Wang Lun of Water Margin

There are too few updates at one time, not enough to watch, I am impatient, I am the most impatient person, but there is nothing I can do, just bear with it! 😅😅😅

I will never forget Survival in Water Margin, the ceiling for Water Margin fans, and I will not accept refutation 🤭

The main reason is that Water Margin has many three views that are not in line with modern times. It is said that Water Margin should be watched in a rebellious spirit. Isn't it good to watch modern history? Three mountains have been overthrown. Although it has revived, it is to do it again.

Song Jiang should be killed. He was so indecisive. The Song Jiang I saw in movies and TV shows had no abilities at all. He was the first to surrender. In the end, he caused a group of people to escape with him and escaped death.

Has Water Margin Survival been blocked by the descendants of Song Jiang? I hope to write about Song Jiang to death again 🙂🙂🙂🙂

He ruined Song Jiang's reputation. He was the most disgusting person in the Water Margin except for those who sold human flesh.

Author, I would like to make a comment. Eating meat all the time is too luxurious. I don't even eat meat all the time, and neither do modern people, let alone ancient times? It's too exaggerated, and I almost died from poisoning.

The poisonous point: three meals a day, every meal contains meat.

Meat was available for three meals a day. In ancient times when productivity was low, we didn't even think about it. What's more, now there are only 800 people, so what if there are 80,000 people in the future? Or should we still have meat for three meals a day? There is no hierarchy. How can we mobilize enthusiasm if all soldiers eat the same food?

When he saw in Chapter 65 that Wu Yong was described by the author as a Zhuge Liang-level mastermind, it was too poisonous. He said, "Teacher, he really doesn't have any skills. He hasn't put too many poisons on the shelves. Eating meat is nothing. People and ghosts all gathered and said goodbye...

The writing is really bad, the writing style of junior high school, the culture of elementary school, a long and short sentence, the bandits in the Song Dynasty could eat three meals a day? They also had to eat meat for every meal? In 2021, ask how many people around you eat meat three meals a day. But it's pretty good. The first chapter is about all kinds of poisons. You don't need to waste money and time. One chapter can dissuade most readers.

I finally saw Wang Lun as the protagonist again. I still remember the days when I watched "Water Margin". Unfortunately, that book was too eunuch.

A brief review: Exceeded expectations, shorter than cool. The entry point of this book is relatively plain, starting from the earliest days of Liangshan. Naturally, there is no tension or excitement. In this way, we can farm steadily step by step. Fortunately, the author's writing skills are good, and he is comprehensive and well-prepared without too many words to persuade him. However, the full text reads smoothly, but it is a bit too refreshing. There isn't even a big wave, which, except for true Water Margin fans, is very discouraging to casual readers. It doesn't feel like a follow-up read. This is the key to the performance of your book. ...... Come again, let's talk about a few minor discomforts. Every meal has meat. It's not considered poisonous, but it's obviously not appropriate. This should not be the way to win over people when starting a copycat business, as this will definitely pave the way for trouble in the future. There are so many people, how can there be so much meat? ...... Go on, arrange your seats! There are many most attractive places in Liangshang Mountain, one of which is the ranking. And you, Cha Cha, feel better without this substitution. Also, there is a lot of college knowledge in the seating arrangement, don't say you don't need it. Arranging your characters can make your characters more layered, distinct, and endearing to readers. ...... Unstable mentality. The mentality of the protagonist is actually that he has great ambitions. But he is not decisive and domineering, everything is a bit vague, and he is often not strong enough. But he has no magnanimity, but he has a lot of foresight and can attract people to watch. In short, the protagonist has a lot of aura, but he is not majestic enough. Historical novels, especially those about hegemony, are most afraid of the protagonist not having power or wealth. It's in your book, but it's not rounded enough. In terms of wealth, the description is even more unsatisfactory. ...... Also, there are too many descriptions of passerby women. Since Zhao Peilan is not the heroine, what's the point of having so much water? Either briefly mention it, or describe it slowly as the heroine. As for the Mrs. Lin who should be written about, she was rescued by the protagonist Shi Enyi, but she is not worthy of appearing. Then you, a generous person, will not be able to capture the hearts of readers. ... Finally: Simple and readable, but less emotional.

Recruit heroes as early as possible! !

To be honest, no more than 10 of the 108 generals in Water Margin in Liangshan have any black spots, and the others should either be killed or sentenced.

I am speechless. There are not many good people in Liangshan. Have you seen Water Margin? The most famous ones, Lin Chong, Lu Zhishen, Wu Song (this is controversial), Lu Junyi are not considered good people? Guo Jing, his ancestors, his brother Sai Rengui, Lehe, Zhu Gui, Dai Zong, and the technical staff who came here because of their fame basically didn't do anything bad. Except for Qin Ming, Zhang Qing, and Xu Ning, what black spots did the surrendered officers and soldiers have?

It's so poisonous that the bandits eat three meals a day, and every meal has meat! Why don't you assemble all the aircraft and cannons? You're so open-minded.

I thought of something pretty stupid. Although everyone is watching Water Margin, of course I am too, but after looking at Song Jiang in history, I found that this person was really not a capitulator. He pretended to surrender because he couldn't defeat the Song Dynasty, and then surrendered directly and rebelled. But this time, the Song Dynasty was not so stupid and killed Song Jiang directly. It felt very stupid.

Can you help Song Jiang enter the officialdom, so that his reputation in the world will be useless?

In the Jianghu of Water Margin, the word "brother" has a special meaning. You cannot call the other person just because he is older. After reading twenty or thirty chapters, the author has borrowed a lot from Survival Notes, and you should be able to notice that Wang Lun never calls others "brother", and older people are just "elder brothers".

Except for Lu Zhishen, everyone else in Liangshan has black spots, and only Wu Song and a few others have good character.

Wang Dingliu's communicative skills should be combined for Zhugui Tavern or Li to assist the Intelligence Department. This kind of inconspicuous talent is a good candidate.

The book is a good book, and it is written with great care. The only regret is that the portion is too small. I have just chewed it, but it is gone before it reaches my stomach. How can I be full?

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Ordered

There are few people who have written about Water Margin, and even fewer who have written it well, but this one is very well written. Come on author!

It's very well written. I'll definitely give it a thumbs up when it's released.

Design more plots and recruit heroes

Hua Xiong, Cai Yang and Cai Mao of the Three Kingdoms, Zhen Guanxi who was killed by Lu Tiha, Zhang Dujian and Jiang Menshen who were killed by Wu Song can all be written.

There are over 100 chapters, but they are not yet available on the shelves.