Weird Theater Starting in London

It's tied, and I'm excited to post some nonsense (u‿ฺu✿) Most of the previous chapters are limited to free of charge (I won't replenish the previous chapters now, and the landlord's family doesn't have any surplus food. I will re-subscribe if there are fully ordered extras in the future), but as long as the quality is maintained in the future, I will continue to subscribe_(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_ I have read some articles like "Infinite Streaming" before. I usually don't go out of my way to read this kind of article, but I will click on it if I encounter it. In my opinion, the writing style of this book is the better part of Infinite Stream. It reads very smoothly and makes me want to keep reading. And I feel that the author is a very serious person, and he is very thorough about the settings. He often puts some pictures that can enhance the perception as supplementary information, but he is not the kind of person who insists on some setting details and ignores the coherence and excitement of the plot. I think the author has done a good job in balancing this set of details without turning it into a boring setting. As for the overall school setting, I feel that there should be a lot of things to dig into in the future. Let's just say that this is a school and let students perform these plays as a monthly exam. What kind of students do you want to cultivate? And what will you do after graduation? Will there be a plot after graduation? If the full text were from freshman to senior year, it would be gone. It feels like the focus of this school is not to cultivate a certain kind of people, but to let such a group of people live like this for four years, and I don't know what the final development will be. Okay, let's talk about my thoughts after reading the copies, and start the review! (?) The first "Death in the Twist" script can be said to be my favorite copy. Of course, a big reason is that I originally prefer stories with modern western society or western fantasy backgrounds. Another factor is that this dungeon is the first dungeon, and the protagonist did not bring his own to enter. It can be said that he was brought into the world of that dungeon in the most realistic way. For other dungeons, because the protagonist has the ability to redeem, it brings a sense of dissonance to the dungeon (I think this is a bit similar to the character fit in the article). After all, I feel that if I were an aborigine in an dungeon and saw someone around me suddenly turning into a wolf or something, I would feel as if he had changed into a different person. In the Fog City dungeon, the protagonist's design matches the detective character from beginning to end. If there was a character fit index at that time, I think it would definitely be 100%. Therefore, in my opinion, in the first script, the protagonist gave full play to his personal talents and made full use of the resources that his character can mobilize. It really made me feel the charm of the protagonist. However, this dungeon is set in London. I actually wanted to see more about London in that era, but the dungeon was too short and ended after finishing the case of Jack the Ripper. It was really unfinished. The second copy of the Market Garden Project chose the European battlefield background of World War II, and my initial favorable impression of this background was relatively high. I actually like war stories about World War I and World War II or similar world backgrounds with the level of technological development during this period. I especially like to see the protagonist starting from a relatively low military rank, blooming, and rising up little by little. The copy here is also well written, but it is still a bit short. The protagonist died within a day or two of entering. I did not experience the joy of promotion and salary increase. It is a bit regretful (´-ι_-｀) The Third World is an American drama written by Blood Race. I had never heard of this American TV series before watching this copy. I became interested in the show after reading a few chapters. I downloaded the first episode of the first season in the middle of the night and watched it. It was a bit scary. I discovered that the author cannot say that some of the lines at the beginning are very similar to the original drama. I can only say that they are exactly the same 🙂. I have not watched the subsequent dramas. I estimate that the plot development is similar to the first episode, and the subsequent development should be very different from the original drama. Generally speaking, as a non-original copy, the arrangement is quite reasonable for the protagonist and others to go in and change the development of the original plot. However, people who have not watched the original drama will always feel it better than those who have not. It is difficult to describe this story in words as much as the scenes in the picture. The fourth one is about Cthulhu elements. The main plot is a branch plot developed from the mental hospital. The plot comes from the movie "Thriller Black Hole". It was through reviews that I learned about such a movie, and I also went to watch it. It was a horror movie made in the 1990s, and I felt that the original movie was pretty good. However, if you don't know the horror genre, it may be difficult to understand the logic of this movie. I think there are still many pitfalls in this dungeon world, and there can be follow-up plots. I hope to see the protagonist come to this world to expand the world view in the future. The fourth copy is Three Kingdoms. This is probably the first oriental background copy the author has written in this book, and it is surprisingly good-looking in my opinion. Originally, I wasn't very interested in the Three Kingdoms. I had read Romance of the Three Kingdoms, but apart from the main characters and the main battles, I didn't have a deep impression of the rest. I really couldn't remember so many people's names. I am at the level of Zhang Liao who no one knows very well_(:зゝ∠)_When I saw that this copy of the Three Kingdoms actually has more than a hundred chapters, I felt why Wardma was so long. After I started watching it, I found that the plot was surprisingly well written, and it brought me into this high-level martial arts version of the Three Kingdoms. It really became more and more interesting the more I watched it, and I finished it in a short time. It was not enough to watch. Although the dungeon itself is longer than other worlds, the ending still felt a little rushed. I was really confused and didn't understand what happened when Lu Bu suddenly appeared at the end. Why did he come back? Was he incited to rebel? Which side was he here to fight? And the story of the Three Kingdoms' troubled times ends here, which really makes me unable to help but guess where history will go if this development continues. In addition, I personally think the role of Ding Qinyu is really well portrayed. Although there is not much writing, her characters are very rich and full. To be honest, in male novels, there are very few female characters who have emotional entanglements with the protagonist. I, a girl, have a strong liking for this character after reading it. I have really seen too many thin female characters full of male unilateral lust. As a girl I met in a dungeon world, it would definitely not be suitable to be arranged as the heroine of the full text, but for both parties in this world, this is simply a match made in heaven. This soft rice is reasonable and reasonable, making the plot development more enjoyable, and it does not make me feel wronged at all. Girl, I can't wait Send them into the bridal chamber on the spot 😏 To be honest, I really hope to see a follow-up. Let me open an if line extra to let me see what kind of world-famous hero the protagonist will become if he stays in that era and continues to develop like this. By the way, he and Ding Qinyu can be married for a lifetime or something (˶˚ ᗨ ˚˶) Speaking of which, the first three dungeons are all with Western backgrounds, but when the protagonist and 300 students pass through, they all use their own oriental bodies, and their names are not changed and they all use Chinese names. It always feels a bit strange... In the modern New York of the third vampire dungeon, it is quite normal for so many Chinese people to appear. But in the first two worlds, London in the Victorian era, and the European battlefield of World War II, there were 300 Orientals in these two places. Maybe it was because I didn't understand the specific situation, and I always felt a bit inconsistent. In addition, seeing it now, I seem to have a strange feeling. The principal of that school is still the principal. When assigning roles to students, he seems to be very partial to the protagonist. In the first Fog City dungeon, students from the evil camp can be easily arranged, and they can be placed among those at the bottom of society. However, for those from the good camp, for example, if the police station invites a detective, they will hire one, and the quota will be allocated to the protagonist. In fact, it seems that roles like forensic scientists are quite scarce. I can't imagine where the school found so many places to insert people. And I feel that other roles, such as celebrities, are not as easy to "perform" as the detective. Let's talk about the vampire dungeon in modern New York. The protagonist is assigned as an airport security guard. This is really the position closest to the main plot. You can participate in the main plot and get on the plane directly. For most of the other students, the author didn't mention what role they were assigned to, but no matter how they looked at it, they couldn't compare to the protagonist at the starting line. Of course, someone else might not have done as well as him in this position, but it still gave me a sense of déjà vu (●—●) Let's talk about the future dungeons. I also saw the previous vote. The dungeon of the Tang Dynasty reasoning sounds very interesting. It is a world setting that I have never thought of. I think there should be a lot of traditional Western fantasy dungeons that can be written. It would be good to write more during the monthly exam. Generally speaking, I still like to have more original copies (in my opinion, the previous Fog City, Battlefield, and Three Kingdoms can be considered original copies). Those that are closely related to the plot of the original work (such as the previous American TV series Bloodlines, the movie Thriller, and the Pokémon mentioned in the voting) will always make it more difficult for people who have not seen the original work to understand, and it is inevitable to follow the original plot for a beginning and so on. If I watch the original work, I will feel that this is not re-describing part of the original plot in words. And I'm more worried that the author feels that there is no need to retell some of the original settings and then doesn't write them. But if I haven't read it, I might not understand it. People who have read it will think that the number of words is too low if they see the author writing the original settings. Later dungeons, let me think about the common dungeon backgrounds of Infinite Stream, such as Jianghu martial arts, urban supernatural/superpowers, spiritual recovery, and apocalyptic wasteland. Although these backgrounds are considered worn out, it would be good if the author can write them well, or a tomb robbing flow, werewolves fighting blood rice dumplings (what the hell) would also be good 😃 As for some high-demon worlds, The Journey to the West, the world of cultivating immortals, feels like it is not suitable to appear at least in the early stage of the protagonist (for example, freshman or sophomore year, maybe?). The cycle of improving the strength of this world seems to be very long, and it may be like being in seclusion for ten years or a hundred years... Finally, although this book is not popular now, there are still people who like it. The author adds uranium! Finally, I picked up the author and shook it, hoping to shake out some manuscripts. Yesterday I updated the 24 o'clock saying ٩(ºº٩)

This book impressed me from its outstanding description of Western themes at the beginning to its rigorous research on Eastern themes. So far, the description of the Drum Tower is the most Tang Dynasty style😆. Four years of college, various exams and leagues, if it is really written down, it will be a very big project. I am very much looking forward to the author's follow-up, and I also hope that the author can take care of himself. I am very sorry for last night (you are the first time I have seen such... It's hard to describe 😅)

Huangfu Weiming conquered Hongji City in the second year of Tianbao, which was last year, so the year the protagonist was in was the third year of Tianbao. It just so happened that He Zhizhang left this year in the history books, so the year is correct. Sorry, I searched for several hours, but I couldn't find who the minister of Dali Temple in Tianbao's third year was 😒 (the author can tell me if he sees it). I've forgotten what I wanted to say 😟. The author's information was rigorous and there was basically no fault to be found. In addition, the author's style is unexpectedly changeable. I originally thought that the author would only write about Western themes, but I didn't expect that he could also write about Eastern themes. Come on, I can't stand it any longer and go to sleep. I've got three recommendation votes for you today. (If you can, give it to me, even though I don't know what it can do)

■The contentBasically has nothing to do with the title I read the Cthulhu Mythos today and my heart was surging, so I made a long review. Friends who are watching in the comment area, please read here. The introduction of this book is incompetent, and the title of the book... Is incompetent, which cannot show all of the book. Content not summarized: Lu Li, who had excellent art exams but poor education, was admitted to a mysterious university when he was desperate. From then on, the door to another world opened to him. There is a hidden murderous plot in the foggy city of London. Is Jack the Ripper just a faded legend? The detective pointed at the thick fog with his cane... The monster that plundered the body survived for a long time, waiting for recovery. At the same time, a low-status police officer received news that a plane bound for New York made an emergency landing on an abandoned runway, but only four passengers survived... The vampire may really exist, and what can he change? Operation Market Garden is bound to fail. All we can do is move forward. ——Maybe this is the best ending for us. Investigate the weird writer who can rewrite reality, write myths with the generals in the legendary version of the Three Kingdoms, enjoy the strange world of the Tang Dynasty, and of course have a relaxing vacation... Students in high schools, best partners, mysterious principals... What kind of truth is hidden behind this. But from the moment he embarked on his journey, he was destined to become a legend. There are many names for this legend, but there is only one protagonist among them - His name is Lu Li. And you are the witness of this legend. -Tag: Unlimited flow + academy flow West + East -PerceptionExperience: The author of this book has definitely made sufficient preparations before writing each copy, and the settings are detailed. For example, the Western copy of World War II is very detailed and can be said to be immersive, although it is slightly inferior to the Eastern Three Kingdoms and Tang Dynasty. It's not that Western copies are bad, it's that the author is better at writing about the East and is more sophisticated in this aspect. From film and television to reality, from the east to the west, from ancient roaming to the interstellar world... It can only be said that the content covers an extremely wide range. Based on infinite flow, even if the copy is extremely substitutive, you can still come back to your senses at the end. At the same time, there is an excessive interweaving of reality, which is amazing. Different from the traditional infinite dungeon stream, the protagonist does not have the bizarre ability of "having been completely powerless and has no back-up plan, but can still explode to counterattack", nor does he have the unnatural ability of "weird and unreasonable rule-based abilities that are ineffective against the protagonist (such as rule-based ghosts and counter-types)". This kind of anti-routine (I don't know if I am lagging behind, or is this a routine from a few years ago?) Actually attracts my love more. He is neither a Virgin nor a cold-blooded person. He is just an excellent actor studying and "surviving" in this strange university. In addition to his career (dungeon), the protagonist is accompanied by these two good friends (especially Duke)... But who says they must unite in the dungeon? Of course, there is also the time to explore the secrets of reality... You can also gain some knowledge during the reading process, and occasionally be greedy for the delicacies in the book. -About the author: The author was still a college student when I wrote this long review. Well, don't be too harsh on the author. If you have any questions, try to be as tactful as possible. -About Shui/Short: I can understand the latter. The author will try his best to solve this problem and update more. I have to say that he doesn't rely on this for a living now, and he probably won't in the future either. It's useless to say more. But the former is too much. In fact, such a comment is very shocking to an author who has worked so hard to write a text. Water? If it is a free stamp, there is no need to do this; if it is a paid stamp, why is water the first reaction? Can't it be a necessary setting explanation? Can't be a necessary (set) source? -About the illustrations: Yes, the author will provide illustrations in the necessary scenes, which is really considerate. O. O -About the group: Welcome, the author is always here. -About me: The most talkative... Um... Person in the group has the same name as Qidian.

Really well written. I have been reading novels for many years. The last time I read good books was Fat Dragon and Crossing the Bridge. Watching it now too. But now there is this one. Really good. IQ online. There is no Madonna in style. The villains are okay too. Really good.

Alas, I originally wanted to keep diving and silently pursue books, but I just checked the out-of-circuit index and found that the number of fans of this book is not bad, but the comment interaction is too low, it is more than one million words, and the comments are less than 200. There are too many book lovers who are deep divers, and they don't go ashore to bask in the sun. I'm here to help the author throw a torpedo to explode the wave fish. I hope that all deep divers can become seals and make the comment area of ​​this book lively. It can help the book's out-of-circle index reach at least level 3 and expand its influence. Otherwise, I am really afraid that the author will not be able to persevere at some point and resolutely kill himself from the palace and enter the palace to serve the emperor (I was scared out of the original Three Kingdoms copy when the author said he wanted to give up writing). In addition, as long as the author insists on updating continuously, millions of alliances will not dare to say so at the end of this month, but ordinary alliances will still be able to reward one, and I will post a post as proof! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

He is so pitiful, I try my best to help him - Ordinary people He is so pitiful, I try my best to help him - Holy Mother He is so pitiful, you must do your best to help him - Holy Mother Bitch Holy Mother - Tan Sitong: Reforms in all countries are all caused by bloodshed. Today, China has not heard of anyone bleeding due to reform. This country is not prosperous; if there is, please start from the same heir. Holy Mother Bitch—— Kang Youwei: Reforms in various countries are all caused by bloodshed. Today, China has not heard of anyone bleeding due to reforms. This is why this country is not prosperous; if there is, please start from the same heir. Just to clarify: the protagonist is not the Virgin!

The background of the story is that the protagonist is an art student who failed the college entrance examination. When he was desperately preparing to re-study, he received an admission notice from Pinnacle Art Academy. However, when the protagonist came to this school, he discovered the strangeness of this school, but by this time he had already fallen into terror. The novel is an unlimited flow in colleges and universities. Specifically, each copy is acted as a script. By completing the tasks published in the script, you can improve your strength and gain an advantage in the competition in the school. So far, the plots of each dungeon are mainly based on some important or special events that occurred in foreign countries in the modern period. The rationality of these story plots is quite good, and the power system is relatively stable. However, it may be because the dungeon plot is relatively niche, the author's writing style is relatively average, and the male protagonist's evolution direction is a werewolf that most book friends do not like, so the appeal of the story is relatively average. However, it can be seen that the author is still working hard to improve this aspect, and the sense of substitution is getting better and better. It is estimated that there will be a qualitative improvement in about one million words. ---Recommended from the WeChat public account Da Shuhuang Thirty-Six Strategies Shuhuang comes to us! ! !

I really like watching the Eastern version, and I especially want to watch the Tang Dynasty one. Why did you forcefully cut it and change the script just because someone else said it?

My personal suggestion is to write less Eastern fantasy, because I'm tired of reading it. Personally, I feel that even old bookworms don't like Eastern fantasy. The routines are all the same. What you write is infinite flow, with different world views and different plots, which can give readers a sense of expectation. This is the second time I've written Eastern fantasy (Three Kingdoms is not included, and history and fantasy are not included). Same), it's repeated. You don't have many copies at the moment, and it doesn't feel good to have a repeated world view. Well, in summary, I feel sick after watching Eastern fantasy. A routine cannot reflect the author's sense of open innovation. Of course, everyone's interests are different. If you don't agree with my point of view, you can refute it.

First of all, the author's expressive ability and writing style are both good, at least above the passing mark and can be understood clearly. Secondly, the selection of the first few dungeons is pretty good, at least I have the desire to read on. Of course, there are disadvantages. First of all, the plot is too flat. There is no distinction between climax and dullness. This is a very important point. It will give people the feeling that they have watched it but not watched it. For example, let's take the first copy, the one playing the detective. The case design is good, but there is no thrilling feeling. Just imagine, in this kind of suspense-oriented script, what readers want to see is not that the protagonist describes the case in a few sentences, finds the murderer, and then leaves coolly as if he is pretending. Of course, I can't say that everyone likes thrilling, at least I do. In the suspense category, whether it is a novel or a TV series, shouldn't everyone be immersed in the tense atmosphere along with the readers, and then watch the protagonist step by step while investigating the case, confronting the criminals, and then completing the task? Although it is used a lot, the more it is used, the more people like it. The other one is about the protagonist exchanging things in school. I don't know that for others, at least for me, in a novel similar to Mugen-ryu or Bankai-ryu, after finishing the script, the most anticipated thing is to see the protagonist improve his strength. In short, it is what the protagonist redeemed, which aspect of strength he gained, or what unique thing he got. It's very vulgar, but it's also one of the cool things. I don't know if it's because I read ten lines at a time, or if the author didn't write it at all. I didn't see how the protagonist's werewolf talent was redeemed. He used it directly in the war copy and then introduced it. I was a little confused. More importantly, I don't know if the author knows that after redeeming the werewolf, the attribute of [No Demon] made me almost give up the book at that time. Yes, I am the kind of person who likes to be a fort. I like to read novels and play games [😂] So, do you know how many readers like me will be discouraged by just these two words? This is why, if you read many books by old authors, when giving the protagonist's abilities in the early stage, they will never give an absolute definition. It's all similar to physical first, then spiritual. Or maybe you wait until the reader gets into the book and then say that this is a book that only focuses on the physical or magical aspects. Because by that time, most of the remaining readers will not subscribe because of the protagonist's ability, but because of the plot of your book. This is important! ! ! Finally, there is the senior who has the same blood as the protagonist. How can I put it, I mentioned uniqueness before, but then there comes a person with the same bloodline, who is 10,000 times stronger than the protagonist, and even the protagonist's bloodline was taken from his body. How can I put it, at least when I see that, I will be a little hesitant to continue. Then, there are descriptions of certain plots. In my opinion, the author gave too many descriptions to the supporting characters. The reader's perspective must follow the protagonist. Everyone hopes that the protagonist can solve everything, and even the protagonist is the most brilliant. The supporting characters you described seem to add support to the protagonist, but in fact they spread the excitement of the plot instead of focusing on the protagonist. Actually, there are only so many, and these are my personal opinions. You can just watch and have fun. I just saw that the author's updates were intermittently, and I thought it was a recommendation problem that it didn't take off, so I just wanted to talk about it. Of course, there is a high probability that my suggestions are useless. The author can just take a look.

Infinite streaming, what everyone sees is not only going to various dungeons to have various stories, completing tasks, and then returning to gain benefits and improve yourself. But this book, it feels like there are three chapters of Infinite Flow Classic Returns. There is no such thing. How to improve the power system is very confusing. It seems that the credits and evaluation cards are earned, and money is spent in the pocket, but it is not spent and I don't know how to spend it. Moreover, the own power system is very vague and has no expressiveness at all. The first time I went to the library, I felt even more magical. After searching for a long time, I read a book. As mentioned before, it is omnipotent and has no writing at all. Anyway, it feels quite strange. It is the type I like, but I can't read it and it feels bland and tasteless.

To be honest, this book is quite unique in writing. The only thing that doesn't work well is that the main character's own combat power system is confusing (there are a lot of invisible werewolves, fighting spirits, the art of transformation, and the practice of covering the sky). However, the author's writing skills are actually very good, and he can hold on until now without making people feel that he is in trouble. There is another book by the author that I have read better than this one. Not many people in Maoshan Shengzhuan System have written it. It is thoughtful, interesting, and clear at a glance. Come on, author.

，，，，Cp，，，，，，，，，，     Also about someone saying that the protagonist is a eunuch, I want to say, do you know of a book? It is very well written, and it can be a masterpiece of a fan. Then the author said that some readers said that the protagonist is a eunuch, so he [couldn't help it] [half-heroine], the readers rioted, countless people retreated, and several hall leaders ran away I'm not talking about the harem problem, but if the heroine appears because of the readers' request rather than the plot arrangement, the author can consider it carefully. And regarding the heroine, the author can look at his emotional line writing ability. I will read it if it is good, but I am afraid that it will be pornographic if it is not good. The first thing is to describe how good the figure is, how good the appearance is, and leave a deep impression on the protagonist. If the heroine is not well written, you can downplay or skip it. I just want to ask the author what he thinks. Is the reader requesting the heroine to appear or should it be arranged according to the plot, and whether the heroine's appearance will change the proportion of the plot too much? I like the status quo very much, and seriously promote the career line. The emotional line is secondary, but not necessary. I hope the author can take a look and say something. Some articles are just unclear, and then maliciously control and add LSP descriptions. This will easily cause different types of readers to quarrel. It is better to avoid lightning in advance. Thank you

The third copy is set to be the American drama "Bloodline" The fourth copy is set in the Cthulhu setting and is temporarily named "Crazy Novelist". If you have any Cthulhu movies, you can recommend them to Poujie for reference, crab~

When I looked at the title of the book, I thought it was going to be weird or Western fantasy. But it turned out that there were more and more Eastern elements in the title, and something was getting more and more wrong after the title. Forget about Three Kingdoms, it was really well written. But didn't you say you wouldn't write it anymore? Why did it appear that everything behind the title was full? ? ?

Seeing the end of the final exam of the freshman year, I would like to ask why the author's system is so mixed. The original Western abilities will be compensated in the East, as mentioned before, but it seems that the subsequent vacations and final exams are not mentioned. Then the Eastern ability was originally a fighting spirit, but later there were a truckload of abilities, including Tiangang Disha, Karma Fire and Emperor Sword. It feels like someone who was just following the path of a military general suddenly started to cultivate immortality. Also, the protagonist didn't have much time to improve his abilities in the early stage. He only had one werewolf gene and passed through several dungeons. He didn't even purchase any skills to learn, so he still ranked first in his age group. The same is true for Duke. I would like to ask the author why he did this.

The third copy is soliciting opinions Has anyone watched the American TV series "Bloodline"? It's the one with a particularly heavy tongue. I personally want to write this copy, Werewolf vs. Vampire... If you have any ideas, you can leave a message on this post, crab~

The author should write his own and not be influenced by the readers. Unless there is a problem with the main line, follow his own outline.

The early stage looks pretty good, especially the small dungeons of Three Kingdoms and Tang Dynasty. When we arrived at the large universe copy, things started to get a little chaotic. It seems like I can't control the big scene. Now I see the strange foggy city here is quite confusing, and the protagonist also looks confused.

It's quite interesting, and the current plot of the story According to the plot, it is currently in the freshman period. According to the setting, there are also juniors and seniors. According to what the previous characters said, "As for the senior seniors, they are legendary figures." In addition, the so-called college league may refer to more than one college, and there is not necessarily only one principal, but some kind of life form that is above the rules of the world, or rules. Based on this, it can be inferred from what Senior Sister Lang said about deferring graduation to the principal, that is, being promoted to senior year. But why is it said to be graduation, and it is just to pick up something in college, so it may mean that in senior year, the space is not this college, but another world. And once you get to that world, it should be difficult or even impossible to return to college. There is also a possibility that this prop can help Senior Lang obtain great benefits in her senior year. From what the unlucky brother said, we learned some things in the library over the years, and coupled with the ability to predict scripts, we can guess that it is related to the school's rules and may be the power of the principal. In other words, the prop of Senior Wolf may be something that contains the power of the rules of the university or the world, and it can help Senior obtain some great benefits. I personally think these two are bigger. It's hard to say which one is more specific. Later, regarding what Lu Li said, he wanted to ask the principal whether these worlds are real. Well, since this question must be written in vain, you might as well make a bold guess. The following are purely personal opinions and ideal discussions. If you have any ideas, you can say These worlds are time periods that are mirrored with a timeline as a node, and the task of the seniors is to compete with seniors from other universities to snatch these available time periods. According to the current situation, I think there are two possibilities for the birth of these time periods. One is the occurrence of major events in the history of the protagonist's world, and the other is the birth of literary works, which also marks the birth of another parallel timeline, which is the world in the book. In addition to the Cthulhu chapter, the villain only gets part of the evil god's power and can change the world through words. So according to the current view, the principal also has this power, so it can also be proved that the seniors compete for it and the principal takes control. And in the senior year, the importance of learning points will definitely plummet and turn to other things. At present, it seems that the junior Wolf Senior Sister has evolved to the top of the invisible werewolf, so she will definitely develop to other places next, and then the role of the learning points will become less and less. And the props that the senior sister wants to get are either to break through the bloodline (less likely) or to help fight for the world (moderately likely). I think it is more likely to be similar to the cross that contains the power of faith, but the power absorbed is different, so as to improve herself. The college league that will follow soon will, as expected, show Lu Li a part of his senior year and reveal a little bit of the truth to readers. Of course, I haven't written it there yet. I'm just blind now. I'm not sure when it will happen. I've moved here from qyue. Let's discuss it together. There are more people here.

If you're not good at the subject matter, just grind it out slowly. Just don't be a eunuch. Come on, I've been watching commercials to support you.

Judging from the writing style, logic and rigor alone, it has surpassed most novels I have read. The characterization is good, but the campus plot is a little inconsistent and feels scattered by various copies. In addition, the frequency of contradictions is also strange. Some copies are climax most of the time, full of conflicting descriptions, which are prone to aesthetic fatigue; while some copies start too slowly (this may just be my personal perception) and cannot arouse the subsequent reading desire well. But no matter what, it cannot be denied that this is a good book, and it is a book that can feel that it was written seriously, and that's fine. The above is purely personal perception. After all, I am just a reader, not an author. I cannot teach writing, let alone write. I have specialization in the art industry, so go for it.

After reading 1/3, I can feel that the rest of the book may be unfinished, because according to the author's framework, this book may have 6 million words. It can be seen that the author's writing power and ideas are there, but the platform he has set up is too big to take back, and the results are average. My personal suggestion is that the next book (if there is one left) can write about time travel between two or three worlds, without setting up such a big stage, such as interstellar/Three Kingdoms/Old London, just write about these three worlds. Come on, don't give up.

This book is so great, why isn't it more refined or highly recommended? Is Shu Huang Xiancao good? I think the results are not so unreasonable. I like it just as much as I did when I first watched Mystery.

Fuck, if you can write, write more. I haven't read such a book with such overwhelming taste in many years.

It feels like this book does not have an outline. I suggest that the author create a more complete outline. Instead of having an outrageously detailed outline like "I Really Didn't Target Master" and "Chief Inspector", there should at least be a rough schedule to remind myself where to change scenes and where to insert conflicts, promotions, climaxes, and daily routines. Moreover, with clear settings of plot, characters, and props, inconsistency in writing can be avoided to a certain extent. Furthermore, having a preset goal makes it easier to lay down the foreshadowing, no matter how deep or shallow the foreshadowing is. The subtle hints that can be seen at a glance can arouse people's interest in continuing to read. As the plot develops and the foreshadowing is revealed, whether it makes people smile knowingly as expected, or a twist that makes people feel that I have miscalculated, people will eventually be willing to continue reading. Ambush may not make sense for a while, but when the curtain is lifted later, it can give people a strong impact and shock: "Why didn't I expect that!" "So that sentence and description meant this!". To read Chekhov's sentence in reverse, "If a gun appears in the first act of a movie, it must go off in the third act." This sentence means that if you want to shoot in the third act, then the gun must appear in the first two acts. There are too few "guns" in this book that must go off in the third act. After the tie, the only foreshadowing I remember is the "May the crown of righteousness be reserved for you" in the final chapter of the Madman's Mouth. Although I am not sure whether it was the foreshadowing first that led to the magical power, or whether it was because of the acquisition of magical power. The uprighting of the cross became a foreshadowing, but this foreshadowing led to the Nestorian meeting in the Tang Dynasty chapter, and connected the magical power system of the London Spiritual Tide chapter, allowing the protagonist of the Invisible Wolf bloodline to circumvent the effect of the demonless and indirectly gain the possibility of becoming a fort. And the connection between the emergence of this foreshadowing and the unveiling of the subsequent Tang Dynasty chapter is not tight enough. If the first time you use the werewolf power and start to write the skill description, you can add the psychological activity of "If you can't become a magician in the future, you will have to find a way in divine magic and druidry", you can make the connection between the invisible wolf system and the divine magic system more smooth and not abrupt. My personal opinion is only provided as a reference for the author. After all, no matter what others think, I think this book is quite interesting. Unfortunately, there are too few book friends to crowdfund the book in the comment area like "Midnight Bookstore".

Originally I had been on WeChat, but I wanted to support the author, but unfortunately I was short of money and could only give a reward of 200. I probably followed it from the first hundred or so chapters. The problem with this book has been very clear so far. The author's writing is not bad, and it was probably mid-range at the beginning. The fighting scenes and logic are also pretty good, and he probably has qualifications above Qianxing. However, in my humble opinion, the shortcomings are also quite obvious. First, I see that neither the protagonist nor the supporting characters of this novel have a specific image yet. The protagonist lacks a point that prevents him from being flat. He gives me the impression that he is an ordinary person with good luck and some outstanding talents. Why he can be a top student is beyond comprehension. He needs some characteristics, such as a lot of miscellaneous knowledge, just like the protagonist in Player Fierce, or the way of thinking. Features, like Shura Field players, or a shocking plug-in, for example, the protagonist and his classmates have hidden potential, and the protagonist is the most special, such as Dao and Tianhe, which can also make the article more interesting and more reasonable, and the plug-in can also fill in flaws. For example, although it is very strong every time it is used, it will gradually transform Tao, from him to him, and also increase conflict points due to the reduction of emotions. Second, the main line of the article is unclear and too slow. The protagonist in Chapter 700 has not reached the second grade, and his power is only at the block level. It feels burdensome and less exciting. Third, the level of each dungeon is very different. So far, I think the most successful dungeon is the first one. The dungeon should have depth and characteristics. Therefore, I suggest that you refer to My Day Has 48 Hours Players Are Fierce Shura Field Players And my personal suggestion is that you can start to change it during the final exam. For example, the final exam can have a potential effect of awakening potential, and everyone's abilities are greatly improved. In the end, the boss is too strong, so the protagonist fully awakens and fights with it. In exchange, the protagonist also permanently loses something, which also helps to make his character three-dimensional. Of course, these are just some of my thoughts, and the author may have his own deep meaning.

Wuhu! Finally got it

Although I haven't finished it yet, I decided to book it all, and now I'm seeing a strange resurgence in London. There are really not many long-form scenes like this that can be streamed indefinitely. I have to support it. The author's character portrayal is good, which is very important in this kind of subject. But there is also a problem, that is, it is not exciting enough. It's not that it needs to be mindless, but I think it's better to have a big climax at the end of a scene to provide a bit of excitement. The author didn't seem to pay special attention to this in the article, which gave me the feeling that it always seemed a bit uninteresting. The delicate background of the long scene gradually built up the sense of expectation and finally ended without venting. It was very uncomfortable. I hope I can find a way to improve it. In short, for me, there is definitely a grain and grass level. Come on, author, upgrade to grass jelly as soon as possible!