I Have a Treasure Girlfriend at Home

The author writes really well, I not only want to vote! Also give a reward! Then add it to your bookshelf! Share it with your friends and family! All the comments about this chapter have been deleted! My little effort is the greatest support for the author!

Come on, the author chooses one for the cover 🙂

The title of this book doesn't have multiple heroines, right? Single female main event

{"NickName":"A snap of a finger to achieve immortality","UserId":359006764}The author, I am here to give pictures again🙂😁

The male protagonist is indeed unlikable. The author wanted to write a handsome guy, but he ended up writing a kind of uneducated gangster with a feeling of being vulgar. The female protagonist and the male protagonist lacked emotional foreshadowing. In fact, it is not without reason that many authors like to use aloof male god characters because aloof characters require a long emotional foreshadowing and will not make people feel that the characters and emotions written in this way are three-dimensional.

Sorry, I have to say goodbye. It's a little bit toxic and the quality of the male protagonist is too low. I feel like the author wanted to write something that was a bit naughty, but it was too much.

I like you very much! I hope the author will update it immediately and don't be disrespectful.

The writing is pretty good, but some places are rather blunt, and the fantasy description techniques are also awkward in some fragments. But the author's writing skills are very good. I feel that if this book fails, the author can try fantasy dog ​​food and write about recently popular themes in the field he is good at. Maybe it will become popular. Come on!

Giao, why, why did you let me read this cruelly handsome book so early? I read it over and over again 😭

Angels on Earth

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the writing is quite good, and the author likes to make fun of things, make jokes, and cooperate with readers' comments, which is quite funny, 😏😏

Author: When will the hero and heroine get together? It's so sweet. Come on, author! More please

Author I want to see them kiss😚

The previous plot is a bit similar to the top student's Japanese girlfriend, but it's okay.

The writing is so beautiful, keep up the good work!

If it is put on the shelves, Wo will definitely order it all 🙂

It's quite sweet. Come on, don't be a eunuch! ! ! ! ! Full order now! ! ! ! ! ! Support

Thinking of this book, I couldn't stand the first three chapters. The portrayal of the male protagonist feels like he's just trying to get away with it but not his heart Maybe there's been a little change here? Anyway, I left when I saw it before 😅 Now I'm a little preconceived

The male protagonist has reached the maximum level of persuasion strength. He just seems to be unqualified and a bit manic. The character of the heroine is fully copied from You Chu, but her behavior is not quite in line with the character, and there is a slight sense of separation. The author wants to cram in too many things at the beginning, including setting up the male and female protagonists, explaining how the male and female protagonists live together, and describing the male protagonist's occupation, but everything is superficial and not detailed enough. It looks like a running account and is not literary enough. For example, in the beginning, it is written directly that the male protagonist meets the female protagonist by chance on the street and then strikes up a conversation. But in fact, the male protagonist can wake up at home, and the villa can be described conveniently, and his career can also be explained at the same time. Then arrange a random reason to push the male protagonist to go out and complete the first encounter. The male protagonist should not be too aggressive in character. It is better to reduce the number of swear words and synonymous content. There is a high probability that no one will like a character that is too aggressive. Readers are also human beings. In essence, they still advocate content that is more in line with public order and good customs. For bad-tempered characters, you can check the rankings to see if anyone has written them. I didn't plan to write so many words at first. My plan was to criticize it and then delete the book. It turns out that the author's current monthly ticket sales are bleak. Korean entertainment novels with worse writing skills than yours have more monthly tickets than you. What a pity

Oh, no news at all. I didn't have time to place an initial order.

Angel? ? ? ?

F*ck, I can't eat anything that's too sweet or too greasy This book was so sweet from the beginning

Emmm is very sweet. The female protagonist is similar to Youchu but not inferior. Just ignore that the male protagonist is a bit like an eggplant.

Finished spreading flowers! 🌹

I haven't confessed my feelings, so why did I just call me wife There has to be a transition, and the plot is a bit... (You can learn from the Japanese girlfriend of the top student next door)

That's it? Not enough at all 😡, gkd

What can I say about the character of the male protagonist? It's not likable, but the female protagonist is okay. The author should try to write the male protagonist well, and don't use fantasy words all the time.

Is it going to end? , The author is so quick?

When I just came back to read it, I realized that there are still some that I haven't subscribed to yet hahahaha

Alas