
The Censor of Jiangnan in Red Mansions
红楼之江南御史
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It's like asking if there is Qin Keqing. Don't get me wrong. I'm not a Cao thief 🤓😌. I just think that the most pitiable character in the whole story must be helped. You think so?
About my comparison and views on my Lin Daiyu and the original Lin Daiyu
I originally planned to write it directly in the work-related section, but I was afraid that some people might not read it, so I wrote it directly in the book review circle. You are also welcome to come and discuss it. First, let me talk about my views on Lin Daiyu in the original work. In fact, there is nothing much to say in itself, or I dare not summarize her in any sentence or word. Because the original author clearly showed us a Lin Daiyu who was about 17 years old. My 17-year-old here is partly based on the ending of Cheng Gao Benlin, and partly based on the story Grandma Liu told Jia Mu. Judging from the past 80 episodes, Lin Daiyu was at least 16 years old at that time. As for whether she was a full year old or a full year old, we don't care for the moment. What I want to say next is based on this, and then talk about Lin Daiyu in my novel. I admit that my writing skills are limited, and I cannot write something similar to the ethereal spirit of Lin Daiyu in the original work. Of course, I am also afraid that my writing will make people laugh, or even really insult Lin Daiyu. Rather than this, it would be better not to write it. I believe that most of the book friends who can read this book have followed the previous work. What I want to show you is Lin Daiyu after she turned 17. Some people may wonder, is this still Lin Daiyu? My answer is yes. Some people can't accept the grown-up Lin Daiyu (becoming like Xue Baochai), so they can take a detour on their own. Why I said that it became like Baochai, because it is based on the combination of Chai and Dai. I can say with certainty that if Lin Ruhai had not died, and if Lin Daiyu had not gone to Rongguo Mansion, then she would eventually become Xue Baochai, or even surpass Xue Baochai. Xue Baochai here does not specifically refer to Xue Baochai, but to people similar to Xue Baochai who follow feudal ethics. However, this is what many people who are obsessed with Lin Daiyu cannot accept. The reason why Lin Daiyu becomes a fairy and disappears into smoke in the original work is a manifestation of the author's unwillingness to lose his original intention. Of course, it may also be in memory of something. But the development of things follows rules. One thing I have always emphasized in my own books is that we must abide by the rules in everything, just like we must abide by the law in today's society. There is a gap between ideal and reality. Daiyu is the ideal, Baochai is the reality. Can the two be separated? We are all adults and I believe we all understand the truth behind this. Speaking of this, it does have some preaching meaning, so stop it here to avoid adding more jokes. I still chose my ideal and forcibly left my ideal in the world, even at the expense of changing her and even the environment around her. I believe that the mature Lin Daiyu is the most perfect. Maturity here refers to maturity in all aspects. Such people are rare in reality, but they can be reflected in novels. Of course, everything I do is really for the protagonist (both male and female). If you are in your position, you will seek your own policies; if you are not in your position, you will not seek your policies. Now that Lin Daiyu has sat in that position, she should understand what she is carrying. This is what Jia Mu said, and she is a real lady from everyone. Instead of feeling dejected about your own destiny and treating the people or things around you with a pessimistic attitude. Changing one's destiny against the will of heaven is not about relying on any one person to save it, but more about self-redemption. And I think Lin Daiyu in the original work should have this ability, but the surrounding environment had a great impact on her, forcing her to retreat. Now that I have changed the surrounding environment for Lin Daiyu in my novel, if she still behaves as passively as in the original work, it will really disappoint me, and she will not be the first of the twelve beauties. That's why she changes. This change lies in the change in her outlook on life and worldview. I have also mentioned this in my previous work, so I won't go into details here. I made her mature, which also paved the way for the rest of the story, rather than eliminating her spirituality. Wang You is pursuing the way of inner saint and outer king, and Daiyu, the daughter of Lin Ruhai, should also pursue it. This inner sage and outer king is also a kind of combination of hairpin and dai!
I don't understand what the author of this book is writing about, so I try to read as much as possible about the first chapter of the work. It's not about the Jia family, but about the Wang family and the Zhen family. The protagonists are also the Wang family and the Zhen family. Can't we tell the priority? I really don't know how some people read books. The Jia family plays a role in connecting the Wang family and the Zhen family. In the eyes of the Wang family and the Zhen family, the Jia family, except Jia Mu, can basically withdraw from the poker table early. The Jiangnan Ocean Boat is a good proof. The Jia family supervised the construction of the Ocean Boat back then, so they could not fail to see the role of the Ocean Boat. But now, only the Wang and Zhen families can afford to support it. The 24 chapters are intended to illustrate this point. Some people fail to understand one thing, that is, the ending of this book is not a happy ending, but a new life in ruins. The author wants to break and then build. This is the tone of this book. If you write about the love between a man and a woman, you and I spend the whole day together, what does this mean? Don't start by saying that this and this are not like the original, and that and that are so different from the original. I don't like that. The author is not Cao Xueqin. Anyone who likes sweet pet stories or happy endings can withdraw first. The first 80 chapters of the original Dream of Red Mansions take Bao Dai's love as the main line, interspersed with some tragedies related to the events of other members of the Jia family. On the surface, it can be said that it is about the Jia family, which is a fake story. But what about Zhen Shi (the real thing)? Lin Daiyu hasn't left the cabinet yet, I really wish she could stay and fly with the protagonist! I wish the protagonist would go against the whole world for her, so what has she become? I see you are so anxious that you are jumping up and down.
I also have here a hand-drawn floor plan of Cang Yang Building when I was writing the previous work. In fact, there are only two rooms in total, and the partitions between the rooms inside are roughly like this. Later, I specially compared the scale of the Grand View Garden in the layout plan of Rongning Second Mansion, and found that if Cang Yang Building was built according to my design, at least half of the courtyard would be in the lotus pond. Ha ha. This is embarrassing. I don't know if you can understand it either.
This book is too dry and boring to read. I don't know why you praise it so much. It's just boring and not enjoyable.
The floor plan of Rongning's Second Mansion and the timeline of the original Dream of Red Mansions
I was so confused after reading it. The author's multi-line development was a bit confusing. Moreover, the male protagonist does not stand out at all, nor does his youthful temperament. And the male protagonist is too stupid. One moment he appears to be very smart, the next moment he is extremely stupid, and he even likes to have a harem himself. I'm really speechless
After reading the character information and book reviews, I was successfully persuaded to quit. I have no favorite protagonist and one of the most annoying plots.
Forcibly arranging marriages to create conflicts was terrible. Anyway, I was put off by these plots. I can continue to read Dream of Red Mansions, because it seems contradictory but he doesn't want to feel like a shrew. However, the author's Jia Mu, Mrs. Wang, and even the civil and military officials of the emperor and marquis are written like shrews. All expressions are on the face and language. Also, Wang Xifeng is too far from the original work. She is not suitable for peaceful people, and no one can persuade her. And there is nothing wrong with Mrs. Wang and her sisters in my opinion. A four-big family that relies on marriage must have Lin Daiyu as his wife? Crazy? Moreover, a family like the protagonist's mother is actually optimistic about it. I laughed. The co-author traveled through time and his family's thoughts were also modernized? Are the only people in the Jia family clowns?
Sure enough, I still can't appreciate a book like this
Will a few wives accept it?😍
The most lacking thing in the whole Red Mansion is the awe-inspiring righteousness. If someone can write about The Red Mansion with righteousness and awe-inspiringness, then they are writing in a fancy way. Oh, I'm not talking about this movie.
The emperor's lineage chart in this book
The first 1-5 correspond to the five generations. In terms of age, the Emperor is about the same age as Jia Jing, or even older, but in terms of seniority, he is a generation younger than Concubine Zhen and Mu Jia. The age of Shengshang is expected to be in the range of 35-42, which is the same generation as Jia Zhen, Yuan Chun, Prince Zhongshun, and Wang Shuirong of Beijing, but this age is not much different from Wang Ziteng (48-52), Jia Zheng, and Zhen Yingjia. As for the late emperor, this man reigned for a relatively short time and I won't introduce him much. In terms of seniority, he is the same generation as Emperor Taizong. Explain the first generation, there were three emperors in total. Taizu, Taizong, Shizu, here you can refer to the three emperors of the Ming Dynasty. They lived under the same sky. In the early years, the four kings and eight princes were also ennobled by them. At the same time, it is also to form a cycle (the foreshadowing of Saint Sun). Note: The relationship between the Holy Emperor and the Supreme Emperor can refer to the emperors Shizong (Yongzheng) and Shengzu (Kangxi) of the Qing Dynasty.
Just reading the introduction, it smells like a half-baked literary youth. I have to wait until I read the text. . . . . .
In this novel, as a protagonist who has lived in two lives, he actually behaves as childishly as a child. One moment he is bold and wants to mix everything, and the next moment he is played around by others. Where is the organization? Let's first study the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties and major official cases. Assassination, you can try this case in the Ming and Qing Dynasties. This is an unspoken rule of officialdom. No one dares to do this unless a coup is in progress! An assassination will immediately shock the world, and the country will do whatever it takes to get to the bottom of it. Therefore, there are suicides in official circles, but there are no assassinations. The assassination case is so sensational because it only happens once in hundreds of years. I really think the unspoken rules of officialdom are so easy to challenge!
Pictures of Daiyu burying ladies with flowers (1), Daiyu playing with parrots in Xiaoxiang Pavilion (2), 87 edition photos of Daiyu burying flowers (3)
A million words of straightforward narration, just to kill the treasure with three swords.
A sword cuts through wood and stone. One sword returns cause and effect. A sword turns the head white. It is recorded on the first day of May in the Xinchou year.
I ran away because of the chapter names in this directory.
Daiyu explores spring in the same frame
It is rare for Daiyu and Tanchun to be in the same frame. It is taken from the 17th episode of the 1987 version of Dream of Red Mansions. It is the scene of Xiaoxiangzi enjoying the lingering fragrance.
Disappointed, really disappointed. Daiyu has not yet married. The ancients would not take a concubine until they were pregnant for three years. Are you ready to take a concubine before you are married? Is this what the author calls respect for Daiyu? . . . She had just arrived in Beijing and was ready to take Tanchun as my concubine. .
It is true that for half-literate young people, if a man has virtue, he is talented, and if a woman has no talent, it is virtue. This woman's talentless verb is a verb. She originally had talent, but she regarded it as nothing in her heart.
Regarding the local official system and corresponding ranks. (Take Yangzhou as an example) The setting of this book is that there are nine states in the world, and Yangzhou is one of them. The highest chief executive of a state is Quan Zhi, who is responsible for military and state affairs. It is an official name in the Song Dynasty. In the book, he only controls local civil affairs. He is similar to the chief envoy of the Ming Dynasty. For example, Lu Jinzhi, the magistrate of Yangzhou, is often referred to as Master Futai in the following text. As for the military and political leaders, they were prefecture military envoys, similar to the capital commanders in the Ming Dynasty, such as Jinling Jiedu envoy from Wang Zisheng, Chang'an Jiedu envoy from Yunguang, etc. There is one more person to mention here, and that is the protagonist's father, Wang Ziteng. He is the governor of nine provinces and controls the military of five towns. Someone like this can be called a master of Taiwan. The procuratorate is coordinated and managed by the Metropolitan Procuratorate, which is affiliated to the imperial court, such as the Du Censor (the second rank), the Deputy Censor (the third rank), the Left and Right Censors (the fourth rank), and the corresponding Dao Censors (different ranks), similar to the inspectors of the Ming Dynasty. A state has its own Dao, such as Jiangnan Dao, Huainan Dao, Jiangxi Dao, Zhejiang Dao, etc., And the highest administrator of the Dao is Daotai (fourth grade). Of course, there is a special situation, such as Jinling City, which is equivalent to the center of a state, and its status is no less than that of Dao. It is similar to Nanjing, the two capitals of the Ming Dynasty, and belongs to the capital. Below it are the prefectures, such as Jinling Yingtian Prefecture, Jiangning Prefecture, Jiankang Prefecture, Gusu Prefecture, Songjiang Prefecture, etc. The highest administrative officer of the prefecture is the prefect, or the prefectural master (from the fourth grade). The prefects are assisted in management by Tongzhi (the fifth grade) and Tongfan (the sixth grade), which are similar to downsized state officials. Under the government is the county, and the chief executive is the county magistrate, the county magistrate, or the county magistrate (the seventh rank). Some people may ask why the protagonist, a small seventh-rank inspection censor, can suppress the fourth-rank magistrate, and even the magistrates and magistrates of high rank do not dare to offend. The reason is that the protagonist's censor is a Taoist censor. Moreover, no matter how young the censor is, he can secretly report to the emperor, and he represents the Tian family, so when the local officials see it, they will naturally rush to flatter and please. If you don't understand, you can search it on your own. Generally speaking, local censors generally serve a term of one year. Except for accidents, such as Lin Ruhai's salt patrol censor, he was re-elected for many years or even died in office. I won't go into details here.
Lu Xuegang, is this last character pronounced guǎng? If you don't understand, you can look it up on Baidu. Don't just say that I wrote it wrong or just have question marks all over your face. The correct pronunciation is Lu Xueyuan (yǎn). As for why, go to Baidu. In some books (manuscripts), the name of this place is written as "Luxue'an", "Luxue'an" or "Luxueting".
This article is irrelevant. I just read a novel and looked up the source of a poem in it. I felt that the big names who have left their names in history are all the templates for the protagonists of the novel. 😰 He is knowledgeable and knowledgeable, has covered a wide range of topics, and has written books and theories. His students and generations are outstanding. Ming, Qiu Jun, I don't know who can write about him. In addition, the poems were also copied. Ode to Lychees There are no more precious fruits in the world, and the jade snow skin is covered with crimson gauze. A natural good taste, but unfortunately it lives in the end of the world.
Is the protagonist rebelling? What's the difference between a time-traveling protagonist who doesn't rebel and a salted fish?
The writing is unreasonable. Keeping Lin Daiyu in Jia's house highlights Jia Baoyu's bastard nature. It is easy to make up the word count to find the content, but it is too fake for the article. It's even more false for Tanchun to stand up. It's not good for anyone to stand up when there is no need to stand up at all. Unless everyone is a fool, there must be a logical choice to get in!
Good guy, it's the fifth update today, it's really big? !
Comment on Chapter 31, Section 7 In this section, the author quotes a section of "Continuing the 40 Aftertaste" from Kong Shangren's "The Peach Blossom Fan" during the Kangxi period of the Qing Dynasty. As for what "The Peach Blossom Fan" is about, let's briefly talk about the story of Hou Fangyu and Li Xiangjun. If you are interested, please use Baidu. It's a tragedy. First of all, after understanding the general background of the story of "The Peach Blossom Fan", combined with the author's narration and the author's own words related to the work, I believe that the author is inclined to the view that the original Dream of Red Mansions is an allusion to events in the late Ming and early Qing Dynasties. I won't discuss what the original work really is for the time being. What I care about is the ending of Wang You and Lin Daiyu written by the author. According to the author's strict adherence to the original writing and narrative style, there is no room for random talk in the world of Red Mansions. Does this peach blossom fan imply that the final outcome of Wang You and Lin Daiyu will be like that of Hou Fangyu and Li Xiangjun? This place really worries me. Hopefully I'm wrong.
Not to mention smashing the protagonist's body, if you cut the jade with a knife, the jade will not be damaged at all.
As an LSP, I just want to ask if there will be any extras?