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The protagonist is so stupid that he can't use any golden fingers!

How should I put it? If the author writes it for himself, it's fine, but if he wants to attract readers, it's completely impossible to read. Readers who haven't watched Chang'an Twelve Hours can't understand the plot at all. This book can only be used by the author to please you.

I would like to make a suggestion. Basically, the author writes about unfamiliar film and television dramas. I hope that when the author writes, he will explain the characters in the film and television drama respectively, and when he travels through a film and television drama, he will write down the steps of the film and television drama in paragraphs! If you haven't seen it yet, you can search it!

How can I put it this way? Anyone who has read three chapters and is not poisoned to death is a god.

The writing is mediocre, the plot is messy, the context is unclear, the priorities are indifferent, the logic is unclear, and the setting is confusing 😒 plus an incorrect outlook on things.

There is no worldview at all, just like a running account

The protagonist travels through different worlds, what is he pursuing? He seems to be a puppet of the system and has no pursuit of his own.

I didn't see the protagonist, but I saw a teddy that had been fucked...

The legend of all the old people in the world. Bulldozer legend of the heavens. Piledriver legend of the heavens.

I haven't even finished one chapter. I feel like the main character's IQ is worrying and it's a miracle he survives.

Find a class and stop being disgusting.

Incoherent words, nonsense, scribbling, stallion novels to the extent of self-pleasure, sowing seeds everywhere, having sex with women whenever he sees them, and frantically testing people on the sidelines, but no one will report him.

I just want to know if the author himself looks embarrassed.

It's too messy to wear it too quickly! Just write it all out,

I can't bear to be with the thief even though I know he stole my things. It's too frustrating.

The idea is good, but I'm bored and re-editing it. It's too long and it feels messy.

Who gave these 500 monthly tickets? You can see all this

The composition level of elementary school students is higher than yours: What is the thing written by a stick on the left and a hammer on the west? I don't even have the basic level of writing skills, yet some people actually voted for it.

I'm afraid he's not a fool, he's poisonous

I don't understand it. Except for the front part, I can understand it a little bit. I don't understand the back part at all.

There are too many worlds to write about, the writing is too messy, and there is no depth at all. It's like scraping every world.

How to say it? The book should be okay, but I feel like I can't stand it at all. I don't know what's going on, and I don't understand the plot of the movie at all.

It is best to write about astronomy in one world at a time.

Not bad! Although it's a bit broken! But it looks quite sour right now!

I am a primary school student. This is the second time I have seen such writing.

Author, you can just write Hong Kong variety shows when you write Hong Kong variety shows. Why is there suddenly another Chang'an Twelve Hours, and there are so many TV shows and movies in the series, so you must insert another one. It made me unable to watch it at all.