Douluo's Martial Soul Devil Fruit

The pictures are nice

Author, have you ever thought about it? In the original work, Tang San became a god, so why did you join in to protect the Shrek Seven Monsters? ? ? You are the protagonist, not Tang San. You surround Tang San and want to have a relationship with Tang San, so you fall into the lower class. Don't you decide the characters in your books by yourself? If you want to be more awesome, you can be more awesome, why have to help Tang San all the way

With all due respect, emotional drama is really not good, I suggest you stop emotional drama!

Seeing that Shrek didn't come in, he came in and gave two recommendation votes to show his favor.

The heroine appears out of nowhere. The routine used 20 years ago is still very stupid. The reading experience plummets with the addition of a heroine. If you watch Devil Fruit, I will watch the rubbish emotional drama you wrote. It's fine if it's good. Look at what the hell you wrote.

So the plot, how should I put it, is half original plot and half original. I may be conservative in saying that it may not be half original! ! ! After seeing the fairy grass part, I didn't want to read it anymore. I couldn't bear it any longer. I tried not to complain and read the comments, but then I really couldn't bear it anymore. Participating in the Soul Master Competition for a few soul bones is a bit retarded. If you have the strength, just kill and rob them! Just kill people, destroy their bodies and wipe out all traces. The plot of Douluo Continent is only a partial microcosm of the entire Douluo Continent, and the pattern is too small. I said I didn't want to follow Tang San, but I still followed him, changing the name from Holy Soul Village - Junior Soul Master Academy - Star Dou Forest - Soto City - Shrek Academy - Soul Fighting Arena - Tiandou City - Lanba Academy - Immortal Grass Secret Land - Soul Master Competition. These locations are key to the plot! It's not just revolving around Tang San, it's just artistic processing. This is called hiding one's ears and stealing the bell. Moreover, the protagonist's character is not like a time traveler, he always thinks about Tang San's favors before he became a god. It's a bit mean, to put it in a bad way, but there's a better way to say it, which is to lick a dog🐶! Not much to say, now that I have resisted the drug, I am really good at it. Come on, author, and make something different. You don't need to change it later. Just copy and paste it. Just copy the plots of other fans. Why bother to think hard to find a suitable excuse to approach Tang San! Just copy and paste! As a time traveler who knows everything about the plot, there is nothing that cannot be changed!

This author is good at everything, especially when he humbly admits his mistakes, but he refuses to change his life or death 🙄

It's a pity, it's obviously a good subject, but it's written in a mess The protagonist I saw is just a licker and a waste. There is no emotional story. We started to have some feelings for each other but then they became a couple inexplicably. After that, the male protagonist became a henpecker. You are not allowed to go to the Soul Fighting Arena, and you are not allowed to go to the Star Dou Forest. As soon as the heroine goes away, she gets angry, loses her temper, and plays cold war. The male protagonist is like a licking dog without dignity trying to please. Besides, this is a world where strength is valued. I say all day long that I don't want to be so tired. I just want to be with my wife and have a baby in the future. Judging from the foreshadowing, the heroine's family should be very powerful. If you don't have the strength, who will look up to you? One year older than Tang San, his soul power is several levels higher. It was mentioned before that it was level 35, but when Xing Dou encounters it, it becomes level 32 again. I don't see anyone practicing hard. You are nothing but trash. Really, Bai Xi has such a good theme and gives a golden finger like a Devil Fruit for each level. I don't know if the rest of the writing is good or not. I died of poison after reading the first part.

Tang San, the double-standard dog🐶, is not slaughtered and kept for the New Year. The protagonist follows Tang San throughout the whole life and even opens a medical clinic. You are really free.

Kneel down and lick Tang San in disguise, the heroine is still a passerby, A, B, B, D, the protagonist is very low level

The title of the book also attracted me. After reading the introduction, I quickly lost motivation. I think one devil fruit is enough. A bunch of this would be too much. I knew without looking that it would collapse later. In fact, if you want to read a fanfic, you don't necessarily need the protagonist to be awesome. Instead, use your own strengths to the fullest.

The material is okay, but it's a pity that it's poorly written. It starts with Tang San being licked, which is too embarrassing. When he meets a woman outside, he becomes a serious dog licker. I strongly don't recommend it. If you want to see the main character being a dog licker, you can watch it. It will make you angry.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw the protagonist's strict wife control. It was the first time I met the protagonist who was so licking. It would be boring if the time traveler didn't reveal the original wife. I just randomly found a girlfriend from a passerby, and I couldn't imagine the image at all. I subconsciously felt that the protagonist's girlfriend was not as beautiful as the original wife. I subconsciously felt that She is just a passerby woman, and the protagonist is like a supporting character. No matter how strong she is, her girlfriend is still a passerby. She cannot compare with the protagonist of the original book. Even the Oscar is better than you. And the protagonist is called "Lin Er" and the supporting character is gone. The title of your book is called The Strongest Supporting Actor 😂😂😂. I don't want to give you any money for this book. Deleted, deleted, deleted.

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that I lost my mind and didn't do anything to get along with others. I continued on the land of Ha Tang Family. The God Realm is also called Tang Realm. Faced with the evil soul master, Tang Zi ignored it, and Orange directly attacked with heavy blows. The double standard king tut tut tut. It is only suitable for some three filial sons. It is really a filial piety. I don't understand who is the protagonist. Is it useful to add a person like you on the basis of the original work? If you have a golden finger, you don't want to be king and leave opportunities to others. You'd rather be selfless. In the future, you don't need to be paid by your boss at work. Why don't you just work for free?

I vomited that the new book section was all about Douluo and some of the books were so fucking outrageous

It is recommended that authors should not write heroines just for the sake of writing heroines.

This heroine is just a vase. Will the author know how to write it? Other people's fan fiction surpasses the original work, but as for you, there is no vase in the original work of Douluo Dalu. You wrote a heroine and a vase. I am speechless. How do you grasp the readers? The scene I least want to see is also a talent. I suggest you write it backwards in the future. If you want to write something, just reverse it and you can almost watch it. Although I don't feel sick about it, I still feel nauseous. It's so useless. This heroine is so fucking hard. Shou, he used the protagonist as a shield when we first met him. When he saw how powerful the 10-year-old protagonist was, he still had to run behind the protagonist for protection. He didn't consider others at all and just thought that he was fine. I think he was selfish and wouldn't joke with other people's lives. Since he was being hunted, would he not know the strength of the place? The protagonist was like a licking dog, and he protected such a person. I read a fantasy novel a few days ago. The protagonist just left when faced with this situation and would not be exploited at all. As for this book, I am speechless.

A level 99 Ultimate Douluo, plus two super Douluo, more than ten soul Douluo besieged a 100,000-year-old soul beast, and got injured... As expected of you, author

Be careful, the third young master of the Tang family will sue you for plagiarism.

A fellow Douluo man forcibly inserted an eighth monster, which looked awkward. He also took seven monsters to penetrate the super god, and the Taotie was turned into ashes with one shot.

Don't you feel uncomfortable reading it after you've written it?

As for the lower world of Douluo, do you think that once you become a god, you will be able to break through the Douluo plane and become a super god? You, the Douluo God, are probably not even cannon fodder. If the Douluo God could travel across planes, then so many higher worlds would have discovered it long ago, and Douluo would have been destroyed long ago.

Wang Xue is useless and a lot of trouble

The name Lin Er gets 0 points.

Emmm, the writing is poor, but I can barely follow the plot. It's too much to discourage, so that's it.

It feels like the plot is similar to a martial arts novel from more than ten years ago. The protagonist and heroine lived in seclusion and then made little progress in their training. Later, the heroine is caught, and then the protagonist works hard to save the heroine. This plot is too cliche.

A protagonist who talks about not wanting to join the academy but always goes to "Good Sword"

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The writing is pretty good, but it feels a bit too ordinary.

The protagonist is ruthless and unrighteous