Revolution: the Road to the Ninja World

Evaluation of this book: OK Rating: 8 points (out of 10 points) Advantages: (I am not very familiar with anime such as Naruto, Pokémon, and One Piece. Please forgive me if the evaluation is wrong) The setting is clear. As a classic fanfic, the author cleverly combines the settings. I have watched several Naruto fanfics before. Although I don't particularly understand Naruto, they are almost completely confused in terms of setting. The setting of this book is very clear and independent, and the setting of the protagonist Goldfinger-Mandala is even more novel. 2. As a fanfic, this book conforms to the basic plot logic, such as chakra and ninjutsu. At least it will not make people feel weird. 3. The writing is good. The battle scenes are described in great detail. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are extremely strong, and his observation of battles in anime is even more meticulous. Giving suggestions: 1. I personally think that since the protagonist has a golden finger, he should show the power of the golden finger and not use too much pen and ink to write unnecessary battles. 2. Not attractive. In fact, the author can set up more foreshadowing. To put it simply, it is a bit too single. He can depict each character from different perspectives, so that it will not appear ordinary and ordinary.

The introduction is not attractive and the chapter title is not attractive.

I don't know if it's because it's slow to warm up or because I can't write a world-style story. After reading it, I feel like it's like hundreds of people fighting with each other.

The writing is okay. Why is there no one?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I read 50 pictures in one go. How can I put it? It feels like it's worthless. Maybe I didn't read it carefully.