The Devil Is Coming

The timeline is confusing and it makes my head spin. I feel that the author jumps too much. It takes a lot of energy to think about when the author wrote, what characters, and what he is doing... It's so tiring.

I always feel that the protagonist is very pretentious and doesn't look like a villain.

What is the protagonist doing to become stronger? For women? It feels like the protagonist is just a puppet, doing whatever the Lord God tells him to do and playing around without any purpose. Even a novice harem is more passionate than what you wrote.

There are a lot of private goods and the plot is average. Still a bit literary. Creativity can still be seen. Hay. Eat a lot and be full.

Complaints are completely different from what is written in the introduction

Doesn't the author consider opening a QQ group or something like that? This makes it easier to exchange ideas with readers and open up your imagination together!

The span of your world is a bit wide. One is a cultivator, the other is a magician, and you don't know each other. It's just an old game. . . This span is very challenging for readers.

After reading the comments from all the big guys, it is no surprise that the protagonist is nothing. If he is named as a villain but does not have any actual villainy, the book will be diluted.

Doesn't look like a villain at all, boring

The content is quite good, but I am a little tired from reading it... I need to keep up with the author's writing rhythm and jumping thinking...

The next volume will write that The King of Fighters can change Orochi's environmental protection to earth protection.

The first few chapters had nothing to do with the villain. After I accepted the cautious protagonist, the difficulty level went from hell to heaven.

The author has been scolded very badly, but I think it's okay. Why is he being criticized? Author, please give me a reply.

Brother, I feel so bored as a full-time master. Can I have some JOJO?

At the beginning, especially the Zixuan part, it was very awkward, so what happened next? There is also confusion about people's hearts. I wonder what is so confusing about this? Everyone knows not to take the human nature test, so you know what this is like.

All in all, I feel that the protagonist is inexplicable Sometimes for one reason, and now for another reason, all of which are quite strange. . . . That's it. . . You might as well set the protagonist to be a fun-loving person, I am happy, I am happy, I am happy, no clear reasons are needed As a result, now I am fighting against the injustice of the female baby, and now I want to unify the six realms, what is the goal? The protagonist's character is inexplicable

If you look at Xian Jian carefully, you will find that Xie Jian Xian has seen through the human world and human heart. He is an amazing philosopher and psychologist.

To be honest, this doesn't feel like a villain at all. Such a good subject matter of traveling through the world and becoming a villain is written in a mediocre way. It doesn't have the feeling of the protagonist traveling through the world and becoming a villain and fighting step by step against the decent. The plot is as bland as water. When I saw the title below, I thought it was a very exciting novel. Now I feel like I have been deceived by the headline party. I really can't burn it 😒