My Son Wang Teng Has the Makings of a Great Emperor

Just a reminder to the author, "Covering the Sky" is a training ground for the desolate world, where it seems that whoever is strong is right, and the only purpose is to select the strongest. There is no fixed protagonist. As for your Heavenly Dao suppression, it would be best to remove it after Ye Fan comes to Beidou, otherwise it will be very depressing and unlikable to read.

The concept of this book First of all, this book is based on the novel "Covering the Sky," but it is different from "Covering the Sky." There will definitely be new things and events, and changes are inevitable. If there were no changes, what would be the difference between it and "Covering the Sky"? Secondly, I will only write about the world of "Covering the Sky".

The writing is alright, it has the feel of *Covering the Sky*, but I want to ask, in Chen Dong's novels, which male lead is always fawning over another man? In this novel, Wang Teng is constantly fawning over, protecting, and taking care of Ye Fan, almost to the point of becoming his lackey at the beginning. On the contrary, Ye Fan is quite annoying, always easily turning against Wang Teng.

Wang Teng is here.

The Northern Emperor, who only reached the Dao Palace in ten years, is truly formidable. It's really unnecessary to suppress one's cultivation level just for the protagonist. I came to see the Great Emperor Wang Teng; even if Ye Fan didn't appear, I wouldn't feel anything.

Since Wang Teng was chosen as the protagonist, there's no need to pay too much attention to Ye Fan. Kill him if you must; cultivation is inherently defying the heavens. Besides, the protagonist's equipment isn't up to par. Ye Fan has several elixirs of immortality and the Root of All Things' Mother Qi. The protagonist's brush should at least require nine kinds of immortal gold.

I'm thinking, in the "Covering the Sky" trilogy, powerful beings in the future can interfere with time and space. The protagonists in fanfiction are all afraid of this, which raises a time paradox: if future beings can interfere with time and space, then why can't you in the future? If you can't, does that mean you're not strong enough or you're dead? Since dying sooner or later is inevitable, why not die in the best of times?

I heard it's a comedic style? Okay, I'm off then.

An Miaoyi accepted it, who's next?

I've read about twenty chapters, and it's very well written. I'd like to offer a suggestion, but you've turned Wang Teng's talent, which is supposed to be that of an emperor, into that of a nobody. He's even been mocked for not being worthy of the title of young emperor. This is the treatment you'd expect from a protagonist in a story about a useless character with no background.