The System Forces Me to Plan

In fact, the writing style is not small, and there are many poisonous points. . . But the biggest problem is that the basic presets cannot be written well. The preset points are either impossible to write or conflict with each other. I wrote a long paragraph and found it too troublesome to explain, so I complained directly. The preset points include "a brainless male protagonist who tries every means to defraud the RMB", "a low cash consumption requirement (if you don't count the constant draws, because you can't finish writing a single system)" (conflicts with each other), "extremely malicious restrictions on players", "a system that is drawn in order to reduce the viciousness of conflicts", "there will be monsters to attack the city in the future" (conflicts with each other) and "system If there is too much content, then pick a few and it will be a mess" (must be written poorly), "system with too low b-level", "demand with too low b-level", "krypton gold with too low b-level" (must be written poorly), "messy plot", "no data", "brainless charging" (must be written poorly) There are many more, but there is no need to write them all. In fact, the core question is what audience are you going to show it to? Anyway, it is definitely not for the audience who seriously like this kind of "protagonist summoning players" system, because this kind of audience likes the collision between the fourth natural disaster and another world, likes the construction of detailed content, likes the players' unique ingenuity, and likes planning and players to make trouble with each other. . . But I definitely won't like a group of krypton gold sows who don't write about collisions, troublemaking, or construction. (I wrote more about fighting monsters, but the content is still pitiful.) Forget it, it's useless to say more. A book with an innate theme setting is meaningless. The prologue is even more confusing than what you have already written. The individual martial arts or black souls are written in a mess. Why do you have the courage to "borrow" so many systems in one go?

The monster siege is a complete failure. The protagonist's setting is to steal money even if he loses his life. The weakening of the profession is a stupid plan, and it also reveals an worrying IQ. What players lose is money, and the protagonist's life is not easy to lose. What is the concept of 90% realism? The turnover of a certain Blue Moon can exceed 100 million, so we are worried about player churn and no follow-up recharge. First of all, the protagonist has competition in the virtual online game genre. Is there any pressure? Not at all. As I said before, VR is only in its infancy. Of course, the author insists on finding a comparable opponent in the book. I didn't say that. Imagine, in reality, a game with 90% realism. Do you want to play it? Back to the book, there are monsters to attack the city, but it threatens the protagonist's life. The protagonist also weakens his own units, which is completely brainless. In the later stage, when the players develop and the level is high, there are more players and then weaken it. , Wouldn't it be better to rely on strong players to get through the dangerous period in the early stage to show off the bad planning? It can be said that it is a non-deleted internal test to the outside world, and the previous positioning of the soul master profession, completely taking off the pants and farting is set to be all-powerful but completely mediocre, or simply set it to a basic profession, which can be transferred to other professions later, such as the sword spirit to become a sword fairy, the auxiliary spirit to become a priest, etc., And then the task of changing the profession is cumbersome, in the task Some of the props in the game can be bought and purchased, isn't that more embarrassing? Then you can simply set the professions that are not connected with the martial soul as hidden professions, and advertise to the outside world that there are countless hidden professions waiting for you to explore. In this way, you have the money, and the rationality is also there. In addition, if anyone finds fault, please fill in the loopholes yourself. After all, it just took me a few minutes to come up with it while typing. If there were no loopholes, I would go directly to the interview planner. Will I type here?

A very serious question, where does the money you earn go? The initial stage is fine, but what will happen later? You can only get this money in but not out, when the time comes

Meow Meow.

When will the author become like this

Come on, I'm getting fatter, I hope you won't be disappointed😔

True Lucky Cat

Your updates are getting less and less, which is very worrying.

I vomited. How long has it been?

The author has invested, come on!

Not bad, not bad 😁

Did the world choose Douluo?

Is the author's logic normal? Because you don't want to cut leeks that can be rolled up and gone, so you want to make high-end props limited edition items for the whole server? Take a look at those games that release limited-edition items for the entire server. What are they like? Any game that is not an assembly-line game that can be cut off in one go, but a game that has long-term stable operation will be a dream for prostitute players.

Is Wuhun very perverted? It's too impressive, it's mediocre compared to those gaming professions, isn't it?

Recently, more and more friends are reading the book, and some of the things mentioned by readers are indeed things that the author has not considered, and there are problems with the design. Thanks in advance for everyone's opinions. The author must actively study and correct what he can. If he can't, he must make sure not to make the same mistake again. I also hope that more readers and friends can speak out enthusiastically. As long as they do not engage in personal attacks, I will continue to use venomous remarks!