Fortunately, I Have a Practice Room

Chaos, just one word. There are currently three volumes: Desert Island, Pot, and Wizard. There are too many mysterious parts in the middle, and some of them are unfinished. Suddenly, I changed direction, switching from martial arts to infinite games, and then to Western fantasy. I feel that neither genre is fully developed, but neither genre is satisfying enough.

The main plot is messy and seriously inconsistent with the introduction. So far, it's just a fresh look.

I just read the first volume It feels pretty good, but what I lack is the thickness of the content. It seems to be promoting the plot, but that's all, it feels very thin. However, if you read it carefully, the plot arrangement is still clever, but because the tension is not enough, it seems like a castle in the air. You can indeed continue reading

I accidentally discovered this novel. I didn't understand it very well in the early stage, but I found it quite good after I got into it. There was not much span in the first few levels of the world. The basic 4 levels are gods. It felt too simple. I hope to write more and each world can be longer. After all, the protagonist does not have an obvious goal. I want to write more unique and original worlds.

I have monthly passes and starting coins, but I won't give them to you. Do you want them? Make a map of Warcraft's Frozen Throne and I'll give it to you.

I have returned and quit my original job. Before I starved to death, I decided to write novels full-time and update them steadily every day. This book "Fortunately I Have a Practice Room", I have to finish writing it no matter what. I have disappointed many people, and I will definitely live up to it this time. Come on, everyone!

Author, you might starve to death if you quit your job to write novels. To be honest, I read your book and I can't say it's bad, but it's really not a good book. The narrative of this little book is confusing, the plot twists are abrupt, and the geographical location and environment are poorly described. Maybe the writing is just okay.

I looked at more than 200 pictures at random. To sum it up in one sentence: It's pieced together with countless appendix stories. The protagonist has a problem, and as a result, he is suddenly reincarnated during the development process. He loses everything and starts from scratch. The further he gets, the lower he becomes. The key is that I don't know what to express. There are countless planes without changing a place, and then it suddenly ends without any problem.

If every world is finished, the protagonist will become invincible in every world. In this case, I think the score of your book will be improved to a higher level. Now, each world is only 10% to 70% advanced. There is no sense of excitement at all. It is very frustrating to watch. Each world digs a lot of holes... I suggest you watch "Mysterious Journey" again and then look at your own. Your structure is very similar, but yours is not refreshing enough.

Gradually getting better, starting from Lingu, the same feeling as at the beginning of the book is back. Don't worry about ascending the dimension. Ascension is better than ascending the dimension. It's just because the writing of the ascending dimension is messy and I dug a hole. I didn't write it carefully before I ascended the dimension again. Since there are concepts in the past dimensions, there is a high-dimensional world!

The author is good at writing the beginning. The beginning and setting of each world are OK, and the middle part is also okay, but each world escapes or jumps without an ending; you think you are reading a book, but in fact you are playing ten versions of the game, and you cannot pass each level.

This book is ruined by the fact that the main character has too many names. Just call him Su Qiulian at the beginning. After you are reincarnated, others will call you Chen Qingyan, and you can call yourself Su Qiulian. Because just looking at it, you don't know who the main character is? Without a positioning anchor point, the writing of Dimension Upgrade will be even more confusing!

I don't reject the setting of changing the world, but after changing the world, only the second life perfectly inherits the memory, and the rest are fragments. I only know that I am the reincarnation, especially the third life. I just throw away everything before, leaving only the setting of the practice room. It can be said The protagonist has been changed and turned into a licking dog. There are still many unresolved worlds, which gives people a very frustrated feeling. The protagonist's brain is not very good, and I am really speechless. The more I watch, the more frustrated I am. Really, seeing Anna constantly surrounding me really makes me sick to the core.

If I want to write too much, I will fall behind. The previous lives are just the foreshadowing and there is no need to go into too much detail. It is better to start from the life before I was promoted to the previous school. The previous lives can be abbreviated as plug-ins in the training room, or I can write a few extra chapters. The upper world is written more than the previous ones. The book is solid, there are no such strong plug-ins, the style has also changed, it is a bit fragmented, and there are too many parts in the previous lives, and there will always be some parts that have not been dealt with well. After reading, people just want to skip or abandon the book, and have not seen the upper world. I hope the author can gradually get better.

Changing the map was too fast and there was no logic at all. This novel seems to have been written by several authors and pieced together. It's too messy.

The author's ability to write the "ending" is too poor, and he writes about the theme of multi-world travel, which amplifies his shortcomings, resulting in a blunt ending to the short story, and even affecting the main story, creating a sense of confusion. The outstanding feeling is: the story ends not because the small world adventure has come to an end, but because the author feels that I should change the line.

The protagonist died in the second life because he was too greedy, as if he had lost his mind. I don't understand why the author wrote this, it's a bit baffling!

It's a mess, a book written by AI, right?

There is no main line, it is a mess, and the subject matter is wasted.

The process of reading this book - I was interested, I was happy, I was a little tired, I was confused, I was dizzy, and I left

The routine is the same, there is no new idea, it is always a brain in a vat, it is boring after watching too much. I have already tried to set up the doll several times, and I continue to do it. It is simply a fake plot.

Alas, the first few chapters were well written, but then the map changed after a little foreshadowing. This made me dizzy. I suggest the author change it when he has time. This kind of writing will really put off readers who just read it. The writing is very good. I suggest you learn from Shifang Wusheng. Although the map has been changed, there are still a lot of people chasing him.

Crazy nesting dolls, crazy digging holes. Without a complete story, what exactly do you want to express? The writing is so fragmented.

The natives have golden fingers and don't have a sense of immersion. . . .

It would be nice if it was refined in the early stage. At least subscriptions and the like will turn over a lot.

Writing novels is a process of accumulation. I think there are very few people who become popular. Most of them keep learning and accumulating in this industry, and later write novels that can make food and clothing, which later become a small hit and then become a big hit.

The third story is very interesting, and the concept of entering reality is also strange. But the first two stories have probably dissuaded some people.

In the desert island world, there were people from the upper world in the Heyang treasure house who said that the desert island had sunk into the lower world. The world tree obtained in the pot world was also said to be from the upper world. Then when the male protagonist ascended to the real world, he said that the world was divided into the upper world, the lower world, and the illusory world. So the upper world corresponding to the desert island world corresponds to the world tree. Is the upper world the world where the male protagonist comes now? Or is it that the illusory world is also divided into upper and lower realms?

I have read dozens of chapters The stitching is very good and there are new ideas. Good luck to the author.

The brothers have been cut off from meat again.