Yunyang Scholars in Red Mansions

I have been following this book for a long time, so I would like to share my feelings after reading this book. I personally think that the author should write one more preface, which is kind of an introduction, and categorizes the published content (review). Of course, this is also my personal suggestion. First, it is convenient for readers to self-identify. Second, it is convenient for the author to clarify his own ideas. Third, it is a kind of introduction and promotion. As for new readers, it is up to them. Let me talk about my own feelings first. Overall, it's okay and I can accept it. Some parts are well written, such as the description of the other side of Baochai's psychology (repressed personality), the LSP psychology of Mr. Lian, and the dark side of Mrs. Wang (actually standing on the side of Wang's interests are not dark) description, as well as other people's psychological descriptions and contrasting writing techniques, as well as the revelation of previous foreshadowing, etc. However, there are also shortcomings. The biggest flaw is that the early pace is too fast, and there is also a lack of skill in wording and writing, but it can be tolerated. Of course, I read the previous comments. The author originally planned to end it at 450,000 words. I guessed that the original ending may end with the protagonist leaving the Grand View Garden. After all, what happens after that has nothing to do with the Red Mansion. It is closer to the officialdom of the court, so the early pace is too fast, especially from the 8th episode to the 20th episode. As for the protagonist's twelve-year-old Jinshi, although the author has explained it, in fact, if you look at the back, you will find that the protagonist must be a Jinshi to be able to pressure everyone (people from the four major families) to follow his rhythm. If he is just a scholar, some of the things that follow This is not true, for example, feudal patriarchs such as Wang Ziteng and Jia Zheng, they are representatives of patriarchy, as well as Shi (Wang You's mother) and Mrs. Wang, they are representatives of matriarchy. If the protagonist (Wang You) wants to obtain more benefits, he can only use royal power to compete and coerce them. The death of Lin Ruhai, the teacher of Tiandi Jun, is a blow to the protagonist, but it is also a kind of tempering, and of course there is a responsibility (about Lin Daiyu). This article has a strong atmosphere of loyalty and filial piety, especially filial piety, not only for the Wang family where the protagonist belongs, but also for the protagonist's aunt, Mrs. Wang (Jia family), so the protagonist wants to marry Lin Daiyu and join the Wang family, but here it means marrying, not accepting, because it is difficult. Wang You, I have to say that the author got this name very well. Wang You, Wangyou, seemed to be directed at Lin Daiyu from the beginning, but it was not the kind of mindless licking, it was restrained, and it was based on emotion and not politeness. I find this very difficult. The author set the tone of this book to be a sadistic novel, but from the author's work and the comments and replies to book friends, it can be seen that the protagonist and Lin Daiyu came together in the end. As for the four major families, they were defeated. The fate of the others is not easy to say yet (I guess Tanchun is the author's real heroine. If you don't believe me, you can read the work yourself, Tanchun will be saved!). After all, the author hasn't written it yet, so we can still wait and see.

Many people say that Lin Daiyu cannot be a mistress, but I think it is a joke. I have been familiar with the Four Books since I was a child, and what I learned in it is to govern the country and bring peace to the family. As a woman, there were no conditions for women to govern the country at that time. The family was indeed more than enough. Lin Daiyu in the original work represents a scholarly family. The so-called poetry and calligraphy family will be prosperous forever and passed down from generation to generation. And Xue Baochai represents a wealthy family, which has been passed down for three generations. This is the way the two people deal with things and their ideas brought about by different family traditions, which will also affect the next generation. If the protagonist wants to take the path of a merchant, Xue Baochai will be more helpful, but the main character is to take the path of a civil servant. Sister Lin's cultivation of a literati family tradition from a young age is the icing on the cake. As for mistress communication, it is nonsense to say that Lin Daiyu is not as good as Xue Baochai. Lin Daiyu had just entered the house at the age of six. At that time, no one dared to match the little Lin Daiyu's ability to change her mind. The only thing that made Lin Daiyu lose her head was that she went all in with love without leaving any way for herself to retreat. This is also the most valuable thing about her, but it is even more flawless.

Talking about the ancient big families, even if the parents have forgotten, there are still people in the family who will not put the boys in other people's homes for upbringing, let alone the parents are still alive. Besides, in the ancient big families, men and women did not sit together at the age of 6. It was just for the reputation of their children. Why did the Jia family indulge Baoyu? That is because he was born with a jade in his mouth. Cultivate Baoyu in the direction of a playboy and ruin his reputation. Otherwise, what will he do in the face of imperial power? In ancient times, people could die because of name issues, let alone auspiciousness. From this, we can imagine that the reputation of Baoyu's peers or juniors living in the Grand View Garden will not be good, so none of the girls can marry well. Do you really think there is no good man? It was impossible for a family of the same family to let a woman with a bad reputation into the house, and other wealthy families would not want her, so someone would pay for it, and Jia He would marry the same woman. There was nothing that could be done about it. Personal analysis: The Jia family was forced to lose their reputation because of the auspicious incident. Many other families stopped having too much contact with them due to various reasons and just got along with them. In the later period, the Jia family even participated in the rebellion. The author is also a slut, letting the protagonist go to the Jia family to grow up, and his reputation is gone. What else can the children of wealthy families who had no reputation in ancient times do...

Perhaps due to the influence of the original work of Red Mansion, it is difficult for those who collect double books or collect stamps to read it. In the past, the protagonist of Red Mansions got married quickly and thought it was to "lay a base" for external construction. Unexpectedly, he was also collecting stamps, and Lin took the initiative to attract people to his home, which was unacceptable. The fans definitely need to be influenced by the original work. After all, readers already have a three-dimensional image of the characters in their minds. Excessive private settings are purely YY. In the current situation, even if the author writes everyone to death, it is not so difficult to accept.

After reading the 48th chapter, let me tell you why I don't like it. The author has too much foreshadowing before. He is the legitimate son Qilin'er, he is the eleven-year-old Tanhua, he is the leader of the younger generation of Lin's father's disciples, and so on. The protagonist's aura is too full. However, not to mention the big waves, even if there is a small wind or wave, he has to deal with losing ground and resign himself to fate. What should we do? Since nothing can be changed, what is the meaning of existence as a time traveler? As a serious novel, it is too shallow, and as a web article, it loses its excitement.

Eleven-year-old Tanhua? It's too exaggerated.

Why do pig's feet look like trash? They are worse than precious jade.

Author, if you never understand that today's book friends do not come to Red Mansions for literature, or for anything you know, they only read Red Mansions for the Yingying Yanyan in Red Mansions... If I didn't write this, the Red Mansions with a single heroine would never be supported by anyone. Maybe there would be a few little eunuchs who would just come out to scream.

I don't know how much influence Tanhua can have if he is appointed as an editor (librarian of the Central Library) of the Hanlin Academy? The position will be awarded to the second-ranked editor (seventh grade) and the best candidate after passing the examination. Couldn't the scheming emperor let the protagonist sit on the bench for a few years? Author Jun🙂

Is the pig's trotter competing with Baoyu for the title of who is the world's most wasteful person?

After reading it, the author wrote about how stunning the protagonist's appearance is, but as a reader, I can't feel his charm. Even if I say how smart he is, I don't feel it. I only see a person who is not determined and does this and that. The emotional description is not enough, and I feel like I like it without experiencing anything. It may be said that it has no content, but in fact, some of it is not detailed. The character traits of the protagonist are not written out either.

I can only say that this Red Mansion article is quite elegant, pleasant to read, and has the charm of Red Mansions. I like it very much. I will post it here as proof. Once it is published, I will definitely subscribe! Hope you come on, hold on!

I hope to see Baochai and Daiyu be together with Wang You in the end

I just read the related works. As long as it's not stamp collecting, it's considered unconventional at the starting point. 🙂

The writing is excellent, I like it very much. But I still hope that Baochai will have a better fate. In fact, when I read the original novel, I didn't like Daiyu but I liked Baochai more. Although Baochai is thoughtful, he has a general understanding and knows how to advance and retreat. It would be good if Sister Lin is good, but if he really becomes the matron of a family, it will be a burden to him. Daiyu is too kind-hearted, but he can't do anything when it comes to slaves like Zhou Rui who bully his master, let alone foreign affairs. As for Baochai, her father died when she was young. Her mother only knew how to spoil her son, and her brother was a bastard. The family still had to look to her for advice. It should be no problem to control the inner house. There are many ideas. If a political opponent wants to focus on the inner house in the future, it can be solved.

Saw this in one breath. I am a familiar reader of Red Mansions. I have read several Red Mansions and would like to express my opinions. First, the image of the protagonist is, in the author's words, called "Chai body and Dai Xin". I think the "Chai body" can be seen, but the "Chai body" is slightly lacking. Lin Daiyu's heart lies in rootless grass, and she laments that she cannot control her own destiny. The protagonist travels in a trance and tries his best to save the family but feels powerless many times. We can understand Lin Daiyu's "heart". But to be honest, the protagonist is really not as meticulous as Baochai. In the original work, Baochai went from being rejected to having a "good match" to repeatedly admonishing Baoyu. It can be said that Baochai is determined and moves towards the goal again and again. However, the protagonist actually seems cowardly and feels "world-weary" even if he is not satisfied. Secondly, the language and text are actually pretty good. It's not as good as the one I'm following now (I won't name it specifically), but it's still passable. The most important thing is that the text that combines several foreshadowings and real-life red theory conjectures is very popular with me. The protagonist was startled by the thought that the Red Mansion might be filled with spirits transforming, and I was also startled. The protagonist is suspicious and unsteady, and it is easy to be confused by this kind of fantasy, which is very reasonable. Third, the article progresses incredibly fast, which is a big flaw. Many characters just start playing with each other without any emotional foreshadowing. Lin Daiyu went from frowning and writing a poem to writing a letter, and then fell in love to death. Xue Baochai wanted to be the wife of Gaoming, but Wang You also said that Lin Daiyu would not be like this. I think Lin Daiyu in this book is not so much in love with the protagonist as she is afraid of Rongguo Mansion. She is afraid that the protagonist will abandon her every day. Maybe you, Lin Xianshu, are also a time traveler who has read the script. Finally, don't go too deep into palace politics. I have read so many Red Mansions, but none of them can write about palace politics well. If you can write about the power and intrigue in the Red Mansions novel like the historical novel, it will take the spotlight. Moreover, to be honest, if you go to the emperor and say that I am a spy for you, please don't let me die, the emperor will be happy and immediately praise him, and immediately start his own plan to fight against the emperor, making it seem that everything is ready and only owes Wang You, and he just happened to say that he is Zhou Gongjin. Do you think your boy is the reincarnation of Dongfeng?

I really couldn't stand this book at the beginning. You could even write that the original person died at the beginning. Is it okay to take away his body and recognize his parents like this? Let your parents and relatives give all their love and care to you, the murderer of your son? I really don't know what Wang Ziteng and his wife would think if they knew about it?

Let's not talk about the author's writing style. After all, I am a novice, and I think every writer goes through this process, from immaturity to maturity. As far as the setting of this book is concerned, after reading it, I feel that the author is indeed thinking from another perspective. I have also read a lot of books, and Wang You is indeed different from those protagonists who like to slap in the face to make things fun. Of course, I had a habit before reading books, that is, I like to read the content related to the work. I think it contains the author's setting and thinking about the book, just like the preface. I think the author is just telling a story, a story about a young man in contemporary society who has a somewhat closed mind and enters the world of Red Mansions, and has some collisions with the protagonist and supporting characters in the original work. Although it is not very enjoyable to watch, the author did try his best in some places. I don't know if the author deliberately cut off the text to prepare for filling in the holes later. I like what the author said. The protagonist is here to break the situation, not to find girls. I think changes in the situation can easily cause changes in a person's mentality and style of doing things. In my personal opinion, the author's writing is very good. Maybe the writing style is lacking in warmth, but it can be seen that the author is thinking. I look forward to the protagonist Jiang Nan and his party being upright, cultivating themselves, managing their families, and governing the country and the world. The author is really writing about a person, a person with shortcomings. Come on!

If there really is a person like Lin Daiyu, how can we get along with her without any separation? You vomit a refrigerator full of blood every year, and you have to be nervous when you speak, just for fear that she will blackmail you 😥 There is quite a market for people like Xue Baochai.

What is a cool article? The author writes like this all his life. Failure to capture readers is failure

The four major families in Dream of Red Mansions, Wang Ziteng, are the best to break the situation. I don't know what I am worried about. It is really unfounded! In the original work, after Wang Ziteng died, the Jia family immediately fell into disarray. Wang Ziteng started as the governor of the capital camp, and later became the governor of nine provinces! It can be said that he controls at least one-third of the country's soldiers and horses, and his official position has been promoted again, and he is a proper confidant of the emperor! If Emperor Wang Ziteng was really worried, he would hand over such an important position to him. At the beginning, the Jiedushi of the Beijing camp was in charge, and at the end, all nine provinces were on guard to control the armies of the nine provinces. In the end, he was promoted to the rank of Bachelor of the Cabinet. This was obviously an overt promotion, but his military power was removed. On the way to Beijing, he died of a sudden illness!

From these works, we can see that the author has a low-level, but hard-edged feeling. It depends on the protagonist's choice, what Tᴹ's choice, you are not the author, the book is not written by you? It's obviously a matter of your decision. If you have to say something, it's up to the protagonist to make his own choice. Can he make his own choice? Didn't you write those plots? Write a bunch of nonsense.

Is this book a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? If you have a harem, there is no need to read it.

Come on, improve the IQ of the supporting characters, come on, come on, come on.

I don't like Lin Daiyu, she's pretentious

Based on the comments of the author of Chapters 133 and 134 (the chapters are named Jin Ranchi and Weiguan Road), briefly analyze the author's thoughts and ideas. Except for the little maids, basically all the characters who have an impact on the plot or framework of the story have appeared. Here I have to pity the two NPCs Yingchun and Xichun. Since their appearance, they have always been like transparent people, especially Yingchun (I hope the author can write a separate chapter for these two later). First of all, let's talk about the protagonist. I have talked about Wang You before, so I won't talk much about his character here. Let's talk about his feelings for Lin Daiyu. After all, if there is a boy and a girl, is there any need to talk about this relationship? The author said yesterday that Lin Daiyu will not become an immortal in the end, which means that she will not die, and the author also said that she will marry. Note that this is marriage, not acceptance, which shows that Wang You is deeply in love with Daiyu, but the love between a man and a woman is not paid by one of them. From knowing each other to There are many experiences in falling in love and staying together. Wang You is a thirty-year-old man in his body. His outlook on life and values have already been set. He just traveled through time and spent 5 years in the world of Red Mansions, and he can quickly adapt to the new environment. But Lin Daiyu is different. She is only 12 years old. Her outlook on life and values ​​have not been finalized, so she needs someone to teach her. In fact, it is best for this person to be Wang You's sister Wang Luan, but the latter is not in the Grand View Garden, followed by Baochai. In the Grand View Garden, one can know Wang You's thoughts, but Chai and Dai are the two of them, so they have the Golden Ranch. Let's talk about Lin Daiyu, who is rare and beautiful. As the first heroine of Red Mansions, she is also the first of the twelve real hairpins in Red Mansions (tied with Baochai). The key is whether the Lin Daiyu written by the author is the Lin Daiyu in the original work. This remains to be discussed. I personally think it can be said that it is yes, or it can be said that it is not. I have read the comments on the dialogue between Fanqin and the author. In fact, in my opinion, Fanqin is a supporter of the Lin faction, although he does not admit it himself. I will stop here for now and return to the topic. I am not a double standard, I just look at what he wrote from the author's perspective. The author has opened up another way to tell the story of Red Mansions. Since it is a fanfic, does Lin Daiyu have to be like the original? The author said that he changed Lin Daiyu from an immortal to a human, rather than from a human to an immortal as in the original work. In fact, when we (no, to be precise, I) read the Red Mansions fan fiction, whether it's the harem stallion or the Industrial Revolution, the only thing that matters is whether Lin Daiyu's ending is satisfactory. Even if all four major families are wiped out, can Lin Daiyu survive (Guiyou is dead anyway, alas!) Author Yang Yang Sasha has written so much, but some people think it is abuse, feel uncomfortable, or feel bored. I will not blame anything for this, and the same is true for the author, because everyone has their own preferences in articles. The author naturally likes what he likes, and does not insist on what he doesn't like, which shows that he has a stable mentality. Although there was only one visit per day, at least there were no eunuchs. A large part of the reason why Red Mansions is difficult to write is that it is difficult to agree with others, so the author must have a good mentality. I can basically see the current situation, and the chess pieces played by the author have gradually unfolded, just like the momentum in the original article. It just requires readers to be patient and look for clues, so this article is not suitable for readers who like brainless fun. Generally speaking, it is a bit brain-consuming, but novels that require brains rarely become popular. This is the starting point. In terms of classification, this article can be regarded as traditional literature, which at least conforms to the concept of the original work, rather than being brainless. This requires excluding a large number of people from reading. I hope the author can relax his mind and continue writing based on his grades, instead of ending up as an eunuch. Anyway, you have settled the situation, and the pen is in your hand. If the four major families are destroyed, they will be destroyed, but Lin Daiyu must not die!

I think of Chapter 126 (Baochai's Dream) updated by the author yesterday. Here I am basing the author on Chapter 5 (Wang You's Dream). Chapter 5 is solid. The author himself said it was foreshadowing, indicating that it is true. But the dream of Baochai in Chapter 126 really left me unfinished. Here I use this post as evidence to make a bold guess about the ending of You, Bao, Chai, Dai, and Tan. Wang You (said before) seemed to have gone somewhere and never came back, which then triggered a series of chain reactions and even triggered the collapse of the four major families. If the work is true, then he should have come back in the end and successfully took Daiyu away. Like this star Chenfei stood up in the sky for whom the wind was exposed last night. This sentence is lonely and despairing) Baoyu (mentioned in Chapter 126 that he is crazy, he must have gone to become a monk) Baochai (should have witnessed all this, although he has not witnessed it with his own eyes, but he knows indirectly, he should survive) Come on, it's no use to miss lovesickness, maybe it's frivolous to feel melancholy!) Daiyu (It's really hard to say, the white silk ribbon immediately reminded me of the jade belt hanging in the forest. If that's true, I'm really sad. I'm afraid that what Wang You took away was Daiyu's ashes.) Tan Chun (winner) , the big winner, the author's real heroine, no jade and precious hairpin can match Tanchun, the two sisters fight to the end, they are all for Tanchun, it's really a good wedding dress. People compete with each other, and the bright moon is accompanied by Chang Geng. ) The author expresses the relationship between the protagonist and the moon many times in the article. Looking at the poems quoted by the author, the protagonist asks "For whom the wind and dew stand in the sky?" Baochai's answer is from Li Yishan, and Tanchun's answer is from Su Dongpo. I don't know Daiyu's answer, but I feel that I should be able to write it (and must write it, because these verses are like the flower sign, a prophecy!) Li Yishan's sentence is love but not available (far away). Su Dongpo's sentence is Zhongzhengpinghe (center). Daiyu's answer should be (nearly). Thinking about it this way, a strong contrast will be formed. The author's commonly used technique is contrast (mentioned in the related work). But I still hope that my guess about the ending is not true. At least Daiyu should be alive, otherwise your plan of more than 400,000 words will become a joke? But if you think about it carefully, it may be the helplessness you mentioned. The agency was too clever in its calculations, but it cost Qingqing her life. Wang You has the shadow of each of the twelve hairpins. The hairpin body and the heart, Xiangyun's reputation as a celebrity, Tanchun's housekeeping ability (if I were a boy, I would have gone out to have a career, career-minded), Miaoyu (wanted to be an outsider: outsider, but still on the inside: inside), Yuanchun (concerns about the family and the ability to control the situation), Sister Feng (all the agencies have been exhausted, and the workmanship) Yu scheming), Xichun (sometimes showing a ruthless side), Qiaojie (childish, sometimes very caring about what she likes), Li Wan (selfish, considering personal interests), Yingchun (sometimes also having a dull side), Keqing (delicate appearance), the author's mind is really strong 👍. (Diary on November 19, 2020)

The author is very good, and it's great that he can answer the messages from book friends. However, I hope the author will not be influenced by book friends

{"NickName":"Qingfeng Linxia Gongzi Wushuang","UserId":348655243}The book is very good, can you do the dubbing, Sister Lin😁😁

This book ranks first among me in The Red Mansion. One shows Mrs. Wang in another visual way. One writes about my fantasy of Daiyu's life after her marriage. The other writes about how time travelers simply don't have much ability. They realize that they are more ordinary and cannot save them all. The other writes about the excitement of the Garden Opera, so good, so good.