Tokyo Juggernaut 2077

The author's writing style is very mature, so he shouldn't be a novice. I think it is better than the other Tokyo Sword Master. Then there are the disadvantages. First, the plot is too compact and makes people breathless. The first chapter has just been traveled, the seventh chapter has paid off the debt, and the second chapter has even killed the first mini-BOSS. The average reader has not yet realized what the mechanical white clothes are doing. Is it really necessary to be in such a hurry? Chapter 23 of Lord of Best Friends is still buying clothes. Practice your expansion skills, add more reactions and psychological activities of passers-by people around the protagonist, and add more perceptions and reactions of others to the protagonist's behavior. Write more fighting plots and be more detailed - the rhythm of killing Bai Yi in Chapter 50 is good. Second, the author has too many personal items. It's not that you can't bring personal items, but you can't bring too much, and you can't express your attitude towards these personal items. Instead, you should describe them from a neutral perspective. For example, it is obvious from the two heroines' reactions to women's rights that the author is against women's rights. And Wollman - the one who came up has not been falsified yet? I felt numb when I saw it. For example, The Three-Body Problem has a wg plot, but he describes it as if it were a historical event, without judging whether it is good or bad, right or wrong. The third thing is the story, which is too streamlined and does not give readers a strong motivation to follow it. Obviously debt is a good main plot driver. The money is paid back before the reader feels the oppression caused by debt. The protagonist is in a life-and-death struggle. There is no sense of crisis yet. He is defeated with a golden finger and is subjected to school violence without even a little humiliation. Come on, Hua's solved it in one go. At least the Battle of the Sphere made people slap the marriage certificate on their faces... A protagonist's needs can always be solved within ten chapters. How can this book be written well... Finally, is Hoshino Shiori's prototype Sakura Futaba from p5?

I feel like the biggest problem with this book is that in a cyberpunk worldview, can ordinary people still go to school?

A wonderful idea. Why don't normal people without prosthetics install two additional arms? Wouldn't it be cool to have two more arms? It can also increase work efficiency.

😭Come back, Tokyo Sword Master😭 🌟My most proud belief🌟 ⚡️The night of Gen is vivid in my mind⚡️ 😭Tears are flowing inexplicably😭 💥Vaguely remember the dragon ghost face💥 👍and the powerful psychic power👍 ⚡️Repelled all the enemies⚡️ ✨Stay up all night and don't feel tired✨

There are too many meaningless questions, not interesting, and there are too many inner descriptions. This kind of writing method of analyzing one's own private novel is too petty. Describe more battle plots, use golden fingers to explore the end of force, and blow away all obstacles!

I added a bookshelf to high school. I've graduated from college and started working, but I haven't finished it yet.

Draw the costume of the male protagonist when he goes on a mission.

I just hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, I really enjoyed this book.

I never expected that someone so well written could actually be a eunuch.

Did the author write poorly? Sorry, it was your posts that lowered my initial impression of this book, but after reading more than thirty chapters, I still found it to my liking. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and the author is not a five-star master who can reconcile all kinds of flavors. If you don't like it, please click out and read the one you like. If you don't like it, just "he tui" when you read it. What do you want other people to think? Ask yourself, is this book a novice? Isn't the logic written by the author consistent? Although the protagonist is a bit impulsive, his IQ is still online, right? Are you really here to find your favorite book? Can't there be more love in this world?

It's a very good book. Why do I feel like so many people are teaching the author to write books?

I watched it with Tokyo Kendo in 20 years ago. I didn't expect that almost six years have passed by in a flash. I don't know how the author is doing part-time. It's good to have time to write. At least I know that the author is still there.

The heroines are quite attractive, but unfortunately the plot progresses at a strange pace in the middle. The protagonist suddenly changes from a lone wolf swordsman to a gang leader who uses the shell of the Black Dragon Club to rise to power.

😰Won the Easter match

I read a lot of people's complaints about the background. I didn't read it, but just by looking at the resume, I can tell that the author actually wanted to borrow Cyberpunk 2077. Those who have played it will find that they borrowed the background, but did not use the name.

It was updated unexpectedly, and I saw that it was discontinued or completed. Finish the book and end suddenly, you can bet on your luck

The author either needs someone to py or recommend, and a book list is fine but not very useful. You have to know that this book of yours was discovered after I flipped through the recommended list to number 3-400. You feel that no one can discover your book unless you are addicted to novels or have nothing to do on vacation, and happen to be interested in this category. No matter how good your writing is, it won't be popular if no one reads it.

The more I read it, the more I like it. I subscribed and added a two-month pass. I hope the author can maintain his style and write slowly without losing his standard.

This book is a surprise, unexpectedly beautiful. Why is it not popular? . .

😡 This book is dead, alive and dead, and it keeps doing sit-ups. Please give the author a happy ending and just end it in an outline.

In the Lifetime series, I watched it during the 21-year lockdown period. In the blink of an eye, four or five years later, this is even more true.

Ennnnnn, keep doing sit-ups, I almost thought there was hope for continuous updates, hey...

I added bookshelf in 21 years, and I am still writing about it now You can sit at the same table as Fist of Utopia

The classic soul-traveling game starts by taking the blame and taking the blame for its predecessor. Nowadays, there are so many authors who write like this. If they don't do this, they don't know how to start the game.

It's not easy for authors now, so come on

The author ID relies on his familiarity. Is he writing about Aiyin fanfiction?

I put it down before because of the update, but after picking it up and re-reading it, I found it to be a pretty good work. (The following content may contain spoilers) The bookshelf I added a few years ago was cut in half when I read Yagyu and was about to reveal the darkness and secrets that made people worry about what happened to Hoshino. After that, the update frequency will be twice a month and once a month. What a pity. In general, if you want to read cyberpunk, dystopia, raw ambiguity, and an unsociable male protagonist, then this is a very good novel. What I want to say is that there are too few novels that have all of the above elements at the same time, even on Nikagaru (Kakuyomu Kadokawa, novelist syosetu). Personally, I like them very much. I am not in a hurry to prove how profound my core is, I am in a hurry to advance at a more enjoyable pace in three chapters, and I am in a hurry to make people laugh with a bloody plot. A lot of it is about struggling with thinking and expressing oneself. However, even so, the circle of people who like this kind of novel is destined to be relatively small, but those who like it will like it. In the end, I am destined to switch from business writing to self-expression within the circle. In terms of update frequency, it is not a bad thing, but it seems serious because the entertainment bubble has not been created, there are few resources, and competition is fierce. As for the daily light websites I read, they usually update once a week or every half month. In short, it's just a few thoughts about the untimely development of the work. If, I mean if, it is placed on a Japanese novel platform, the results should be pretty good. In the future, there may be comics, voice actors dubbing, and PV trials, which may be more in line with the spiritual core there.

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