My Love Problems Solved

This book should be the second love-themed online article I read at Qidian, after "Reborn I Don't Need a Heroine" and "From 2012". I have to say that as the protagonist of the Galgame God, the setting of the game matching mission goal is a bit old-fashioned, but the author's level is still quite good, the character's personality is still relatively clear, and the character design does not give people a cookie-cutter feeling. In the process of the protagonist's game, there will also be a slight decryption factor (although it is not strong, after all, the main focus is on love), but it also gives me a feeling that the protagonist's IQ is online, and this kind of explicit clues can also strengthen the overall coherence of the plot. At the same time, the author will also consciously lay down foreshadowing, which is pretty good in terms of plot continuity. Moreover, I found the author's writing style quite comfortable. It has the feel of a Japanese love light novel, and the overall rhythm is relatively relaxed. This style of romantic comedy is more to my liking. Of course, there are some shortcomings that I think. I feel that the current narrative is relatively flat. Although the protagonist will say something to highlight the character in the later stages of the game, I feel that it succeeds smoothly afterwards (of course, the protagonist as the God of Galgame should be in the invincible style. If it is too random, it will be self-defeating). In addition, the author has always just followed the narration without deliberately highlighting it, resulting in insufficient tension in the climax of the work and unable to highlight the protagonist's abilities. As for someone in the book review area who said that the protagonist is a "tool man", although there seems to be nothing wrong with it, in my opinion this is not a poisonous point. (The poisonous point in my opinion is NTR scripts in which one likes oneself or what one likes is pushed by others, or one is sent to be pushed by others, and the protagonist is just a matchmaker.) After all, the protagonist is not a stallion, and there is no need to push one after another. However, it is true that the protagonist's own emotional line is relatively weak and he is not interested in others, but this also portrays the protagonist's character from a certain perspective. At present, the protagonist has become Mako Muto's boyfriend in the game. This is actually an opportunity - an opportunity for the protagonist's personality to change. It is a beautiful story about growing up from a young boy who is dismissive of his surroundings and thinks he is in trouble and slowly accepts reality. Now the story has just begun. Why is the protagonist obsessed with Galgame and out of tune with reality? What is going on with that strange game? The story of the protagonist and his childhood sweetheart... There are too many stories to tell here. Nothing in the novel is without reason. The novel needs logic. The author can make the article based on the protagonist's addiction to Galgame and Qingmei's unconditional kindness. Qingmei's overly perfect character seems not full enough, and her unconditional kindness may just be regret and guilt for the tragedy caused by her past inaction. Of course, as a setting, each game is similar to a unit drama and seems to be independent of each other. Writing in this way is certainly simpler. But I think that the emergence of every plot must play a role in the subsequent development. As I mentioned above, the game can be a bridge to change the protagonist himself. For the protagonist who only cares about Galgame and Qingmei, these are the only two things that can allow him to refocus his attention on reality. The above are my suggestions and expectations for the author as a reader. I particularly like this sentence: If a gun appears in the prologue, it will shoot bullets in the ending at the latest. This is also a major rule for writing articles. This work brought me a moment of joy, and I hope the author can bring us better works.

I think it should be called the strongest tool person 😆😆😆

Maybe I haven't given up yet. If possible, the author could tell me again that I won't update it, or let me give up and give up hope. More, you have another fan.

Good guy, is it a eunuch again? Fortunately, I thought about raising it for a while before watching.

I've been reading this since the author's last book and I really like it! I hope I can keep writing!

The author actually moved real things into it!🙂🙂

The protagonist is really a tool man.

If it were renamed the Minotaur system and the protagonist specialized in greening others, the popularity might be even higher. The tool man also helps others. Women are too poisonous.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Don't write about things that were popular in the past, otherwise you'll feel like you've been out of date for too long, which is embarrassing.