The Reborn Noble Mage Behind the Scenes

Since this post was created on June 2, 2023, I have watched the pigeons go from weekly to monthly updates. It was once thought that they would be given up, and then I actually saw the end of the day. It was really great

The author's writing skills are too strong... It's obvious that he is a master but not a master, but he is really strong at controlling the rhythm of the whole book so well. I hope he won't go too far in the future, otherwise the foreshadowing and details in the front will be a pity. The author's greatest advantage is that he weakens the player's sense of presence and balances the three key points of "the expansion of the world view", "the development of the main plot", and "the supplement of the main content by the side plots". He also uses some post-text explanations to supplement the worldview and make the whole world more real and concrete, which is something ordinary authors cannot do. But this also makes the rhythm of the whole novel difficult to control. And the entire book has been set in this main world. If the author continues to describe the "real world" or the "legendary world", the authenticity of the worldview will be damaged and the rhythm will be more difficult to control. I hope the author will clarify the writing content and theme By the way, Please do not let the players interfere too much with the main plot, otherwise the balance created by the author will be broken. The role of the players is to extend the world view, not to promote the main plot. Promoting the main plot should be the task of the protagonist or important character, otherwise the protagonist/important character's sense of existence will be reduced In any case, the author please maintain a good rhythm and advantage, come on (Please improve) By the way, it is too short

It's tied, but the local student gang who fully subscribed and had no money to reward shamelessly came to make a few comments without invitation. This is the first time I write a book review at Qidian. Please forgive me if it offends me (probably, there are no spoilers?): The first 40 or 50 chapters of this book are indeed slow to gain momentum and are a bit dull. Many chapters are just some settings, introductions to the background, etc., But it is a free chapter after all, so it is not a loss. But after I saw the plot of entering the academy, I slowly started to get addicted to it. I just opened it casually and took a look, but now I can't help but finish it in just a few days (it's only 510,000 words, so why don't you update it quickly!!!) After reading the first few dozen chapters, I kept saying that the main contradiction is the trend of the old and new aristocratic era, etc., And I always feel that the whole article is just like this. . . . Um. . . . It's a bit simple and ordinary, but after seeing the historical secret in more than 80 chapters that the moon was actually reversed, it made me feel better! ! I feel like the setting is very deep and I look forward to the follow-up expansion|ω•`) The title and introduction of this book are really too serious and comparative. . . . It's unremarkable. I almost missed this good book. The cover is also very ordinary (I don't even remember when I added this book to the bookshelf...) But! After actually opening it and looking at it! Dawei Tianlong! I can tell at a glance that you are not a serious person! This is an LSP that only reads countless books! Why can I see it? Of course it's because I am also an LSP (☆-v-) So why is the title and introduction of a book with such a naughty and bookish style so serious? (╯°Д°)╯┻━┻ Pigeon, your book title and introduction are really hard to attract. Hey, readers! If you can't change the title of the book, why don't you change the introduction? I have to complain about the protagonist's surname. I am so poisoned by the electromagnetic field that every time I see the protagonist's surname, I automatically pronounce it as Cavendish (-ι_- ) I never said how old I am, I just said that I haven't reached adulthood yet, and I don't know if the coming of age ceremony in this world is 2442, and the last time mentioned in the article is 2457, so the protagonist should be between 15 and 16 now. Is it so big? Although the protagonist is always Versailles, it is really interesting to read in the author's writing. Many plots make me feel secretly happy, and it is surprisingly immersive. This is indeed the result of the author's good plot development and successful character creation. The main character felt a little guilty towards the main character and compensated him for the dragon egg. I don't know why I was suddenly so excited by this plot. I started thinking about the day in the future when the Duke really wanted the main character to inherit the family business. The main character couldn't express it. I think my sister is quite suitable. I'm just an ordinary behind-the-scenes mage. I have seen a lot of people complain that the author always uses elegance to describe the protagonist, who is boring and coquettish. I have almost exhausted this word. Personally, I think it is okay, but if every time I write about the elegance of the protagonist, I can change it to one or two short descriptions of actions or expressions based on the plot. It would be better to use these descriptions to reflect the elegance of the protagonist instead of directly saying that he is elegant_(:3 ⌒ﾞ) . . . . I can't think of a specific description. Hahaha ,▔)ㄏ There are currently only 500,000 words, and there are not many supporting characters. The character creation of various supporting characters is not particularly rich and three-dimensional. However, each character is now relatively recognizable and basically has its own characteristics. For example, the Duke's father who is secretly narcissistic and uses his own books as famous quotes, there are The sister who forces Maomao to learn etiquette even if she doesn't want to use her brain, the second brother who once changed his gender and was played by tentacles, and the European emperor girl who sticks to Loli. They are not the kind of supporting characters that are very popular and flat. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. He should gradually enrich the images of various supporting characters in the future. In addition, I have a lot of senior sisters here! Look at how many roles she has! She has a mysterious background, and she must be a big shot! She is also a very independent and kind-hearted girl! They also exchanged love tokens (Da Wu)! Wouldn't it be a success to set up a welcome trap together! Although the protagonist is just craving for her fate feedback, Is it possible that I will be greedy for her body one day? ! ! Speaking of which, the special names of these months are really weird, but I really can't remember which month xx is, so it's very troublesome. Why not! Just use a special name when writing the month, and it's a win-win situation! In the end, there are basically only 10 points in each chapter! Some authors have more than 20 points! Do you want some coins? ! ! I saw that there was some talk about it, but I just finished it in a row, so I feel that although each chapter is really not too long, it's actually pretty good. Yes, but the author actually handles these aspects in a very detailed and appropriate way, and uses very concise language to describe it. (Personally, after all, I don't really want to see a series with many chapters, nothing new, and after reading it, I feel like I haven't seen anything at all, and it's just a boring game.) But that's it every day, if you follow up. It's really painful, but some plots are also necessary. It's impossible for every chapter to be so exciting. It's really easy to have a feeling of water (●—●) So, please give me more updates! !! Forget it, as long as this pigeon doesn't become a eunuch_(:* ｣∠)_ Hey, I actually have so many words in just bb and bb. If only I could be as good at writing papers (0 x 0)

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The author I thought But the author in reality

Once a virtual game comes out, the global gaming industry will be completely wiped out. . Speechless. A game can be made of yarn. I play Xiaoxiaole and your League of Legends is having fun, but I'm too lazy to play.

Once upon a time, I was also a pigeon. Until one day, a group of people held up matches and shouted: "Burn it, burn it." They came to my shop with ferocious faces. They blew up my bookstore and set fire to books one after another with matches. They searched frantically, searching. Finally, when there was only one door left in my bookstore, they finally walked away crying and shouting about updates and depositing manuscripts. I realized how hurtful it is to be short and weak. But, does Pigeon really have no manuscripts? ๛ก(ｰ̀ωｰ́ก)

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, the popularity is very high, and there are a lot of payments. I plan to buy a new car at the end of the year. I hope you can update a few more pictures, so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. 🤝

There is a shortage of books. Can any book friends recommend any novels with protagonists like Anvis, the kind of gentle and elegant people who speak and behave calmly and appropriately (no funny words, no rhetoric, and no bad words, I've had enough of this kind of thing 😭)

Come and recommend this book to everyone. I am short of books and am looking for high-quality western fantasy novels. At the same time, I will give away my exquisite small bookshelf Jidao Demon, Soul of Negri, Summoning Nightmares, Japanese Weird Creation, My Healing Game, Noble Mage Behind the Rebirth, My Cell Prison, Pseudo Prince, Wizard World, Lanke Chess, First Seeker, Necromancer and Super Cemetery, Battle for Paradise, Pokemon: The Dark Giant, Late Night Bookstore, Time Travel Begins with Bandits, Invincible Loneliness, Swordsmanship in the Snow, Naming Technique of Night, The Natives of this World Are Super Fierce, Starting with the Golems (Updates are stopped now, but the first 290 chapters are still enough) There are still some that I have forgotten or deleted before, I hope you can recommend more books to me!