Wake up Before Dawn

The first step is to use punctuation marks well.

The new book is very good to read, and the storyline gives people a sense of reality, as if they are immersed in the scene. Especially some scenes make people feel chills. For example, when the zombies were headshot by the male protagonist Lu Wen, they really felt sticky and uncomfortable. It is really not suitable to eat or eat while watching these scenes. It will make people lose their appetite in an instant. Of course, there are places that make people feel chilly, and there are also places that make people feel warm. For example, the relationship between Lu Wen and the female cat was more silent than sound, and the eyes revealed all the care for each other. I suddenly understood why Lu Wen hated humans so much because of the death of the female cat in his previous life. There was some warmth that humans did not give, but the female cat gave him love and companionship. When the softness in his heart is stripped away, it is normal for his heart to become extremely angry and subversive, so now that he is reborn , Lu Wen should protect the female cat and her cubs in this life; and the man gave Su Yuelian food. In such an environment, this gesture was too precious. He is such a good person, but he has not been treated well. Human nature and human heart are slowly revealed in the plot. There are too many chilling things and people will become numb. I only hope that Lu Wen, as the king of destruction in his previous life, can change in this life. , I hope that the female cat, family, Su Yuelian, etc. Can change his extreme thoughts in his previous life and give the story a different ending. Just like Lu Wenhui rescued Su Yuelian and the wild dog, his behavior itself began to change, so I am still full of expectations for the follow-up story. Of course, what I hope most is that the author will hurry up and update it. There are too few updates, which is not enough to read, and some of it is still unfinished!

If you have relatives, it's better to go home and see them. That's the softness in your heart.

There are a lot of words in each paragraph and it looks a bit tired 😅 You can divide it into more paragraphs and it will look better.

The plot is pretty good, but the writing is a bit immature, so keep it up.

The female cat couldn't be transformed into the heroine, that would be interesting

Is the male protagonist's training speed too fast, a little unreal?

I really feel that the dogs and cats in the book are more reliable than people

The introduction to the new book is well written and very connotative.

Keep up the good work, overall, it's good!

Too thin, the update speed is a bit slow, please update!

It's very good. The structure of the opening chapter is grand, but the story unfolds from shallow to deep. After reading the first few chapters, I decided to bookmark it.

I like this type of writing, I'm attracted to it, it's rich in content.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Lu Wenhui cares about the life and death of human beings, and he laid the groundwork for this when he blocked Zhu Lie's attack in his previous life.

The heroine has appeared, she is eye-catching, and her scenes are also very powerful.

There are a lot of treasures in the park. It feels like searching for treasures.

The writing style feels so domineering[fn=2_4]

Try it and see if you can vote for the top vote.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~