Universal Deduction Starting from Konoha

The protagonist who successfully identified is Zabuza. Zabuza's strength is not good, the protagonist is being cheated, and there is no one around him. The protagonist gives him a girl and a younger brother. If his status is not good, the protagonist just sends him to be a Mizukage! Ninety percent of the scenes in the first hundred or so chapters of the book are all between Zabuza and his younger brothers and sisters. As an author, you don't distinguish between priorities. How can your novel achieve better results? It's not that no one wants to see you put so much water into scenes that have nothing to do with the protagonist (including the deduction space, the growth of the younger brother, etc.), But if you write dozens or hundreds of chapters at a time, who will have the time to read it. What everyone wants to see is the growth of the protagonist and the history of struggle towards the goal step by step. Sending girls along regardless of priority is a waste of time. If you really write a novel for your own pleasure, then don't sign a contract. You won't lose money. The copyright is still yours. It doesn't matter how you write it. Once you have signed a contract, you have to be responsible to the readers. You can no longer just write for your own pleasure. That is asking others to spend money to eat! I hope the next book will be better written

When I saw this last name, I didn't want to read it.

It depends on the situation, it's Tiantian's heroine, I rarely see it😄

Let the author cut it, and come up with a new book, be more rigorous.

Why do I feel that the protagonist becomes more and more useless as he gets to the back? The further you get to the back, the more uncomfortable you become

The name Suzuki Tiantian is a bit awkward. Kaiban can also be called Chinese class, gradually becoming Chinese style. Rock Lee and Kai were basically transformed into Bruce Lee. The Hyuga clan's costumes and hair accessories are also adapted from ancient China. Basically, the Chinese elements of Kaiban account for more than 60-70%. Protecting everything every day means being comprehensive every day. In ancient Japan, only the families of middle- and high-level people had surnames. Ordinary people were not qualified to have surnames. It was good to have a decent first name. High-level people in ancient Japan were also very good at Chinese. We think Kameda, Inoshita, Inoue, Tanaka... These surnames are ridiculous, and the senior officials of ancient Japan may not have found them funny either. These weird surnames are the names that the Japanese emperors forced Japanese common people to give in the past one or two hundred years in order to learn from the West. The common people, who are uneducated, can only "use local materials."

What is the plot that starts out of nowhere in Chapter 10? Another novel?

The plot is incoherent and too many extrapolations are inserted into the plot.

It's rare for someone to be the heroine every day, but she doesn't look good

It's best not to limit the protagonist, otherwise it will be boring

There are too many roles for space actors

I'm very curious why the protagonist didn't fight back when he was bullied or let those people go so easily.

That book opens 999 Magatama Sharingan in seconds. I want to see

There were too many scenes in the drama, and I didn't feel immersed in it, so I ran away.

Listen to me, when it comes to writing novels, they are still children who are gibbering after trouble and there are not many good ones 😅😅😅😅😅 Realistic If you scold the reader as a child, what are you saying as an adult? If you don't scold me, I'll read it. It's not like those who read the novel are all primary school students. It's 13 years old to graduate from elementary school, and 12 years old to graduate from a ninja school, right? A group of primary school students compete with each other every day.

Goldfinger is so strong, so why should he be given a protagonist that makes people miserable?

The technology of guns in the ninja world is actually not bad, and nine out of ten people who write about Sand Eagle are military illiterates, and the remaining one is laughing at nine

Let me change this world

The previous writing was okay and quite novel, but when it came to the Uchiha genocide, the author didn't handle it very well. There were so many loopholes that I couldn't stand it anymore.

I said, how about castration? Don't be afraid, brother, I have been on a whim recently. If you open a new book, brother🤐😄😄😄, I will accompany you to the streets. Of course, I will basically fish and post.

If the male protagonist is replaced by Xiao Li or Ningji, it may be more popular with the audience.

Well, do you have any recommendations for the same heroine every day?

I have a bold idea

No conflicts, more fun, diary style hydrology

Followed up from the last one and tried this one! I feel like I'm dying