Xing Wuyao

Soliloquy narration, childish writing style, just to make up the words, each chapter has no content.

The tempo is a bit slow, and I look forward to it unfolding. I believe that the game is super strong in controlling the game and can jump to unlimited maps. If it is slower in the front, it will not be easy to collapse in the back.

Seeing the author's hard work, I hope the author can write emotional novels and write more about women's topics. I hope the author can care about the readers and work hard to write.

How so! No one? This is an interstellar book, I believe Xuan Yu can recreate the legend of Xiaobing Legend

Doesn't care about details, doesn't stand up to scrutiny, looks a bit childish, not for old bookworms!

The great god has written an interstellar novel again. Damn it, this is the first novel in the author's life. I will definitely support it.

Suddenly I found that Xuan Yu was still writing. . .

It's so tiring to read. The protagonist is as innocent as a child. I can't say it's written well, but it just looks awkward. Every time I see the protagonist acting like a child, I'm speechless. Maybe it's because I'm used to novels with mature protagonists. In comparison, I prefer those who play tricks or crush them decisively.

Sure enough, I knew it. Your setting is originally a mess. You said that Star Girl has the highest combat power. But as you write. Now this new slang originally just refers to a pendant. Similar to Paimon. An elf pendant. The highest combat power can't take action against humans, so what's the use? Does it make sense for Stargirl to fight Stargirl? That makes no sense, why are you writing about this Stargirl? According to what you wrote, it is normal to rush into the street.

Are you sure it was written by the author of Xiaobing Legend? I can't stand it after reading dozens of chapters, it's childish

The first part is fine, but the later logic is wrong. Fantasy novels can have no logic in the real world, but the author cannot violate his own logic. In the first part, Star Girl can twist battleships, but later it is written that she cannot attack humans. So what else can Star Girl do, specifically to catch Star Girl? What's the use of catching it?

Let's write a remastered version of the Legend of the Little Soldiers 🙂. As long as it's not worse than the old one, I don't dare to say too much. I'll definitely support it. Please write down the big plot in the later period. It's not as serious as writing these crappy books. The more you write after so many years, the more you write 🙂 Be realistic.

I can't stand it anymore when I see the system giving out missions to engage with star girls 😅 It was okay at first

It's been like this since the first book Often new maps are opened suddenly before the old maps are finished

I endured it again and again, but in the end I couldn't endure it anymore. Are you serious about having a mentally retarded protagonist?

Just... The novel reflects the author. Personally, I think the character description in the novel is too childish. It seems very profound, but actually everyone can think of it. On the surface. None of the characters have brains, and the plot reminds me of an assembly line... Just like that, it seems like they are doing other things, but in fact they are doing the same thing over and over again. The writing style is also very awkward, what a good brother or something. If you want to say it is a novel, why not say it is a sketch of the character's growth experience? It's meaningless to do anything too short and win out of nowhere.

It's so embarrassing for a master to be at this level.

How does the operating officer do things? This book is obviously suppressed and not a normal comment. It is messed up.

Awesome, still updating. Raise your hand if anyone can still read this book after 500 chapters.

Personally, I feel that Stargirl and Star Coins were written down by the author. I mentioned earlier that Stargirl is extremely rare, but Stargirl is completely ruined. According to the author's writing, Stargirl can be controlled casually by a powerful force, and the system's function is basically equivalent to having no effect because all the extraordinary abilities are given by Stargirl.

This author is a writer who was pulled up by the times, just like the pig who was blown up by the wind. It cannot be said that he has no real talent and learning, but it cannot support his status as a great god. The "Little Soldier Legend" he wrote in 2003 became popular because there was nothing else to read. Now that there are endless books written by various platinum masters, his light has dimmed.

The further you go, the less you can stand it. In sci-fi StarCraft, it is normal for you to add a system, and the extraordinary system is barely passable. There is a setting of Star Girl in the back, and you can follow it to go out to fight. Later, it turns into a fantasy sect system. It feels like a hodgepodge, and it is still unpalatable. It really doesn't look like it was written by a great author, it might as well be an AI article!

The plot at the beginning felt far-fetched. The war between the guardians. The officers below actually thought that it would be fine if they didn't get involved. I never thought that my territory would be taken over by others. The benefits must go to the winner. As a local native, don't contribute your share. The protagonist did not encroach on their interests after arriving. Can't they even think clearly about such a simple truth? When outsiders invade, it is these indigenous officers who suffer the greatest losses. The protagonist is just a foreign guardian. He might be transferred in a few years.

I admit that I was really excited at the beginning, but what I wrote later was a mess.