The King of the Comic World

Overall rating: Average (no obvious poisonous points) The following are just personal opinions. If you disagree, just discuss it rationally or leave A good idea, and the writing is excellent for such a novice Let's not talk about the writing first, let's talk about the plot First of all, the description of the characters in the plot is average, and it does not give the feeling of the character itself. It is just a character with the same name. Furthermore, the portrayal and depth of the characters are too dull. The protagonist is very poor in character. Why is it so poor? In the plot, the protagonist has always been dispensable. In fact, the author has not given the feeling that the protagonist is the core (leader) until now. In this way, Arthur People who keep their promises and others can completely follow others. In more than 50 chapters, I haven't seen anything about the protagonist that is worthy of being followed by heroes. The whole process is just saying that because I got the system, you have to follow me So far, I personally have not seen any portrayal of the protagonist's personality charm, making readers feel that the protagonist is a person. The plot is very inexplicable and fast forwards to the point where Arthur and others are about to follow the protagonist. The characterization is basically zero, and the depth of each character is gone. If this is the case, it is better not to write about heroes following the protagonist After talking about the protagonist, let's talk about the supporting roles Let's talk about the heroine first - Wonder Woman I am very curious if you are going to have a harem, and how do you plan to deal with the relationship between the characters? Let's talk about the first heroine first. Just a Diana is difficult to handle. As a heroine, a princess, and a self-improving woman, I can't see it at all in the author's novels. This Diana is completely the product of your own lust. Let's not talk about how Diana's values ​​​​have changed after you have been away for 20 years. If you are just a polygamist, you will be finished DC's heroic characters are not as promiscuous as Marvel, but! He would not accept this, so the character died before he could stand up. It's just an empty shell with the same name The subsequent female characters such as Carter must have collapsed before they even stood up, because the biggest consequence of the harem is the collapse of female characters, especially those who already have personalities Then let's talk about the male characters, this is even more useless Take America, for example, this can have the same spirit as Nini Shi Da Li In the hands of the author, the soul character is just a little boy trapped in love I have been emphasizing how much Captain America misses Carter. This is a complete collapse of the character, okay? In fact, the protagonist has blocked the opportunity for the two people to get along before, so how can Captain America care too much about who a friend falls in love with? Besides, if you are writing about Captain America because of It's understandable that the male protagonist is half-hearted and dissatisfied with the protagonist, because Diana has been his aunt for 20 years, so who do you think Captain America will turn to more? Yes There are many plots that seem very sudden, and the rationality in the plot is missing For example, if you meet the promise-keeper inexplicably, and then suddenly follow there is no rationality at all. Even if the protagonist has the power of red and blue to prove it, so what This can mean that the protagonist must follow the protagonist to keep the promise? Can't he find his brother by himself? Let's talk about the two heroes Lu Ban and Bian Que. They are very stiff now The people above were still talking about how powerful Lu Ban was, and then they caught him... Bian Que, even more so, is a mage playing melee with you? Do you think Bian Que is an idiot because he doesn't have enough combat experience in the King's Continent? ? ? The same goes for Lu Ban, so your plot is blunt Physical persuasion is not impossible, but it must be normal As a hero from the King of Continent, I don't think these heroes have less combat experience than the protagonist, so the protagonist can defeat them so easily? Let's just say these few things. I'll check it out next time and see how the author writes... I hope the author writes better and better The above are just personal opinions. If you don't agree, just discuss it rationally or leave