thirdly: Hu Bayi had never fought with you or you didn't show any skills, so Hu Bayi thought you were very powerful...

Draw the King's Treasure at the beginning of Tomb Robbery

The author won't weaken the king's treasure, right?

It's too that, oh, generally speaking, it doesn't look like it, there are some random moves. It seems a bit messy, but overall it's pretty good.

The novel Tomb Raider is suitable for writing about physical skills and details. It is not suitable for writing about invincibility and suspense. You can use less supernatural stuff.

It feels so messy. . .

I'm cured and I can be a monster again hahahaꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*)

I can't stand it. I can't see the writing.

Brother, what you wrote is so messy. The title is the first to arrive at the ancient city of Jingjue. But you ran to rob the tomb in Niuxin Mountain in Outer Mongolia. What you encountered in Niuxin Mountain was a ghost show. The general's tomb is in the Yeren ditch adjacent to the Daxingan Mountains. What you met there is the Japanese base and the general's tomb. And where are the golden masks in the general's tomb? The golden mask is in the tomb of the king in Yunnan. I didn't expect you to write the Niuxin Mountain barbarian ditch And other people's tombs are dug in and have mechanisms. When the protagonist enters, he just enters without bb. Even Zhu Tianwen has to pay attention to logic. I hope the author will write better and better in the future.

Don't ask, just ask because you just woke up. . .

I remember that the magic power of the King's Treasure consumes very little. Ergamesh will use the "King's Treasure" to shoot out the prototypes of all the Noble Phantasms like bullets in battle. In this way, compared to its destructive power, the efficiency of magic power is excellent. Since each Noble Phantasm is shot like a bullet, the actual magic power used is only the activation amount of "The King's Treasure". Mushroom seems to have said that if D level represents 10, then C level is 20, B is 30, A is 40, + is doubled (not normal, it can explode several times of power in an instant), for example, C is 20, C+ is 40, C++ is 80, ex is immeasurable

The king's treasure was cut into dogs. . . . Since I want to write about it, why can't I be invincible even if I cut it into a tomb robbing movie?

Wearing the skin of a tomb robber, we still don't fill the hole for the tomb robbers. Later, I diverged my thinking and added various elements such as divine warfare. I'm tired and can't understand! Stop watching

It's so damn chaotic, one moment in Beijing and the other in Tomb of the Savages.

Is it really good for the author to use the setting of Xingyue... The e-level of the heroic spirit attribute is already ten times that of a normal person... And the plus sign represents the multiple of the explosion. This lowest e-attribute can be directly pushed in the world of tomb robbers... How can this be played?