
I've Been Trapped on the Battlefield for a Hundred Thousand Years
我被困战场十万年
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 97k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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23Chapters
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I don't understand, after spending 100,000 years fooling around with the gods, even a natural fool can become an extremely smart person.
Please finish writing Wu Ji. Such a beautiful novel is intermittently unfinished.
The content written by Lao Yu is still very good, including Supreme Bloodline, Black Mountain Prison Lord, Ancient Fighting Spirit, and Prison Town Bahuang. After reading them all, I wanted to read on, but they were just not good enough, alas. If I could persevere from Wuji, I would have become a god by now.
I remember when I first watched Wuji Peak, I was only in the second grade of junior high school, and in the blink of an eye I had been working for two years.
In the past, the author's writing was very good, but the first and second parts were unfortunately not as good as the second part.
What the author lacks is not only that the routines are a bit old, but also that he lacks the energy to fight and the passion he had before. If you don't care about your grades or external comments, just concentrate on writing and work hard for a month or two. If it works, then quit. It is better than procrastinating like this, being timid and only going backwards.
Let's talk about some suggestions. First: There are actually better reasons for memorizing the skills that the protagonist has obtained, such as the preaching of gods and men, which has its own magic. For example, the power of the soul has skyrocketed in a hundred thousand years and so on. Of course, this is just a very small place, so don't worry about it at all, just for fear that the gangsters will make an issue out of it. Second: Regarding the sister-in-law, the author does not need to spend so much ink on how she treats the protagonist. She can completely learn from the way Mr. Lu Da gets along with his sister-in-law in The Supreme Being. Because feelings are the hardest thing to write about, and if you don't grasp it accurately, it will arouse the disgust of female readers. Although this book caters to the male reader market, there are female readers after all. It would be bad if the author is not skilled enough and the writing is crooked. Third: Regarding daughters, there are many ways to tease children. How to write without embarrassment is what the author needs to improve. Fourth: Regarding the protagonist, I hope the author can shape his character well. It always feels wrong when he faces his sister-in-law. After all, he has lived on earth for more than 20 years, and children of this age have quite a lot of knowledge and experience. The two seasons I watched the variety show "Exciting Offer" were all fresh graduates. Their conversation and behavior are indeed different, plus he has a hundred thousand years of experience. Of course, everyone needs to grow up. This is a process that requires experiencing the world to change. I only hope that the author can portray this character well.
Back then, if I persisted in writing, I would have become a god. Now I can only test the waters again.
Twelve years ago, I held a Bird mobile phone with a black and white screen and read "The Ultimate Inheritance". The enlightenment novel has surpassed Dou Po and Tomb of Gods in my personal heart. Twelve years later, I haven't pursued it, I don't want to pursue any novel, because it can no longer ignite the absurd passion in my heart. Even so, I also enjoyed reading the beginning of the book Entering the Palace. Perhaps it is the author's personal reasons. It is difficult to judge. In my personal opinion, if the author had persisted in the past, he would have become a great master. But for me, "Ultimate Heritage" is a masterpiece, and the author has long been among the greats.
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