The Lucky Draw of All Heavens and Worlds

I don't understand, Aba Aba😥

Chapter 1: Hu Bayi and Fatty Wang went back to their hometown not to rob tombs, but to collect antiques. However, they decided to go to Yerengou after not receiving any, and accidentally discovered the ancient tomb. If you want to write a good fan fiction, details are the most important! Second: The pronouns are a bit flawed, and the plot is too tight. Third: The details of the characters are not in place. Fourth: The plot is unreasonable and not realistic enough.           (The protagonist joins the team too easily, which lowers the IQ of the supporting characters.)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  otherwise unless the reader has not read it, otherwise, it is all poisonous. Hope these can help you.

I was bored in the hospital. (⌯꒪꒫꒪)੭ु⁾⁾I'm eating dirt _(:τ∠)_So boring

With no money, I have already trained my cooking skills to the first level, which is too difficult.

Terrible punctuation marks. . . .

A message to the author: Author, you can learn to polished your pen. I feel a little awkward after reading the first few chapters. Chapter 23: The chapter about subduing pets is also one where you suddenly subdue pets. It feels a bit embarrassing and could be polished up a bit. Polishing can improvise the word count and make readers read it happily and it doesn't look dry at all. 😁

Pay attention to your sentences, brother.

Don't include the scenes from the TV series in the book because they are incoherent.

It's a bit embarrassing to read. Come on, the author's writing skills are lacking and need to be improved. I wish your writing skills will get better and better.

There is no sense of immersion at all. It looks a little awkward and a little irritating.

If you like watching tomb robbers, you can go and watch it.

The more you watch, the more addictive you become 🥱🥱

I just read the first chapter, and I was speechless when I saw the last PS. It was outrageous. The book was finished in the early 300s, so I started reading from chapter 200 onwards.

This line of writing gives people a headache when reading the broken sentences.

If you are interested, you can check it out, but I still recommend waiting for Lao Pan. . .

You only send QQ reading and QQ reading, and there are too few tomb robbers.

It feels like writing a play, but there are too few narrations.

It's so invincible that it turns into a running account.

I slipped away and went to read your new book.

There are so many typos that I can't connect, so it's a bit difficult to read.

There are still some things that are finished without even being written, which is too hasty.

After reading Chapter 32, I gave up.

Sword Art Online was inserted into the tomb robbing story, and the style of painting changed drastically, making the whole book weird.

Does the heroine have Aning? I just watched the final note An Ning's death and I feel heartbroken 😭