Zhutian Mall Development Report

The protagonist is a piece of trash with a 'sperm-like brain'! ! ! Nothing but messing around with women! ! ! !

Author, since you want to circulate points, why not set up an institution like a bank? A virtuous cycle.

There is a problem with the system

Can the protagonist interact less with women, chatter, and write romance novels on romance channels. Every book has its own readership, and the author who sells it has a good ending. The popularity is not high, it has its own classification, and there is no need to put more effort into the point 😒.

You can't raise the price, and you have to put money into it when you sell the real thing. To be honest, this setting feels quite frustrating for the protagonist.

It is suggested that the author could change the title of the book to "The Journey of All Heavens to Stallion", "The Journey of All Heavens to Become Pigs", "The Journey of All Heavens to Have Sex", "The Journey of All Heavens to Be Shameful" and "The Journey of All Heavens to Have Sex"

I just don't understand how the points are increased? You pay for the purchase yourself, and the customer's points are needed to sell information on various items. The system will still draw a commission after the completion, so the points should become less and less the more you use them.

It suppresses the protagonist too much. If you don't know how to write an emotional scene, don't write it. Don't write emotional dramas when you have a harem. The protagonist's own personality has problems. It's very humbling to have such a golden finger. The woman you write about also has a lot of personality. It's too licking. Either the body transaction itself is based on interests of other women, and the protagonist is just an ordinary person. So it's best not to write emotional scenes. The relationship of interest is the relationship of interest. If you write too much, it will make you uncomfortable.

The value setting is very unreasonable. This is going to kill the protagonist in minutes. Let others inherit the rhythm. A 20% premium on merchandise is normal. The storyline is good. That is, we need to think carefully about how to set monetary value and how to set output. Otherwise this book will not do very well.

The problem is huge 1. There are too many women, and there is no emotional basis. Basically, the protagonist will marry you after teasing 2. The trading system of the whole book is buggy. The system takes too much commission and may collapse at any time 3. After the system is upgraded, the protagonist wants all the employees he recruits to become the protagonist's harem. It's disgusting. (If you want to write like this, you might as well go to the romance channel) 4. Since it is a Wanjie store, then it's fine Think about how to open a store, how to purchase goods, how to interact with customers, and how to interact directly with customers. Don't write anything about going to the purchase world and participating in the plot. (I clicked in because I wanted to see how the protagonist runs a **Wanjie store and interacts with the attracted customers. I don't want to see the protagonist go to other purchase worlds to participate in the plot. If you want to purchase goods, you can leave after getting the necessary things. There is no need to participate in the plot.)

I simply don't understand that in this economic system, you can't sell things at a higher price. Others can only take 50% when they buy things, but if they sell things and you have to pay for them yourself, you only get 50%. Then when someone first comes to buy something, they don't get points, and they have to sell it to you to get points. Then if she sells something to you, you have to pay points, and then how can you make money? Aren't you always losing 50%? Where did you get so many? The secret book you mentioned can be sold repeatedly, but if he comes, he will not have points. He has to sell you something to get points, so he will sell something to you. You only get 50%. You have to pay 100% of the price to buy it. How do you make money? I was so fucking confused.

It's so disgusting, I want to have sex with a girl when I see her. . .

It doesn't matter if a book on astronomy is written as a stallion. The system is in a mess. Didn't you even make an outline? Calculate for yourself how much principal you can afford to lose if you open a store this way? What's more, there is a system to draw commissions, so people don't even think about writing novels nowadays?

After reading the first chapter, my eyes lit up. It was another good book. After reading the second chapter, I was poisoned and died. The absolute monopoly business and the novel corresponding to the world were sold at a low price. I even had to bargain with Yue Buqun. In the end, I even got a 30% discount. As the protagonist of a business book, I dare not compliment him without being evil, but he is still so mentally retarded!

The structure is too small, prices are collapsing, buying and selling is not allowed, and the protagonist is worse than a tool man.

The author can't be the Antarctic Sun! But the writing is okay. Come on……

I can't stand it anymore, the main character is just a sb, a coward

After a while, in the first chapter, Yue Buqun was cut from 1,000 points to 300 points. The protagonist is also a talent, and this kind of protagonist is useful. The protagonist is not a small stall hawker. He sells vegetables, and he still bargains. And I have never seen anyone bargaining for 30% off the price of vegetables.

I couldn't stand it after reading five chapters. The situation is pitifully small and the humble little people don't even look like royalty when they put on royal robes.

Not to mention that at the beginning, Yue Buqun was really regarded as a fool. Everyone knew that the protagonist was an ordinary person. After the protagonist casually took out a shabby book and said it could predict the future, Yue Buqun actually believed it.

I can't stand Chapter 35 anymore, the male protagonist is too horny

Very good novel, the economic system is a mess! Employees sell their stuff to the boss cheaply. The money earned is used to purchase goods, and 90% of the goods purchased are used to maintain inventory. If you sell them, you have to sell them at the original price and are not allowed to make money, and half of the sales volume has to be given to the boss. Is this kind of store still going bankrupt? It's all up to the employees to take risks and make money to subsidize the store!

To be honest, this is the worst Zhutian Mall I have ever seen. Every woman I see comes here, and it feels like the author is short of women and wants everything. Even if there is a harem in other fantasy novels, it is not like this.

The points system has collapsed, profit comes first in business, and like the protagonist, he goes bankrupt in minutes.

Now that I have become a Shennong, if I don't have a myocardial infarction or cerebral thrombosis, I can just check it out. If I have a myocardial infarction or cerebral thrombosis, if something goes wrong, don't blame me for not reminding you.

There are too many women and it's too watery. Here's an idea. You can write the protagonists from previous novels. For example, the old Hu Carpenter, Emperor Steel Age, 1949 and I are the protagonists of these low-level worlds. It would be better to write about the changes in the world than now. I would write a chapter and a half for each world, which would be much better for the senses.

At the beginning of the article, I made myself look like a licking dog. I am proud of so many people, but I am still afraid that I will have no business?

I'll give you this month's monthly pass to continue updating. You can also continue to update the previous book. At least it's finished.

Why not update it? Personally I think it's okay!

I didn't make it through the second chapter, I hope those who come after will realize their shame and become brave again! !