People Are Landlords in Tokyo

The inheritance is only 5 million yen, so I need to pay a salary of 150,000? Tuition fee is still 10 million? In the author's words, if you save 5 million, you can use it for many years. Is your 1,000 thousand tuition fee a bit outrageous?

The book is very good It's a pity that I am a male Tong I just want to fence with the author

Emmm... Let me tell you my subjective feelings. After I came out of Asakawa Town, my interest in reading dropped slightly, and then I insisted on reading a few chapters before feeling uninterested. Because this insertion feels like it is chronological with the current plot. I think Asakawa's plot appears at this time, and it feels like a loser's viewing experience. If it comes out when Mafuyao is about to take the exam (the plot is getting better), it would be acceptable, but the author has packed too many things in the first dozen chapters (there are Yuna and Yao, who are studying hard for the exam, but suddenly a child who is a bit unreasonable appears). The plot is a bit hazy, which can easily ruin the viewer's impression. Well, that's probably my subjective opinion. See you next time (´°ω°｀)

The plot started when Ko Asakawa appeared.

Chapters 106 and 107 touched my heart 😂 I just had something troublesome today, but when I think about the contents of these two chapters, I always feel a little relieved. Hey, I took a screenshot with my phone and looked at it a few times later when I was in a bad mood. This can be considered to relieve my mood 😂

Understand?

The first chapter felt weird! The rent in Tokyo is 4,000 yuan? ? ? What is the concept of 4000 yen? ? ! !

At the end of the writing, I felt like I wanted to learn from the daily life of Japanese anime with a lot of plots and so on. But! It's an anime, do you understand if it has pictures? The subject matter of your light novel is very interesting. I just read it to see you, the landlady, raise a girl and mix it with daily life, short stories, etc. You want to do something fancy. Time Travel Girl? Discuss what is the component of love in a person? Where are the lost sisters? Can these be written? Of course you can write it, and slowly write it out in a book of one to two million words. I think it is OK. How many words do you have now? What is your positioning? Of course this is just an opinion. It doesn't matter whether you think it makes sense or not. The important thing is to see how many subscriptions you have. 🙂

The appearance of Asakawa Town was so awkward. The plot was obviously progressing well, but suddenly something disturbing appeared. The theme is obviously very clear, relying on golden fingers to help beautiful girls go to Dongda University, and at the same time, invisible and flirting with girls. As a result, a homeless orphan girl appeared, which was completely different from the previous painting style.

To be honest, I don't really like the character of Ko Asakawa, so I didn't want to watch it until halfway through. The first part was fine, but I'll rely on you guys to watch the second part. If it's good, please give me a hint and I'll come back to watch it.

Full-service tutoring, full tuition refund if you don't pass the Qingbei exam, plus a baby, only for beautiful girls

I feel that ever since Asakawa appeared, the plot has become depressing. Depression comes from all directions, the misunderstanding between the protagonist and Yao, Yuna's difficulty in finding her parents, and the unclear sadness from Asakawa. Although there is a warm plot in the end, the protagonist does not seem to have any outstanding performance in it. His fear and avoidance of feelings seem to be the key to promoting this depression. Asakawa Town gives people a very contradictory feeling. On the one hand, she shows strong affection and possessiveness towards the protagonist, but on the other hand, she seems to be actively promoting the relationship between the protagonist and other girls. She seems to be the product of a tragedy, coming for a perfect future, but judging from her performance, it seems that the price for her is another tragedy. I don't think the ending of this book will be a tragic ending, but the process may not be that easy.

The plot setting is so weird. If you can't control several women, don't show up at the same time, and you won't be able to cultivate the feelings you should have. No desire to subscribe

Accommodation, tutoring, girls, if you say that, the author, I won't be sleepy anymore

Author, you can stop and re-revise the previous ones. To be honest, after just about ten minutes of watching, Asakawa, whose origin and function is unknown, started to mess around inexplicably. As a character, I really couldn't see her positioning in the early stages. The characters appeared very abruptly, as if you were eating, and you made every soup and dish yourself, but there was an extra handful of rat shit inexplicably. Furthermore, I would like to suggest that the appearance of Asakawa, who is extremely uncomfortable to watch, be changed. Just use a few strokes of ink and arrange it into the apartment. For example, it is a bit roundabout, but you can meet it directly on the street, so you can't just go to the door? There is obviously a better arrangement, but it has already been done for hundreds of years, and I still insist on fighting this. Can't I change it? I only saw the giant death-defying rhythm, Asakawa appeared and the group of people went out inexplicably. Really, you are just a tutor, what kind of bicycle do you want? Thirty years before time travel, I had several daughters, and I still flirted with young girls? Are you cheap or not? Do you understand that you started in three years?

It's too riddle-like, it digs a lot of holes, and its writing style is a bit literary.

This is the most dog-licking male protagonist I have ever seen, bar none

Book club group: 747579047 Brothers are welcome to fill in ^_^

Please tell me about the relationship between Asakawa and Yuna

The author's writing is very good and I can keep reading. Will you write another book? Don't give up😡

The pace is a bit fast, and it feels like there are dozens of chapters missing in the middle.

I thought it was okay at first, but after Chapter 30, I started to get a little confused and the writing felt a bit messy (only my personal opinion)

So far, I feel it's okay. It'll be good to keep it this way. Good luck, author!

Let's do a story about someone else in the future! ! !

Why are there so many harem stories? What year is it?

Compared to other excellent novels, the writing is not bad, but the plot is honestly in line with my inner fantasies. Good luck to the author.

4,000 Yen is too much! Other people's houses have been sold for more than this price. An apartment costs 200 yuan a month. Do you think no one will come to Japan's social workplace?