Hogwarts Book of Truth

After reading the plot, I feel that the author may have added the plot that happened to Harry Potter to the protagonist, and there are also some obvious mistakes in the relationship between the names and characters in some details.

For those who haven't read the original work, it should be quite interesting. There are indeed too many flaws. Perhaps if the author talks about his writing ideas at the beginning, the results will be better. I have to say that in almost every chapter you can find deviations from the original work.

After reading a few more chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I deleted it first. No way, too many errors

There is something wrong with the plot, so I don't recommend you watch it.

The third picture, "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" written by David Yates, who is this person? Could it be that I watched the fake Harry Potter, so why don't I revise it now that I don't have enough to write? Your third post will dissuade many people from writing about how to find information on Harry Potter.

It feels okay, but author, with this setting, the heroine should have nothing to do with Hermione, right? The heroine decides on the routine

The third picture, "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" written by David Yates, who is this person? Could it be that I watched the fake Harry Potter, so why don't I revise it now that I don't have enough to write? Your third post will dissuade many people from writing about how to find information on Harry Potter.

The details are too poor... First-year students are not allowed to participate in Quidditch, not to mention that the protagonist enrolls early. Even if he follows the example of Harry Potter and joins the team as an exception because of his excellent skills, it should be Dean Snape who invites him to join the team. How can it be the captain of the team who invites him?

I don't go into the details of the plot, but the issue of the heroine and the sisters really makes me want to criticize them. If I can't write it well, I won't write it. Author, don't you read what this chapter says?

Seeing Quirrell appear, he decided to abandon the book🙏

The diary is the first piece of Voldemort's soul that was split when he was a boy, and its image is also the image of the split at that time. Because it splits early, it is also the easiest to be eliminated...

First of all, there is no need to apparate in Hogwarts. Secondly, there is a problem with Quirrell's appearance. Then, the writing is a bit stiff, and some of the original content is wrong. Finally, the writing of the sisters is not good, especially the younger sister is a bit annoying, and the plot is not good.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~