Lost in the World of Hong Kong Island

Judging from the current trend, there is no way to finish writing about the real world if there are not even 10 or 8 pictures. Author, have you ever found that the amount of updates you make is unstable? Usually one chapter, sometimes two chapters. Is it really worth spending so much time and chapters to describe the real world? Many things in the real world cannot be written. It is dangerous and easy to get a 404. The model of the protagonist's copy or main world character (pig's foot) should not be too far off, otherwise it will be easy to cause trouble. When you find someone is targeting you, but you don't know who this person is, and your own strength is not strong enough, you can completely avoid it. If you can't afford to offend, you can always hide. Of course, the protagonist's initiative to join in can indeed advance the plot, but readers may not like it. You can use some counter-routines to get out of this pit as soon as possible. As a reader, I actually have a lot to say here, so I'll talk about it when I have the chance.

Don't rely too much on golden fingers. Strengthening yourself is fundamental.

This novel feels tasteless, and it would be a pity to abandon it.

I recommend the author to read "Alien Arrival". The framework of this book is similar to yours, but the writing is smoother and makes people want to read it. The framework of the author's book is very good, but the content is very blunt. The classic parts of the film have been changed beyond recognition, and the writing skills need to be improved.

It's written so completely that I don't even know what I'm talking about.

I was so confused when I read it that I didn't know what the author actually wrote.

The progress is slow, the author is also writing slowly, and the waiting is uncomfortable.

should be finished as the first map. The writing was okay, but the plot was a little slow. Generally speaking, it's okay except for some poisonous spots. Come on.

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I looked at more than 10 pictures and didn't understand anything

If you keep getting templates and the templates are damaged or taken out, wouldn't you be a useless person? It is better to have strong strength yourself

Wow! The first copy has more than 50 chapters.

Thanks to all book friends for reading and commenting. The first volume will be over soon. I struggled for a long time in the past two days and deleted most of the saved manuscripts. When I first designed the final scene, I wanted to write it according to the Taoist fighting method in "Ghost Fighting Ghost". Later, the more I wrote, the more I felt that it was written as a martial arts, which felt a bit delayed. If I have time later and if any book friends want to read it, I will compile it into an extra chapter for everyone. As for the content of the second volume, I have already started writing it. If you have any suggestions for this book or feel that it is not well written, you can put it forward in this comment, and I will use it to improve the second volume.

How should I put it? It's getting delayed. The second volume is so good, but it's just a pain in the butt when it's released!

Slow burn is a bit like playing a game, it's not a hack and slash skill. 😁

I'm curious why there are so few recommendation votes, so take a look

The foundation of martial arts is to be one with nature

Is there something wrong with this guy?

After reading it, it's too little. . The author writes very well, but there are too few

Why are you still waiting for an update? Is this the end? They are not next to each other anywhere!

I would like to thank all book friends for their reading and comments. The first volume also felt a bit too long. According to the outline, it should have ended around Chapter 30. But now I've added a little more content, I hope it won't disappoint book lovers. Because this is my first time writing, the pace is a little slow. The second volume will be adjusted, please rest assured. I have already decided on the next three worlds in outline. They are all old Hong Kong films, but there are still one or two, so please rest assured.