Endless Swarm Consciousness
无尽集群意识
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 107k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Interstellar Civilization
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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49Chapters
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Just leave some insights. First of all, if you choose a less popular subject to create, you have to choose other aspects to increase the motivation of readers to continue reading. As the beginning, you should write something that catches the reader's attention. Your preface is a bit long and boring. If readers are not interested in this subject, they may leave after reading the preface. Of course, I saw the latest updated chapter. The subsequent plot is indeed more attractive than the beginning, and I can see that you are trying to write more interesting things. However, your enthusiasm can be seen from your decision to create with this theme. As a bystander, I can only wish you good luck, hope you persevere and have good results
What you are talking about is a kind of collective consciousness, from the universe all the way to the forest. But the problem is, haven't you realized that what you are writing is more like an essay than a novel?
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