The Left Way Asks Immortals

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that it is not very interesting. First of all, the sense of immersion is not strong and it gives people the feeling of going here and there. In general, the plot is not coherent enough. Moreover, the title of the book is a heresy, but it does not convey the taste of this heresy. To be honest, the leftists are loose cultivators and crooked cultivators. Their standard qualifications are mediocre qualifications and the resources of a tycoon. They are ruthless and ruthless. They have experienced many conspiracies and quickly upgraded. They cannot obtain a complete system of skills and spells. It is common for them to kill people and seize treasures and be chased and beaten. This doesn't feel right to you. With such a powerful beheading Gu, why don't you go around killing people to make money and upgrade your skills? You're still not allowed to fly after practicing beheading and killing monsters? Killing, making enemies, upgrading, becoming rich. Not fragrant?

The conceptual framework of this book is still okay, but there are still problems with the connection of some plots. Regarding treasures, what magic weapon does the protagonist have? I'm already a little faint now. It's like the Karma Gourd. I've practiced it so much, but I don't know what it is. There are also various magic weapons and magical powers obtained. How did you develop them? Have no idea. How did you get it? Not sure. There are obviously a lot of magical weapons that defy the heavens, but instead of figuring out their uses, they just rush on their way. This is obviously not in line with normal people's thinking. Finally, let me talk about the advantages, that is, the descriptions and certain plot developments in this article are really like folk myths and legends. (I won't go into too much detail, it's too brain-consuming. This is part of my feeling after watching the latest chapter. By the way, I watched it on other platforms.)

How can I put it, the early plot is a bit bland, and since the name is Zuo Dao Wen Xian, it is best to focus on more fighting and heretical spells. I once read a novel, and I forgot the name, but the protagonist of that novel used ghosts to practice spiritual energy in the body, which is more in line with Zuo Dao's name. The author can refer to it. If the content in the first few days of the release does not have any climax or small climax, it will not attract many readers. If you do not have the desire to follow up, your results will not be very good. I hope the content will be better after it is released.

It looks good, come on, don't have a female protagonist! ! ! !

After reading the forty-fourth chapter, The Side Story is quite interesting. There is not much writing, there are no bad points, but the plot is bland, there is no climax, and the writing is okay.

Since you are writing about leftism, you have to keep your butt straight. You don't want to be ruthless and cold-blooded, but isn't it basic to kill decisively and stay out of other people's business? Explain the reasons: First of all, the title of the novel contains heresy, so wouldn't the first impression of most readers be that of loose cultivators and crooked cults? Don't be stubborn, who doesn't decide whether to read a book based on the first impression of the title, just like "xxx Invincible Road", as a reader who doesn't like to read invincible novels, will you still read this book after seeing this title? Isn't it just instinctive to just skip it? Who would worry about what is in it, unless there is a reader base. So there is a reason why this book has been lukewarm since it was written. First of all, most of the readers who like the righteous way were removed from the title of the book. Then, after reading half of the book, the readers who like the deviant way realized that they had been deceived and ran away. So the grades are poor. I saw the author investing his own silver, and after reading the comments, I couldn't help but remind the author, and I hope the author will work harder for the next book.

The protagonist is so useless. From the time his heart was stolen in Chapter 130 until now, he has not taken revenge and is still being hunted. His cultivation level has never improved! What are you writing about? If you subscribe, consider it as a gift to you. Go find a class. You are really not suitable for writing novels

Such contradictory lines can appear in two consecutive chapters. Chapter 13 writes about the inn and feels that the protagonist is dressed like a poor man, and Chapter 14 writes that the protagonist is not poor in his clothes. What else can readers say? Is this a novel written with care?

Good guy, there are so many novels in Qidian, but you and Xianlu are the only one. I can't find any resources online about anti-theft and anti-theft, so I can only read the original version 😒😒😒😒 But I'm too poor.

Around the 140th chapter, Liu Dandan's heart was stolen by a kind of ghost, and Liu Dandan's soul was also sucked away. Then he became weak and ran away. The person who controlled his body was Laqiao Dandan, who didn't say anything, which was understandable. Then around the 200th chapter, I heard news about monsters, and I always emphasized caution in my heart. I was also on guard when I met him, but I was stunned for a moment when someone called me Liu Dandan and broke my guard. If it weren't for the little beast blocking it, my heart would have been stolen again. After fighting for a long time, I was under control, but because I couldn't break through other people's defense, I got away again. Where is your gourd? Are you still planning on taking a long-term view? It makes people laugh.

I read more than fifty chapters of the book about Douhe God. Generally speaking, it is scattered, chaotic, and scurrying, like a child playing an online game, dragging characters all over the map. The story narrative is also a bit disorganized, with too many characters appearing, too many foreshadowing buttons, and too many maps opening up, resulting in no continuity in the story. The transition was too fast and caught people off guard. You must be a new author, come on!

It's messy, it's messy, it's still getting boring even though I'm one hundred and thirty, so let's go.

The first 12 chapters can be said to be fairy grass, but the author removed the ghostwriter on chapter 13. They were not written by one person.

In fact, if you supplement the previous content and make it more coherent, this book will be your food and fodder. Those who are vicious and cunning are not leftists but evil cultivators. Leftist means do not have a complete inheritance. They piece together skills here and there, and use whatever spells and magic weapons they get. They are opportunists.

The writing technique is a bit like writing a movie, not a book. The white space is too jumping. Others are pretty good.

Author, I have read 50 chapters of your book. The story is too fragmented, and why does it feel that there is no coherence?

Abandoned, the writing is not very good, and sometimes it is very confusing. The magic weapons in the article have no levels, which is very confusing. The gourd is so powerful that I have never used it. Anyway, it is very confusing and has no levels.

The first few dozen chapters were pretty good to read, but the plot became more and more fascinating as it went on. I could think of all the poisonous points like 130, and I couldn't stand it. 🔨

I'm afraid that the author read the pornographic article and then wrote a heroine out of anger

Very good. Let me tell you the story of my dream first. There is not much else. Instead, it is leisurely and relaxing, ordinary but extraordinary. . . . . I can't write this kind of feeling. Take a look at what I wrote.

The one who forces the protagonist to join the sect is so disgusting. What a broken plot. It's both trivial and vulgar.

It's so disgusting. It's the first time I've seen a character written in such a horrible way. Accepted.

It feels so messy! Can't stand it anymore

Author, if you reward yourself, don't you give the money to Qidian? Isn't it a loss?

No more, that's it? I still want to see it.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but it's a pity that I didn't stick to it. It felt like the pig's feet had just begun and then ended abruptly.

Either I am doing a task or on the way to do a task. The front is a little bit better, but the back can only be skipped to see the contents of the task.

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Writing Hole Filling Festival Wishing Season"}Will gourds with other functions come out? And how many interesting people and things did Liu Yuan meet on his way to Zhenhai Xianchao? Will he become an immortal? What is the background of the little beast? What is it? Want to see

Is Lu Yue Nineteen your trumpet?

Damn it! The ending is not explained clearly!