At the Beginning, Write Down the Magic Skill Yi Jin Jing

A good novel can often reflect a writer's culture, realm, knowledge, experience, etc.! 1: It's a really good subject matter, individual characters are clearly depicted, but the description of the environment is vague; 2: I won't mention the frequent typos and rough writing. Everything is difficult at the beginning, and it can be seen that the author is a novice with little background; 3: The protagonist's character is shaped into a free and undisciplined person, but I don't feel that he is very free and unrestrained. He is a teacher who teaches and solves doubts, but he feels like a nanny. 4: With such a strong golden finger, go and see how flowers bloom, how trees grow, how graves are dug, how dogs are raised, etc. Wouldn't it be nice to live in a colorful and different world? Fight without fighting, and train a few demon emperors and Taoist masters by the way. Isn't it nice? 5: I can't train someone to be independent, I have to do everything by myself, it's hard, haha, the system flow is all about cool writing, I'm not willing to be the protagonist, so there's no sense of involvement. 6: There are some details that I won't go into. Whether it's right or not, it just represents my personal opinion! 7: The reason why I say so much today because I usually read books without saying a word is because I feel that the author is quite nice and still young. If writing is a hobby, you might as well be bolder. If you hope to make money through writing, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on!

I was speechless when I saw this state. Is half a step still a state? Shouldn't it be that you don't have enough foundation to break through to the next big realm? What is called half a step? He also has to specifically break through the half-step realm, which is really the effect of a mouse excrement.

Anyway, there are quite a lot of settings. Reading the book written by the protagonist can give back to the protagonist, but this point is not explained in depth. The overall style should be a relatively leisurely plot, but it seems to have fallen into the routine of upgrading and fighting monsters. At the beginning, it was difficult to see the first grade. Several founders of the Tang Dynasty did not arrive to transform into spirits, so they waited for the protagonist to transform into spirits. The Tang Kingdom has transformed spirits and half-step spirits. Countries here have them. How can the Tang Kingdom maintain its rule for hundreds of years under such circumstances? At first, when the old dean of the college was not dead, the style was good. The more I wrote, the more I fell into a strange circle. I feel like it is another set of traditional routines for upgrading monsters and killing monsters, and most of the maps are not changed? Map expanded? The protagonist becomes stronger step by step, and then someone similar to the protagonist will always appear.

Don't give the protagonist a heroine. In this kind of book, the heroine has a part-time job and affects the appearance of the city. If you want to read romance, you won't read this kind of book. It's obviously not a love story, so don't be fooled. Many of the heroines are superfluous. If you really want to see products, you might as well read pornographic books and periodicals, right?

After reading the introduction, the Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty should be from the Illustrated Book of the God of War, and the Eight Parts of Tianlong should be from the Beiming Divine Art. If there are good ones, don't insist on inferior ones. Are you sick?

Parents who are reborn through time travel will disappear! The younger sister's maid must be beautiful. The younger sister's maid must be caught when she goes out to hunt in the wild. She goes out to Xinshou Village to find her parents and is happy to mention her younger brother. The younger brother must think that his older brother is fighting for the family property! The bloody plot has begun.

The subject matter is good and I'll see if I can write 200 chapters.

I also know that low-level martial arts can't keep up. I just write a journey to the west. Even the garbage I smoke is better than yours. You have written a lot. I don't even know what they are smoking. You must write high-wu.

I find that there is a common problem in this type of novels. You are given a golden finger and you still don't know how to use it (or the author doesn't have enough brains). Why do the characteristics of martial arts have to be written according to the original work? Something that doesn't exist in another world. For a book written entirely based on the protagonist, no one stipulates that the Yi Jin Jing cannot also have the characteristics of Beiming Shen Gong. The protagonist can completely write the characteristics of multiple martial arts secret books into one book. After learning the "Yi Jin Jing", it can not only cleanse the tendons and cut the marrow, but also be immune to all poisons like the Nine Yangs. The true energy can be restored very quickly, and it can also absorb other people's internal energy like the Beiming Divine Art. Writing in this way allows you to use your own brain and be creative.

I hope the author can read this comment. First of all, the author's writing style, character description, and the control of the book are very good. Logically speaking, the performance of the book should be better than it is now, but it is still the current performance. I have some thoughts after reading the book The problem I see is that the protagonist's character is seriously inconsistent with the world background of the book. The general environment of the book is a one-star kingdom and a two-star kingdom. During the Holy Dynasty and when the country level changes, the aura within the country will be upgraded and other benefits will occur. What kind of environment is this? This is the world environment of the Yun Dynasty. If the protagonist is an emperor, he will become stronger and create skills that will spread throughout the country and the people will become stronger. The country upgrades, various countries compete for hegemony, heroes compete, and finally unify the world, create the supreme divine dynasty, and the whole country ascends. Only such a protagonist can fit in perfectly with the world background. (The author's writing style is definitely extraordinary) But the protagonist, in the world background of Yunchao Liu, is an escapist setting of Xianyun Yehe, which is seriously inappropriate. After all, it would be fine for Xianyun Yehe to escape from the world, but this Xianyun Yehe is the protagonist, so various conflicts must be arranged to advance the plot, but The protagonist's escapist setting like Xianyunyehe will not advance the plot. This is how the character is, so there must be an entry point for the protagonist to arrange the plot. This entry point is the Tang Dynasty, so as we have seen, various accidents happened in the Tang Dynasty, and the protagonist helped Datang to deal with the aftermath. This aftermath is the development of the plot But The problem arises again. There is absolutely no need for the protagonist to help Datang, and he does not owe Datang. Datang has no blood relationship with the protagonist, so he helps Datang. Datang is also wary of all kinds. The emperor secretly cultivates forces to suppress the protagonist, and has a posture of killing the protagonist once Datang is strong enough. If the protagonist still helps Datang, the audience's senses will be very bad, but also I can't blame the author, because there is no way to develop the plot of the protagonist. The Tang Dynasty is the entry point. The protagonist Xianyun Yehe is set, and he can only rely on helping the Tang Dynasty to promote the plot. Things keep happening in the Tang Dynasty, and the protagonist keeps making peace. B is the emperor and it is the protagonist who pretends to be troublesome. The setting of the protagonist Xianyun Yehe is stuck in this area. If the Tang Dynasty is changed, there is also the Ming Dynasty. In the Song Dynasty, the protagonist has no choice but to tie himself to a country, and then help the country to maintain peace in order to promote the plot. Because the general environment of the world is the flow of fortune, and the theme of country upgrading, so the protagonist looks like the aggrieved nanny of the Tang Dynasty, and the golden finger of the Emperor of the Tang Dynasty. This is what I said is the key point of the protagonist's character being seriously inconsistent with the background environment of the world. As for modifications, I have written more than one million words. How to modify it? Hey, the author should pay attention next time, after all, the writing style is not bad.

Copy the Jidao Demon, Deep Blue takes it out, then continue to write and exchange points, directly exchange for gold fingers to take off.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style can't be mastered

The protagonist becomes more and more like a butt wiper,

The name of the realm is a bit too exaggerated. The second realm is the void, and the third realm is the universe. However, the first three realms of the protagonist's world cannot go to the universe, and there is no concept of the universe. It's just the level of martial arts.

There are too many wars and they never stop! What's the point of fighting back and forth, or the protagonist coming out to wipe his butt alone? It's better to just push the protagonist alone! I really don't understand why all the powerful people like to stay at home and develop? Can't we go out and develop? Doesn't everyone in the cultivation system have to go out and find resources to upgrade? It seems that if you find strong people from various countries, if they develop within their own country, they will die if they go out! You can't even look for opportunities, so what else can you say?

How come there are some modern words like office work in the first place? Is this serious? ? Also, the number of comments is a bit obvious.

The genuine Jiuyin should be the Jiuyin Divine Claw, not the White Bone Claw.

Ten years later, the protagonist is invincible. It's really lonely🙂🙂

In the past two years, it has been all about pretending to be a pig, and there is no main line floating in the wind.

Why does it feel like the content after charging starts to become a bit like a running account...

Where does the protagonist's road to pretense begin?

Next, if the devil comes out of the seal, the protagonist has to kill him with words in full view of the public. Then the protagonist taught others, and from then on, everyone in Kirin Academy started playing Honor of Kings. 😁

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Creative, but not much else.

The author should be locked up in a small dark room, with a beam hanging over his head and a cone stabbing his buttocks, and if he doesn't write, he should be whipped with a whip. 🐶

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Good water, the character expressions are not delicate enough, and the plot is too blunt. But not poisonous

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