Painter of Douluo

Qian Xunji roared: I am your teacher, why do you want to kill me? Mo Hui looked angry: It's not because you hurt sister Dong'er Qianxunji: Do you like Bibi Dong? Then why didn't you stop Yu Xiaogang and Bibi Dong earlier when you knew they were together? Could it be that you want to get rid of Yu Xiaogang, your love rival? I didn't expect you to hide it so deeply Mo Hui: Yes, the teacher didn't expect you to become smarter when you were about to die. But you're only half right. Qianxunji: Did you plot against me? Mo Hui: Hahahaha! That's right, teacher, you are very important in my plan! Snort! Snort! Qianxunji: Was it you who secretly passed on the love affair between Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang? Mo Hui: Yes, it was indeed me. When I first saw Bibi Dong, I regarded her as my own sister. But when I saw Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang falling in love, I knew that Bibi Dong would definitely leave Wuhun Hall, so I had to destroy the two mountains in Bibi Dong's heart, first love Yu Xiaogang and your mentor Qian Xunji. Only if you two disappeared, there would be me in Bibi Dong's heart Qianxunji: So You are plotting against me and Yu Xiaogang, I see. I understand. You know your love. Even if you tell Bibi Dong, Bibi Dong will not really like you because she only regards you as her younger brother. So you are plotting against me. After Bibi Dong becomes stronger, you will then take care of Bibi Dong in an aboveboard way. At this time, Bibi Dong must be desperate and helpless inside. If you are close to Bibi Dong in a caring role, you can increase Bibi Dong's feelings infinitely during this period of time. Then release the news about the hundred thousand year soul beast and let me fight with Tang Hao. No matter who wins or loses, it will not affect your plan. Right? My good disciple, but aren't you afraid that Tang Hao can't kill me? Mo Hui: Indeed, I was a little worried at first about what to do if Tang Hao didn't kill you? It wasn't until later that I figured it out. I could use Bibi Dong's hand to get rid of you. If you win the injection, you will definitely be seriously injured when you go back. In this way, I will work with you and Bibi Dong to get rid of you and then put the blame on Tang Hao. At this time, your father Qian Daoliu will 100% suspect me and Bibi Dong. Yes, but Bibi Dong already has a child, so she will definitely not be ruthless. If I spread the news about you being killed by Tang Hao during this period of time, even if Qiandaoliu doesn't believe it, you have to believe it until the end, because you are the Pope and you represent Wuhun Palace. Qiandaoliu will definitely chase and kill Tang Hao for the sake of Wuhun Palace's face. And at this time, your daughter will slowly sink. Then the teacher will be even happier. No, I can't call you teacher now, but call you father-in-law. And I will become the Holy Son of Wuhun Palace and your daughter will become the next Wuhun Palace. When the time comes, Bibi, the Saint of the Soul Palace, will definitely feel guilty and marry his daughter to me. By then, half of the Soul Palace will belong to me and Bibi Dong, and your father will never in his life think that the person who killed his son is actually beside her. . . Ha ha ha ha!

I thought it was a minor poison, but I didn't expect it to be a serious poison. I was really disgusted. Author, you really don't want your book to be successful. Now there are only two themes for fan fiction. One is to join Shrek and become the eldest brother of the Seven Monsters, and the other is to join the Spirit Hall to rob the protagonist of the original work. What's wrong with writing such a speechless plot 😅

It's my fault for being so disgusted.

Let's be honest, it's poisonous and smells like a bitch.

Many authors like to write poisonous points. They all know that the fanfic is just to change the original work. In the end, nothing is changed but the problem becomes worse.

The author is seeking death. How much do you not want your book to be bad? 8

Bibi Dong's body is in the shape of Qian Xunji. If the protagonist's body is a little small, wouldn't it be possible to change its shape?

You don't understand the happiness of Cao thief at all, how come there is so much virgin complex?

Well, this book doesn't say anything, it's just the author. . . . Bibi Dong's place is so weird! No other issues.

It was my first time to be an assistant and I was very touched. (˃̵̣̣̣̣̆ω˂̵̣̣̣̣̆) ˚ଂ

I want to know who the heroine is

Bibi Dong calls the protagonist junior brother, and Qian Renxue calls him brother, but there seems to be no problem. His father is also the protagonist's master. The circle is really chaotic.

By the way, the author should write some battle scenes. Although this book is biased toward daily life, it is Douluo Dalu after all. It is best to give the protagonist a process of inner transformation and a desire for power (provided that it is not tortured). If there is a fighting scene in the later stage, I would like to make a request. I hope that the protagonist can get rid of the shackles of the brush during the battle, and use the mental world to erode reality like an inherent enchantment (infinite sword system, king's military power, etc.)

There are many poisonous points in this book, and I don't want to hide it, because if you can't bear it, you might ask my family's questions. Therefore, all my poisonous points, which I discovered and readers discovered, will be marked here in the future. Current poison point 1: Bibi Dong was hurt, I wrote it out in detail. Poison Point 2: Part of the logic does not make sense. This is relatively easy to accept, as long as you are not too picky. Poisonous Point 3: The protagonist's character is naive and a bit kind in the early stage. Some people read the story and said "The Holy Mother".

Qianxun Jiji Liangliang, if Yu Xiaogang can reconcile with Bibi Dong, and if he can be tied to Tang San, he might even become a god.

Sendo-ryu is the main shrine of the shrine, and the shrine is independent. The pope cannot order the shrine, only Senga can do it.

I just want to ask what the color of the protagonist's soul ring is? Other people's soul rings are described, but when it comes to the protagonist, it's over?

This fanfic is very comfortable to read.

I have created a reader group. You can add it and say anything in it. Group number: 686348565

The subject matter is okay, but your martial arts spirit is a bit useless. You can refer to Zhou Yuan's pen, which can not only draw talismans, but can also be used as a gun, Shangguan Wan'er, and Tianbao Fuyaolu Qiu Yongsi. This is Douluo Continent, where force is the most important. If you can't fight, it means nothing.

Is the heroine Bibi Dong, please give me a boost from the author! 👍👍

Ask? Who are the heroine and the hero? When will it be updated?

I think the writing is pretty good. I saw a lot of people complaining about it. Although the writing by Yu Xiaogang and Qian Xunji is disgusting, I have to say that it really made me feel involved. The description is quite delicate. The main reason is that this book cannot be read as a fun novel.

This is my first time writing a book, so there will definitely be many shortcomings. I am also willing to hear your corrections to me, and I will consider them as appropriate. If you have any questions, you can express your criticisms and suggestions here. I will not delete any comments. I will try my best to correct all the shortcomings of this book in the next book. Finally, thank you all for your support🙏🙏

The author just insists on updating every day. Don't be too anxious. It's better to write novels that focus on quality rather than quantity. It's better to have better quality.

Qian Renxue! Qian Renxue! Qian Renxue! The heroine Qian Renxue! To be honest, I haven't seen a few books about the heroine Qian Renxue, and some of them were unbearable, lackluster, and not very immersive. This one is the better one for me so far. There is no such thing as a 10-year-old who is invincible within seconds, and a 15-year-old who is invincible in the world but wants to be defeated. The subject matter is also relatively new, except that the writing style needs to be improved, I think it is all good. The names are also okay. I don't think some books have bad names. Finally, although it has nothing to do with Douluo, I still want to say that Fairy Tail, Pirates, Naruto, Dragon Ball, etc. All have Chinese names, or they are Ye Moumou, So-and-so Sakaki (god), or very middle-class names. There is no sense of substitution at all, which is very inconsistent. This book is okay.

Good luck in the college entrance examination, I'm also looking forward to your next book

Come on, boss, I wish you can become a god soon! ! !

The creativity is good, but the writing is too immature.

Stupid author, this book is great, especially to my taste. Thank you for writing such a good book, and thank you Qidian for recommending this book to me.